SS- Love can never die...part 5 pg-25 (note pg-34)

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

oh!!! Wow chiti... Its beautiful yaar ... He wnts 2 embrace her,touch her, kiss her...bt at d sm tym he keeps her away 4 her safty ❤️ *clapsss*

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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Superb update yaar. I loved it totally. If u can make it a ss. I would love to read that. U explained abhay's pain beautifully. Plz continue soon and thanks for the pm.

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

awesome update

luvd it

Abhay changed his mind😭 now he will again hurt Piya

cont soon

thanks for the pm

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

wonderful update

piya is so happy in her dreamland and abhay is gonna break her heart into pieces...

brilliant job

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ilove99

@ilove99

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

its awesome but sad too abhay's gonna break up now😭

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

hey dear, pls dont make it like the show.

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

thanks for nice update... but want to knw more wat u decides 4 our lovy dovy abhiya

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

amazing upd dear 👏

i love your writing style , sorry i forgot to un res my comment ' holding ears ' first was just awesome , u made the waterfalll much much beautiful and kiss was hot ☺️i just loved the way u described the emotiong of abhiya , cuming to this upd feeling sad for piya she was soo happy and now abhay gonna break up , in the show when he did tat i felt like throwing my chapaals 😡 plsss dont make the break up soo harsh 😳 love your os waiting for next upd 😛

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Anj01

@Anj_01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

superb update!!!!!!!!👏

just loved it!!!⭐️

you beautifully portrayed abhay's frustration.👏

precap is sad😭...abhay will break her heart once more..ho no😭...but plz make everything right soon between abhiya😍

continue soon n thanks for pm😊