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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

That was such a beautiful update Indu 👏 Poor Abhay, what had happened in the past that has left such an emotional scar on him? 😭 Poor Pia 😭 She loves him but still she cannot profess her love and she seems to be locked up in an asylum? 😭 In the beginning was Abhay talking to his dad? Seems like it. I suppose he cheated on Abhay's mom n then deserted her. But y did she leave Abhay? Didn she realise that he would be shattered? Indu I cant bear to see Abhay in so much pain 😭 Looks like he had already lost everything n now Pia too? Please dont let Pia leave him please 😭

Abhiya memory was so beautiful 😳 but when I think of the present 🥺 Gosh Abhay is inflicting so much of pain on himself. I wish u would have some mercy on him I am really curious to know what happened in the past 😭

Beautifully written Indu 👏 U know how to portray the raw emotions of a character so beautifully 👏

Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

OMG!!!! indu such an amazing update👏 U al write so well😃 I so luvd the update❤️ So whom was abhay talking to???wat went wrong b/w abhiya???continue soon

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

wow great story plz update soon
it's an awesome story
thanks for the pm

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sain (nick name)

@abhaylovepia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

its good but very short want to read more😭

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sadia

@Sukirticious

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Nice up date ,flash back and present mixture ,i like it ,thanks for pm

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621511

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Good work dear ...i wonder what happened with abhiya ,...in flash back and in present story is very nice ...please dear up date jaldey ker diya kero ...thanks for pm

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

wahooo sooo lovely...but soo pain...wish 2 wht happen?plzz update asap...thanx 4 pm me😊

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Well written!
But the thing is, who was Abhay talking to??

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Divya6696

@Divya6696

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

Indu.. it was beautiful dear.. lovely..
I am very much eager to know what went wrong between Abhiya.. so wrong that even on loving Abhay so much Piya opts to stay away from him..!

update soon dear.. waiting for it..!