AbhIya FF - Yellow Peonies - Chapter V Page 13 - Page 6

amazing update!!!!!!!
liked the fight scene...brilliantly written!!!!!!!!👏
so panchi is danish's soulmate...i also dont want abhay to save her😆
abhiya scene in the end was awesome

wow great story pl\z update soon
it's a wonderful story
thanks for the pm

Awsome blossom.Ttly luvd it.Thanx 4 pm

nice update. i really like the way you are writing this story,

awesm update..brillient...waiting wht vl happen nw...n i dnt want abhay to help bloody panch...plz ...
hope pia vl undrstnd abhy n abhiya 2gethr...

Raffella.. 🤗 that's a good name dear..!
coming to the chapter.. I've already told you that you write brilliantly..!! the fight scene was beautifully written..!
Piya's words helped Abhay to get up and fight back..! lovely..!!

Piya surely loves her family a lot..! she asked Abhay to heal Panchi even though she was his enemy's soul mate..!!

update soon dear.. :) :)

fab update.so abhay was angry dat pia hadn't come to cheer him & got pumped up d moment she connected to him.pia had asked abhay to heal panchi & i do feel that he might listen to her.u hav a unique style f writing & m really luvin it. Thanx 4 pm & nice name:)

FABULOUS UPDATE!!
BRILLIANTLY WRiTTEN!
Danish asked 4 this!Challenging Abhay that too when Piya is involved boy u were waking up a dormant Volcano!
Loved it when Abhay's heavenly blue eyes searched 4 his soulmate in d crowd 4 his support nd mentally being angry with her too.
So finally Piya is also softening with an overwhelming feeling of love towards Abhay nd way she fought 4 his life was just great.
Loved the post fight meeting of ABHIYA.Abhay doesn't want 2 heal panchi! Lol i also don't want.
Overall u are a superb writer.
Our forum is already adorned with some of the best writers nd u are a recent addition.