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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: captainplus
great starting ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

loved ur discriptions 👏 , especially the picnic scene 👍🏼

n abhiya met yay !

wil b waiting 4r the nxt part egarly

tnx 4r the pm 😊

Thank you dear. Here abhiya will meet early fall in love super early because they have to separate early too 😛

Originally posted by: ..dishu..
good start tanzie. pia's dreams and feelings have been well written. good job.

Thanks Dishu 😛

Originally posted by: sweetdear
Wow..really awesome😊..bowled over by this picturesque narration😳..eager to read the rest..thx for the pm

Thank you so much.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Andromeda001
Great start Tanzie!!!!!!!!👏,👏. Story really has a mysterious aura fully justifying its title. Really looking forward to it. I had a feel of Victorian era in it. Grey hound🤣 Piya is really mischievious here. All dat forests area covered wid mist gave a chilly n eerie feeling. So Piya driven by her wild streak has already landed herself into a trouble or what??? Plz update asap.

Thanks Kirti 😳 the entire theme of the story has a victorian feeling maybe thats y. otherwise writing in victorian style is mainly Indu's job n other than her only Mandy n Shreya can do it. not my cup of tea 😆 She landed herself into a trouble for sure 😉

Originally posted by: luckdiya
Grt strt , lukin diff.
totally luved it.. Piya hs lost her way. 😳 vil he hlp her?
continue soon

Yeap he will help her 😊

Originally posted by: harinisriram39
Thank you very very very much for another Abhiya FF Tanzie,The starting is amazing. I can already imagine the scenes. Wish someone could take a movie from this.Am I mistaken or did you start this FF last May?

Glad you liked it Harini. I did start this FF long ago and i kept it on hold.

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: Sweet_Desires
Heyyz Tanz... thanks alot for the PM.. you remembered and honestly your
FF brought me back to IF..thanks

It's awesome yaar.. Pia and Abhay... I soo miss them yaar.. and you
relived all those moments.. your writing style is as captivating as ever..
keep updating..👍🏼

Love❤️
Sidra

Hey Sidra, where have you been? you are missing from MB forum as well.. good to see you here. Thanks for liking.. hope to see ur comment soon again 😊

Originally posted by: vampireking
you are a superb writer !!!!👏 eagerly waiting for your next update !!!!plzzz update soon cant wait to read more !!!!the way you describe the last men i am 100 percent sure that is abhay !!!

Thank you. it is Abhay.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Thanks so much everyone. Next chapter will be up in a while and this FF wont be on hold now and will be updated by me or Dishu from time to time 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

I forgot to make a cover for this FF 🤔

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

This FF is so mysterious n the start is defo intriguing n one will have many questions in mind 😕 Abhay seems to be haughty, arrogant n proud. But this Pia is no less either 😆 Always love it when we have a feisty defiant Pia 😉 I like it when she gives it back to Abhay. Loved their convo 😃 Abhay is so naughty n seductive here n to be honest he is giving me the creeps right now 😕 I pity Pia for sure. She has no choice but to go with him else like he said chances r likely that she will end up serving as a dinner for a wild beast of the forest The housemaid seemed too authoritative to be one. I am sure every reader must have voiced it here as to y she said Pia is too young 😕 I am sure we wont get our answer any soon I guess 😆 But still will wait eagerly. I wanna know how these two will fall for each other coz any sane girl will first wanna stay miles away from someone like Abhay. I am certain Abhay will keep his word but I am waiting to see how Pia will resist him for long seeing she is attracted to him already 😆 Lovely update Dishu 👏 I am waiting for the next part eagerly 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Finally I caught up with this story!!

The line up is intriguing! And I loved thecharacter sketch!!

Alright this Abhay came in like a knight! I fell for his character! He's sh tharkey kinda🤣

Him scaring Piya was 😆

He did sound naughty!!

Continue soon

Thanks for PM!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Wow Dishu, very nicely written, and I so loved Abhay and esp his lines were too good.
Somehow i wonder if Piya really is overreacting...but then the last line made me wonder as well, what will the dinner cost her?
And why is Piya too young?

Loved the whole update esp the AbhIya convos, they were funny :P
update soon!

Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 12 years ago