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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello guys,i am writting one new ss !!hope you all will going to like it !!
i am awake with the headache and also with stomach pain!!it was unbearable to sit also!!my whole body was paining it feels like someone is beating me with the stick !!with lots of strugle i manged to sit !!taking the support of wall!but the pain grr that was unbearable to ressist !!i tried to assume i see its a dark place !!i scared of dark !!i tried hard to standup but i cant my legs were trapped in a silver like i am in a mental hospital!!i dont where i am right now and even i dont know what the hell is going on ??suddenly a door a women is coming toward a ray of hope come that i can get out of here !!but she looks like a p**n actress !!she started looking like she can seen inside the cloth and examing my body parts!!i feel like i will rip him apart in two peices!i am feeling restless that i cant even protect myself !!she with shameless attitude said get ready you have to show your f**k style today!!i screamed at her loudly and throw the plate she "show this attitude on the bed sweetz!with the ..she smile and leaved!!now some things are coming into my mind that me piya dobrial is in big trouble
this update is from my selfphone so if there is any mistake plzz forgive me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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not to worry your any mistake please continued the story and me your pm lists👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome. 👍🏼 Please continue and PM me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: barki

not to worry your any mistake pleasecontinued the story and me your pm lists👏

I am glad that you liked it !!there are lots more in this ss but two comment how can you expect me to write!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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the story seems good😉 continu soon & pm me😃
dont worry u wuld surly get more replies😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: renu4u

Awesome.👍🏼 Please continue and PM me.

I am sorry dear my lappy has been broken so it will be really difficult for me to pm anybody hope you will forgive me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shria

the story seems good😉 continu soon & pm me😃
dont worry u wuld surly get more replies😉

i dont think i will going coz the story line is very diffrent from any other ss they have read!!thanku so much sweetz i am glad that you liked my ss but i cant pm you my lappy has been broken!so cant pm anybody the update is from my selfphone hope you will forgive me!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey sis awesome storyline, I loved it, but I hope u are not going to hurt me this time as u give us so awesome concept and u don't contunue them, u know na sis how much I love all ur concepts and waiting for all ur updates but u don't update and continue all, I am really hurt for this reason sis. 😭 Anyways as always this concept is superb so if u don't want to hurt me more continue it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sis, i dunno what to say...👏
it's awsome... da concept is amazing...as always👏
luv oll ur ss's n ff's...😃
pia dobrial in trouble as usual...😆😆
continue...SOON...😆
but m very angry frm u...😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rmuk

Hey sis awesome storyline, I loved it, but I hope u are not going to hurt me this time as u give us so awesome concept and u don't contunue them, u know na sis how much I love all ur concepts and waiting for all ur updates but u don't update and continue all, I am really hurt for this reason sis.😭Anyways as always this concept is superb so if u don't want to hurt me more continue it.

Sister ji ,you have made me deepu aunty who makes plan btw my lappy has been broken sis that is why i cant update and i dont know how long i will take to purchase one!!anyways i will going to update them also as i promise!!i am also tumne itne dere se post i know if i write bad then also you will going to come to praise me!!

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