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--geny--

@--geny--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#521

fab fab fab fab updte tora ...kaise likha yr...i ws in abhiya land...kuch khass..vhi dress..vhi dance...all feelingz...mindblowing ...love u fr this update...do nxt updt soon...who want to publish abhiya photos ...is he moon uncle??

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

Tora donno wat stuff ur made of dear ⭐️ It was written beautifully 😳 The update was long n awesome 👏 I could imagine each n everthing like it was playing out before me. Superb 👏 U have portrayed Abhiya's feelings so brilliantly here. I am feeling bad not just for Pia but also Abhay n might I add Arjun as well? Their dance part was written down fabulously 👏 n it reminded me of Abhiya first dance n thanks for including the song 🤗 Everytime Abhay hurls insults at Pia he's inflicting misery on himself This time though he went there with the intention of ruining Pia's life he didn do any such thing as I suppose he remembered his sister's words. So true! U shd never punish an innocent for the sins committed by another But now what is Moony upto? 😡 Chein se jeene kyun nahi deta apne hi bete ko? 🤢 Diane didn wanna do tat but he wants to defame Pia. But doesn he realise that he'll not only defame Pia but his own son as well? 😡 Agreed its a girl who'll bear the worst here but still knowing his son, he knows how he will feel abt it I guess Pia might also misunderstand Abhay n assume he took advantage of her 😲 Oh dear 😭 I am feeling bad already 😭 Anyways brilliant update as always dear 👏

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#523

wonderful update.abhay got jealous when he saw her hugging jeh & their dance was simply wow.abhay started that dance 4 his mission bt ended up taking out all f his pent up emotions & feelings 4 pia in dat. Diana,shekhar & chand have really crossed a line dis tym.i was glad dat abhay remembered his sister's words & realised his mistake bt chand still is successful in his plan...is abhay his own son?hw can he not care 4 his happiness? Pia would accuse abhay 4 dis & hate him.she would b shattered when she would see those pics. It was beautifully wrtn. Great job & thanx 4 pm

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dreamyjennice

@dreamyjennice

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Drunk piya is the cutest and hotest...wow another abhiya kiss...very nice update...plz include me in ur pm list...I never get ur updates...I need to search for them always..n..n

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#525

Awsomeee😊...Abhiya dance soo romantic😳...Awww Abhay felt guilty for his act & save Pia...Chand😡try spoil pia..plzz nxt asap

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rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#526

mindblowing one...👏 it was worth for the wait we had done...

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rida mahveen

@mahi4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#527

Fantabulous update tora 👏

dat Diane 😡

poor abhiya 😭

i already thought chand want something really big n Diane gave him dat superb chance

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rockstarashu

@rockstarashu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#528

nice update.abhiya dance reminded me of their first dance on pkyek.poor piya seems to be in great trouble if photo's got published.

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#529

amazing update
loved the abhiya daning scene
but why diana did this to piya yar
poor piya
adore the abhiya kissing scene hope abhay soon realized that piya is innocent and save her...
shit hate that chand and noe diana too piya life going to be like hell now yar
cont soon