BOOK 2 ABHIYA FF MY DESTINY update pg 77 1 AUGUST - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: koli97

<font size="6">lovely update neetu😊...awsomeee...plzz nxt update abhiya romance😊</font>


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanipandit29

Wow loved it yippie abhiya engaged I finally caught up I was away for a very long time. Good abhay needs to taught a lesson . Please do continue to pm me.


Thnxx so much for liking it
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Chapter 25
The night has matured,it turned to be most memorable experience of this beautiful couple.The guest adored and blessed the newly engaged couple.it is happiest moment for both families.Abhay and pia are standing beside each other. Abhay trying hard to melt down her anger but she appears unmoved.A mischivous throught came into his mind.He immediately put his arm across pia's waist.He knew that she jerk off his hand as all the eyes in the party is over this newly engaged couple.she gave a stern look towards him 'you look cute while angry'abhay Pia has taken strict decision not to talk to him it is hard for her to do this on their special but it is needed indeed.she has to make him realise that relationship is about two people.He has no authority take one-sided decision about them.His innocent remarks did brought smile on her face.Next moment,she covered it with stern look.His touch and his dimpled smile are forcing her to melt down.After every failed attempt to make her talk to him,

his disappointed look on his face made her heart drown.She wants to bring smile on that disappointed face.she remmebers the pain she went today morning.but not just today,what she passed through without him in 4 years.it made her determined to teach him a lesson. Abhay is feeling restless for not able to talk to her.He has realised by this time that he is put loads of efforts to get her forgiveness.He is cursing himself for doing such a reckless act on their engagement day.His own stupidity has spoiled their day.how he ask her to move on when didn't she even after his death.She is right that i owe no authority to take one-sided in a relationship. 'please help me god' abhay is thinking in his mind.At this moment,this siblings won't help him either.After all,he has made his loved ones angry over his reckless act.He knows that he can easily melt down his family anger as they can't see him sad but not pia.Abhay is still in confusion thinking about how to get her forgiveness.
He saw a familiar male approaching them.He is shankar,their college friend.Pia had smile on her face but his eyes grew darker.She is surprised by his change in his behivour as shankar was their good friend in college. 'i am so happy to see you alive akash'shankar 'sorry,you mistook me as akash like everyone'abhay spoke in american accent 'common akask,don't play with me'shankar 'did you read the invitation card'abhay 'yes i did'shankar 'what is written on it'abhay 'it was piya dobrial and abhay raichand engagement invitation'shankar 'i m abhay raichand to whom she got enagaged not akash..got it'abhay 'sorry i m mistaken'shankar 'i know i look like akash'abhay 'Congrulations on your engagement'shankar Abhay looked towards sid in telepathy'bro he is dark wiccan,keep an eye on him' Pia is confused to see them passing strange looks to each other.On the other hand,Misha and alisha couldn't see tension built between them.they decided to do something about it as they could see them dull on

on their engagement day.

'what is cooking between two brats' panchi

'look at them'misha

'mish,just drag them to dance floor' panchi

'great idea birdie'misha

'mish'panchi in angry tone

'Guys we should fight later,first deal with their problem' alisha

Misha and alisha preceded towards them. Both of them hit them by shoulder pushing them closer. The moment,their bodies touched. They are lost in own world brought back by misha's voice' love birds came back to earth out of your dream world'

'what' in unision

'awww i spoilt their perfect moment' misha

'yup mish, what I expect from you' abhay

'oh really, than i give you it back'

Misha held their hands and dragged them into dance floor. They looked towards each other.she felt irritated and spoke 'oh my my love birds are feeling shy.Come on you official couple. so feel free to dance'

'Ankhon hi Ankhon mai' began to play.Abhay held her by waist.He pulled her close to him.They began to sway to music.She felt in heaven to be swaying in his arms as his finace.Pia felt that his eyes wandering over people in party than her.He is waiting for his moment to embrace in his arms. he seems lost.His hold on her is strong and protective. She thought since the time,he has met shankar.he is behaving weird. she sensed something is troubling him.She decided not to speak him. she couldn't also see in some pain.she hugged him and began to caress his back asked'Any problem'

'Nothing'abhay

'this is problem you never share things with me. i am going to your life partner. I know you keep be away from your supernatural world.Being part of you,i am already part of it.you seems agitated after meeting shankar. please tell me'pia

Abhay pulled close and she looked up.They can feel each other bodies and breath on their skins. They are lost in the stance and swaying to own music of love.it is moment,they forget their problem,the world round them. Only they exist no party,no world.He moved towards her forehead and kissed it.

