Murder in Retrospect.Last Chp P139,140 Feb13 - Page 79

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

omg dishu 🤣 🤣 abhay nd pia's acting nd abhay's foolish act realy cracked me up🤣

Originally posted by: xxAqeelahxx

Oh my god this was just so funny , Pia could not tolerate what Jeev said ... oh coz Abhay is so sweet ...

Wonder what Jeev will say about Maya now :)

Originally posted by: bonna123

hi disu di. I am bonna. Great update and thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read i really enjoy reading this story of your
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Divya6696

awesome awesome awesome Dishu..!!! well.. firstly.. thank you so much for updating.. I was going to ask for one today..
one hell of a hilarious update..!!! from the beginning to the end.. I couldn't stop laughing..!! especially the part from Piya entering Jeev's office.. Uff.. they can't even act.. Piya was shouting at Jeev for calling Abhay all of those.. hehe..
ah so the name's disclosed.. wanting to know Jeev's part of the story..
update sooner na please this time.. :)

Originally posted by: Divya6696

ah and one more thing.. I haven't read the original story.. but from what you write.. Madam Christie must have done it fabulously.. but please don't call your version sloppy.. this is so so so good..!!! it keeps me away from reading the original work.. I agree Madam Christie had done really good.. but you are awesome as well yaar..!!! take some credit to yourself for its adaptation on Abhiya.. I guess this is the only FF where they don't have to fight the world to be together but are together to fight..!!!

Originally posted by: koli97

wahooo I love Abhay reaction hear divorce file😆...love all conversation.. .continue asap😊

Originally posted by: spn-abhay

Rofl
it was a super hilarious update dishu.aww abhay is such a sweetheart.pia literaly gav him a heart atack by saying 4 divorce.lol.the jeev-abhay convo was damn gud.n then pia barging in n jeev reasons 4 divorce were awesum.lol.domestic violence,womanizer n upmost impotent.
rofl
continue soon want to knw wat jeev has to say ol about it.

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

that was super awesome dishu!! 👏 incredible!! you are doing a fabulous job!!!

oh...😆 abhay's reaction to the divorce thing was just awesuum...!! i knew this exactly would be his reaction.. 😆 it was truly melodramatic!! n abhay did a bad acting which wasnt surprising!...😆 n pia going to manage the matter did even worse!! 🤣 The advocate was intelligent and caught them red-handed which was quite expected...!!😛 And pia had to speak out the truth...now lets see what's jeev's reaction would be..😉 plz carry asap...😊