New joint ff-: Broken paradise note on pg 81

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Nikvi29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#271

Superb update

Missing abhiya

Thanks for the pm

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fabliha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#272

wow!!! cute update...👏 varun tara's part was lovely & abhay pia's conversation was really sweet!@!😉

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@Trouble.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#273

Amazin update👏...loved it👍🏼

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Ekta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#274

Nice update dear
again u startd saying dat it is boring
lovd it
varun n tara scenes were nice
w8ing 2 c abhay reaction
thanx 4 pm

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.AgapiMou.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#275

Rosh n romi...superb!tara-varun r sooo cute..luv der massti..
Abhay jaldi aana..muje pata hai tum dono ko abhia ki coochie coo dekhi nai jaati..isliye kuch garbad toh karne hi wale ho..lol
update sooon..cnt w8 4 da twist;)

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Resh

@SheDevil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#276

aweesome update.Abhiya's love,varun-tara & abhiya bonding all were amazing.But Y I feel something bad gonna happen soon.Oh plz cont..

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Sharpay.Evans

@Sharpay.Evans

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Posted: 13 years ago

#277

Lovely!!! ABHIYA were SOOO cute!!!...-Gauri

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Resh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#278

LOL I loved it.Cant wait 4 Abhiya's milan but hope kuch galat na ho.Plz cont..

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Sharpay.Evans

@Sharpay.Evans

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Posted: 13 years ago

#279

It was adorable!! AbhIya were cute!!
-Gauri

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bellaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#280

superb updates yar
loved the second last one and this one too
great work romi and rosh
the way abhay understand piya feeling after the marriage was amazing scene
the little fights of varun and tara was nice
abhay reaction when piya done to pak pehra and the treatment she gave to him awsome
wow piya is pregnant superb yar
everyone knows about it except abhay
hope he will come home soon
both of ur writing skills were too gud
waiting to see abhay reaction
cont soon

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