The raichands sibling standing at the corner watching them with smiles.

'my little bro magic worked' alisha

'when they near to each other, they can't stay away for a long time'kabir

Kabir stood besides misha.he placed his arm over her shoulder. The moment,his arm touched her.it gave unknown sensation to her body.she immediately jerked off his arm from her.she gave a dragger look to him. Neil burst out in laughter over her action. he spoke' vampy has magnetic personality when it comes to girls. his one look can melt the girl. Unlike someone who is trying so hard from many years'

'shut your big mouth wolfy' kabir

Panchi is confused over their conversation spoke 'why do you call each other such names,what does that mean. you always call this way'

'well panchi(in low tone) vampire cut short to vampy, werewolf cut short to wolfy' alisha

'Omg,you are a werewolf' panchi

'Rule one about raichand, don't expect normal human in their knowns' neil

'you mean to say jeh and alina,maya are also 'panchi cut by jeh

'supernaturals, well yes. Through i

fell in love with arch rival a vampire(whispers).it is said Love seeks no boundaries. Same is my case. Neil don't like your relationship' jeh

'I never believed in such stuff, but it exists. but why are you arch rivals'panchi

'As i m half werewolf' alisha completes ' As you know I m vamp.'vamp n wolf are arch rivals since centuries'

'still her family excepted you' panchi

'That is beauty of my family. they see supernatural world as one world.they want them to be together'alisha

'i trust this family, they gave my parents shelter when werewolf n wiccans were determined to kill them as they were against this relation between wolf n wiccan'jeh

Meanwhile,They is still own trance. Abhay places a peck on his cheek. She has almost seduced but realizes that they are standing in own party. she pulls him out of the stance says' you know my weakness really well but it won't work on me. Tell me what is disturbing you' pia

Abhay is now in playful mood gently stroking her hairs and tracing her face with his fingers said 'you say you don't like this treatment'

Pia know that how hard she tries not to be effect but she fails badly everytime.his touch make her loses her senses 'no..Don't change the topic. he leans near her ear whispered taking advantage of music'i feel someone is already secuded'

He kissed her bare shoulder and closed her eyes in reaction 'see i told you' abhay

She get away from hold but he hold her more tightly 'abhay stop, there is party around'

'o really i did know that.so you are worried about surrounding than your finace' abhay

'yes when your fiance tries to ditch you at your engagement day' pia

'i am care about you' abhay

'if you did than you wouldn't thought of leave me'pia

'i am surrounded my dangers.i did want that dangers to come to you. do you know why reacted badly on seeing shankar' abhay

'yup' pia

'shankar is Dark wiccan' abhay

'what does that mean' pia

'Those who practise black magic, those who tried to take my life 4 years back'abhay

'you mean he was involved in killing you'pia

'Bingo, He joined your college and became close to us in order to know where i was particular time. All the concern regarding me was mere pretence. So That he they can plan the attack from at most suitable opportunity' abhay

'how you came to know this' pia

'what do you think i was doing while away in these hours' abhay

'you came to know this from T' pia

'why i killed her. They had plan to harm you and use it against me to do their evil job' abhay said gritting the teeth continued ' they wanted to hurt you,the moment i heard i killed her. how dare they raise a arm towards you'

Pia saw anger rising in his eyes. She called her ' abhay.. abhay look at me.i am save standing in front of you. I know till you are around. No one can hurt me' pia

'wrong pia, your life is endangered always because of me' abhay

Pia tried to calm him down but she couldn't. At last, she crushed her mouth against his letting out vent all his anger turned into passionate love.

i have updated the chapter 25 hope u like it.please forgive me for my mistakes.please leave your precious comments and hit like
Edited by sweet_neetu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yay me 1st
so finally pia melted...
and shankar is dark wiccan😲
pta nai wat is the next danger...
cntinue soon thanx for pm😊
Edited by -juhi-lily- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update neetu!!!
Abhay's explaintion to piya was brilliantly written.
So, shankar is a dark wiccan, gr8.
Loved their romantic moment and kiss at last.
Plz continue soon.
Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank you for pm me but i read already 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago


---edited----
awesome update neetu..👏
Hm..so shankar is a dark wiccan!! I hope abhay will teach him a lesson soon!!
And pia was angry on abhay bt she cnt b for long !!😉
Abhiya moments were cute n sweet!!😳
misha,kabir n jay all were nyc!!
Cntinue soon plz and thanks for the pm dear... 😊
Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: barki

thank you for pm me but i read already 😆

OKK DEAR..

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