BOOK 2 ABHIYA FF MY DESTINY update pg 77 1 AUGUST - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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arae!!!!response too milna he tha ,akhir ine acche story joo hai...👍🏼

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sissy congratz for book 2 and i feel u are going to make it more special

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hey neetu...congrats for book 2...🥳

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chapter 23 kaha hai dear????

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congratzzz neetz 4 book 2
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keep going yar

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THANK YOU FOR LIKING THIS FF.I AM HOPEFUL THAT YOU ALL WILL LIKE BOOK 2.I M UPDATING MY NEXT CHAPTER
CHAPTER 23
AT DOBRIAL MANSION,MUMBAI
Madhu is delighted to hear those words coming from Akash's mouth. Nothing in the world could explain his happiness. The tears is welling out her eyes. she spoke' missed you too abhay. Let's go inside. panchi is too waiting for meet you'madhu

They proceeded inside the home. The raichands are already sited in the Hall. The moment abhay entered along with madhu and his mother. Panchi could believe her eyes to find akash in standing front of her. He hugged her'hi birdie'

she is shocked to the core to hear such coming from akash which reminded her of misha's words that he is changed a lot 'abhay my bratty is right you have changed .i never accepted it from you'

'it is just miniature of abhay'alisha

'MOM, you always me scold for fights .Look bratty initiated it' abhay

Haseena showed signaled him to sit. he walked towards kabir said 'bro can you shift a bit'

'ofcourse little bro' kabir

Abhay sited between kabir and jeh with sulky face'you also tease me.let sid bro came than i tell'

Madhu is silently watching the strong bond between akash and the raichands. She is delighted to see that the raichands are took good care of him.

'Thank you mrs raichands for taking care of him.welcome to back to your family.i guess you stay with us' madhu

Abhay very next moment looked at his family drooped face on hearing madhu's words. He witnessed a fear of losing him in his family eyes.It is unknown to madhu that he could never leave them.He is immediately proceeded towards his mother and hugged her said' your son can never leave you'. this made their faces lit up with happiness.

He still holding his mother's hand spoke to madhu 'I may sound rude madhu aunty but she is my mother. i am his youngest son. A son never leave his mother.i never leave this beautiful family'

'i am grateful to have son like you'haseena

'i am blessed to be your and dad's son..bratty you won't rid of my teasing for many centuries to come' abhay

Arnab thought in mind'they are done magic to him'

'yes arnab,it is magic, the magic of love,a family which made me laugh finding me depressed ,a helping shoulder was always there for me, can always look up them in need of any problem, smiled with my happiness, understood my needs without even telling.Tell me uncle why wouldn't i love this family' abhay

'i didn't offer anything 'madhu

'Do need aunty, we can't eat human food being supernatural except jeh'abhay

'what do you mean you can't' madhu

'abhay and his family can't human food. They can't digest it .They have their special food 'arnab

'i am upset when i through, i won't eat your delicious food. Jeh can have our share' abhay

'Yes aunty, i heard a lot from him'jeh

Pia dragged misha into corner of hall said 'Do we have wine in your house'

Misha looked suprised on this question 'since when you started to drink'

'shut up mish,mom look disappointed not able offer anything .it is for them' pia

'you turned mad, they can't drink this'misha

'mish abhay told me,they can have wine. please can help me' pia

'okk' misha

Pia and misha is followed by servant having a tray of wine and asked to serve it to them

'Dad they can have it' pia

Arnab picked up wine glass with smile crept on his face towards 'cheers abhay. i am sorry being rude to you'

'its okk, after all my reality isn't really easy to gulp down' abhay

The ambiance of house has filled up with laughter .Arnab has accepted the reality. Both the families are exchanging the details of the arrangements of engagement. Misha and alisha into teasing soon to be engaged couple. Abhay seeing the environment lightened has decided to tell madhu and panchi yet nervous about their reaction.

The first moment, when servants are no where around, abhay moved to madhu and panchi spoke' aunty i need to tell my dark reality to you. i have no idea how will react. but you have right to know'

'What reality...I know you belonged to wiccan family'

'not this...i am a vampire, infact all of them except jeh 'abhay

Madhu and panchi earth swept under their feet on hearing this. The words seems fallen short. They didn't know how to react to it.The shock is evident on their face.Abhay expected this reaction from them' i won't force, take your time'

'abhay mother can accept his son with his reality. you are same to me'

'i agree with mom.i am delighted that you are alive. nothing more to us'panchi

At Dark castle, Dehradoon

Danish is furious on T for letting raichands out of her as they are missing over 1 and half day from sanfransisco.he is frustated over himself to have assigned such important task to bimbo like T.He orders shankar to find raichands. Meanwhile,he calls T

'hello miss great T' danish in fuming anger.

'why are you shouting' T

'After letting raichands out of sight, what do you expect' Danish

'Chand and sid are still here i am keeping an eye on them ,i am sure i will be able to find out' T

'You will T, otherwise our deal is over'Danish.

'you won't be disappointed' he cuts off the call

'Abhay you might be clever i will find you in whichever corner of world you are'

At Dobrial mansion, Mumbai

Next 4 days passed in making arrangements of engagement. Both the families have geared up to make it a memorable experience for abhay and pia. The raichands are residing at farmhouse in the outskirts of mumbai yet spent more time at dobrials like earlier. Chand and sid also joined them. Abhay is too grumpy and moody now days. Pia is having hard time deal with this new him .On the knowledge that raichands are in mumbai.Maya,Angad,ruhi are joined and help them to train abhay to deal with new found powers.

