Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148) - Page 59

Originally posted by: Bleak_House

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Wonderful update tanzie 👏 brilliant!!! 👏
This update was completely entertaining and consists of factual details written quite tactfully and beautiful style.
👏 the presentation of words with fantastic and beautiful technique as always made this update even more interesting! ⭐️ bravo tanzie!! 👏 Thanks so much Indu. you never fail to praise me. you and Mandy always has to go overboard in praising my writing. 😆

The courtroom..the eerie atmosphere of vampire world and the proceedings..everything were described distinctly without leaving any details. The strange vampire law and stupid laws it consisted were enjoyable to read!!
The moment abhay,pia kol saw ragini ,their behaviour and look of astonishment was indeed very aptly written!!
kol was surprised at ragini's behaviour and it was expected that he wnt leave this matter without searching for the cause further! Kol is intelligent and it wont be a surprise if he finds the whole thing in no time!! Kol is very intelligent and smart and it's his wife's sister we are talking about so just cant avoid him or say she doesnt know him. family. so it had to come in Kol's notice.

poor pia,she was nervous..but that was obvious! She was in sc court for the first time in her life ,fully ready to defend abhay when she meets ragini whoz long dead!...but the good thing is she fortunately collected herself and did her job that too pretty well!! So thats commendable and that is why she is pia ,the only human who dared to love abhay!!

Pia went to meet abhay and again a perfectly well written part! Their longing,worry,fear and above evrything their love shone bright!! Am sure it will soon unite them once again!! 😊 Pia was always brave, daring and reckless when it comes to Abhay na. here goes too. she has to save Abhay. for the first time she got a chance to save Abhay instead of vice versa.

So now its jey who called mohini at 2a.m! Hmm...the game is sure becoming interesting!! I see mohini still has her sense of humour intact when she asked him to keep a watch!! I wonder what jeh plans to do and how mihini plans to use him... 🤔 you know tanzie its been said by a famous novelist that a fiction without humour is lifeless like a plant without its colour!! And thats were ur brilliance lies,because in your work specially this one we always get to have some wonderful humourous moments with some ace dialogues!!! ⭐️ this gift is rare and you have it!! So...👏 👏
Now pamela..she is surely taken aback by pia swift move and knowledge! And next she is going to meet abhay to confuse him more so that he loses the battle..hmm..it will sure create a great deal of trouble considering the way abhay is behaving already but again am sure this wont be able to do any permanent damage! Thanks so much. this complement seriously means a lot to me since i always thought my sense of humour sucks 🥱 but i always had plan to trickle humour moments in the court. i hope it pulls off.

Overall great update!!! 👏
You always manage to keep the tension intact so wonderfully..😳 ...awaiting the next part eagerly!! Please carry soon! 🤗 thanks so much. this really means a lot to me when it comes from such a prolific writer like you 🤗

Originally posted by: aku0705

finally u updated...fabulous update

👏👏👏

.hope Aryan does something

nice banner ..

by the way what is alibis ?😕

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

wonderful update

superbly written...seriously the rules of this Spn courts are indeed ridiculous.

i really wanna know how aryan would get the info from mohini's side.can't wait for the meeting b/w pamona and abhay...may be he might catch her. But i really wonder why didn't mohini tell pamona about abhay considering ragini had a serious relationship with him and she should have known that abhay would catch her.

waiting for ur next update

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

Thanks so much Juhi. Pamina didn't do her homework all. she has other things to deal you see and Mohini wont be happy about it. everyone is hoping her hair color will change in the middle of the court.. ok i will consider it 😉 😛 😆
it is indeed the prison 😆

before calling your comment big look at manasa's comment 😆

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

Thanks so much Juhi. Pamina didn't do her homework all. she has other things to deal you see and Mohini wont be happy about it. everyone is hoping her hair color will change in the middle of the court.. ok i will consider it 😉 😛 😆
it is indeed the prison 😆

before calling your comment big look at manasa's comment 😆

Originally posted by: sukugeny

Awesome update tanzie...sorry cant comment last ..stuck wth studies...uss mohini n nkli ragini ki..aisi ki taisi...nelpolish...rofl..n tumhare talent ka jvab nhi..LAPTOP...chating..by god tanz tumhe kitna dimag lgna pdta hoga na...i really always adore ur writing n mistry.

ye lo...yha to Zor ka Zatka Tanzie ne hume lga diya...by JEH RETURN...god!

bt ek bat hai...Wht a suspense yr!!

FAB.
BT U R ALWAYS MY FAV. n FANTABULOUS WRITER...love YOU...

Originally posted by: kuttu

I thought the trail will get over. Looks like Mohini and Abhay both of them got the shock of their life. Hope Aryan knows what he is gettting into. He seems to be a little impulsive kind at times which results in a series of reaction from Mohini. so waiting for the trail to end now.

Originally posted by: didlr

too gud

nyc story, u have taken real pains to make such a nyc plot

Hope to read soom😊