Their destiny seems to smiling back at abhay and pia.Pia is too delighted with fact that her love is back into her life. Every morning, Abhay would sneak in to her room. Through she pretended to angry but she loved to begin her mornings with him. They went to shop for their engagement outfit. They ended buying clothes for each other. In night, he often stealing eyes from their respective families. They would sneak out for late night dates. They were thoroughly enjoying the lurking out at night on their

secret dates.

Today, i woke up all other past days to find abhay sited besides me.

'Good Morning Angel' kissing her forehead

It is beautiful feeling to wake up to see his face. He often irritates me with fluctuating moods. she get up and placing a peck on his cheek 'good morning sweatheart'

Abhay threw to bed is on top of her began kissing her passionately. She gave in to this temptation to respond back with equal passion. Abhay left her when he felt that she needs air.He slid strap of her gown, he began to place wet trails at her shoulder. Her heart is pacing fast.

'Someone is nervous, i know my limits. I won't repeat outhouse mistake' abhay

'i am nervous as you are too unpredictable now days 'pia

'i am trying to bring myself in control. Thank for handling moody me' abhay

'you better leave before alisha and misha reaches my room' pia

'Be ready at 8,i will came to pick you with parents permission' abhay

Tonight a day before their engagement, Abhay asked permission of my parents to take me out for dinner date. Pia wore blue knee length is waiting for abhay arrival. As soon as car horn is heard, pia rushed to reach fumbled' easy, your lover boy is not running anywhere' misha

Pia didn't respond to her as wasn't in mood to argue to spoil her beautiful evening. She stepped out of mansion, she saw him black suit leaning over the car with arms crossed near his chest. They greeted me. He drove to reach at favorite dining place. it is beautifully arranged with table of two surrounded by candles. He ordered my favorite cuisines. Her face dropped on thought while she will enjoy the delicious food .he will watch me. She stopped eating

'What did you stop eating' abhay

'i couldn't when you will audience to my eating' pia

'i told you earlier our relationship won't be normal. Well let me order a wine for myself ' abhay. He called waiter to order a glass of wine. When pia interrupted 'two glass of wines'

'Just one glass of wine. i didn't forget the day which you tried to have alcohol on misha's instance. You messed up my brand new car by threwing out in my car. i have no mood to spoil my beautiful evening' abhay

'It was one crazy night. You also didn't like drinking either' pia

'Alcohol helps us in controlling our thirst .you know for what' abhay

While Pia devouring the delicious food, Abhay is slipping the wine. After dinning, he drove off to cliff. The reason he choose to mark new beginning of their lives leaving the past behind. They are standing at edge of cliff. His arms entwined with hers and chin placed on her shoulder. Abhay asked for dance. He turned on his car stereo playing 'o re piya'. They swaying into music lost into each other. Sooner, they savoring each other mouths passionately left only need of air. Abhay asked to stand there and not to turn as he has surprise for her.

Next moment, when he looked into her direction she was missing. He thought she is just playing with her hiding some around. He searched around the place but he couldn't find her. He panicked and all the bad thought coming across her mind. He ran across the jungle like a manic to trace her. when he heard a scream coming from jungle.He caught and followed her scent. The next sights shock the earth of his feet. Pia is badly injured stood in clutches of T.she is sucking life out of her.it he is scared to lose the hope of his life. he is cursing herself to bringing her to cliff. he is fuming in anger to find her this plight, it brought out evil side of him. T is thrown away many times and hit across the trees. He is ferocious tiger who is thrashing T not letting her moment to recover. Suddenly his eyes fell on almost lifeless pia. He uses his power to hypotenuse some wild animals which are howling across T.T is badly injured with no power to gave a fight left in her

'you tried to move a bit,you will dinner to these wild animals. You try to hurt pia. You messed with abhay raichand. i will make you make pay for it'

Abhay picked her up and zoomed to pia's house. Her family is horrified at the sight to watch her badly injured. He placed her bed .Her blood is invoking the monster in him he closes his eyes began to heal her. When she slightly opened her eyes. He cut his wrist feed started to feed his blood. Madhu is horrified to watch him in his vampire form.When arnab watches abhay feeding his blood to pia. he moved to be stopped by misha.

'dad he is healing her' misha

He makes her sleep peacefully.

'what were you doing abhay' arnab

'uncle, vampire's blood has heals humans' abhay

'i better leave, she needs some rest'

He zooms to his farm house.

At farmhouse

His family members are shocked to find him in such messed up state.he is vulnerable and angry over himself to leaving her out of his sight. As soon the spots sid, he hugs him began to cry and narrates the entire incident to him.he retires to his room but sid follows him due to his vulnerable state.

'i am fine bro, i leave me alone' abhay.

Next morning it is day of their engagemant,The raichands family is full of commotion. Their faces are look dull and worried as abhay hasn't returned back home since night.

i have updated my chapter 23.i will hopeful that you will like it.please forgive me for my mistakes.please leave your comments and hit like

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Edited by sweet_neetu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
resss..
Me yumna786 aka fatima..my id problem..so i commwnt to use my this id..
Reserved...
Lovely update..loved it..abhiya scene was zwesome...so,abhay love hisfamily..loved his character n loved abhiya part n t?????she is such a evil...i hope abhay come back soon..n abhiya get engaged happily...update soon..now can,t w8 to read more n more..
Edited by Aish-Naksh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello friends,i am thankful to all of you for liking the ff.it is request to all my readers that please hit like if you want pms from this book .it just to avoid sending unnecessary pm.THANK YOU
Edited by sweet_neetu - 13 years ago
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Awesome update. I was so happy that Pia's family accepted Abhay but that T had to spoil it. Where has Abhay gone now? I hope Abhiya get engaged soon. Thx for pm:)
Edited by .tanu. - 13 years ago

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