FF :Time and Again Book 1 completed - Page 104

Awesome update 😳 loved it continu soon😉

nice update shreya
whats this with reina?
poor piya her heart broken again shit yar first abhay and now his past make her sad...
what abhay saw its his past or something?
cont soon

Superb update.Panchi dead...yipee..party time🥳.The poor guy got fatty-poisoned🤣.Abhiya...uff self-destructive

Awesome update shreya!!!
lol panchi is dead🤣
Poor daniel lol got sick rofl, snigs and daniel omg, that cracked me up lol.
Hmmm haseena is sharp here, she guess it right i think.
Abhay don't remember meeting piyali at all??
plz update soon, waiting to know more and yea congo for 2nd book in advance!!!
beautifully written, fab job!!!!

😆 me here also first of all thanks for the PM 😃 great thinking i loved ur concept at first i was bit confused but after reading the whole 16 parts i'll say amazing work 👏 n now i'm going to be ur regular reader so don't stop to PM me k

Amaaazing update Shreya!!!

OMG "i hadn't bitten thru s many layers of cholesterol before" Dat was hilarious ROFL...ROFL...ROFL.Finally Panchee met her fate n see d irony even d death was feeling puky after having her!!

Who attacked Abhay?😲.Was he Sid? If he was then this time he is not a bad news?😲.

Finally Ametz confessed.Bt Piya is again heartbroken.She really gave herself hopes dat Abhayendra wud lov her."bt he had capacity 2 hurt me just like Abhay does".It means Abhiya were always meant 2 be! Even before Abhiya met!
I was travelling thru public transport a mini bus n i saw a quote written there,"if u fall in lov 2nd time,then choose 2nd coz if u had loved d 1st one truly then u wud never hav fallen in love 2nd time".I dont say Abhayendra never loved Maithili truly bt still soulmate connection was only wid Piya.
Dream seq was beautifully written😃.Bt this moron Abhay n his Stay away😡.
Cntinue asap.

Originally posted by: Divya6696

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Lol.. I didn't even get time to say that I am the first one.. I was in a hurry so that no one could get past me.. so yea..
I am the first one.. woohooo..!!! Lol..

So.. AWESOME update Shreya.. loved it..

the beginning.. I was like I knew it.. I knew it that the snake was going to be Panchi-poisoned.. poor him.. and and and.. Dan..??? just a name right..? Because as far as I know you and Sniggie are sautans na..? Lol.. so Snigs-Dan are icchhadhaari naags.. ROFL.. God.. I can understand.. he had to bite in really deep.. Lol..
This Reina chick is a helluva.. I cannot understand her.. Lol..

Flashbacks:
Awww poor Piya.. however stupid she was in believing that Abhayendra loved her which actually was Maithali.. I did feel bad for Piya.. she was crushed.. but yea.. didn't Reina warn her already about not severing any ties with the past..?

Haseena is smart.. very smart.. (as SRK does it in MNIK) She did guess it was Sid.. but Mr. Abhay thick headed sadu brainless Raichand couldn't.. Lol..

Abhay sacchhi is Gosh.. ek baar socho toh uss dream ke baare mei.. dream ya vision..?? Ironically.. He thinks Piya is safe when she's away from him.. *sigh*

And when I reached the last part, my jaw literally dropped.. I hadn't expected that.. Thanks.. I just said that Mr. Snake must have had some side effects of biting Panchi considering WHAT she is.. oh wait.. what she was.. Lol..

Oh and.. Like Dishu.. I did have a question.. now that Piya is in the past.. will that change the past <font size="2">when she's back or is she just there to you know.. <font size="2">lik<font size="2">e see and observe..?

That was a really good update..!!! Loved it..
Dunno what to say.. update soon..? or update when you are free..?
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Thanks a ton Dhrishti. No actually Dan and Snigs ko lana tha.. I love them both... And the snake and Dan are her janam janam ke lovers so...lol
Abhay didn't guess, maybe because he never though of Sd coming back..whereas Haseena always had a soft spot for Sid u know.
Pia going to the past will change the future..and that's all I'm telling you now!
I'm actually feeling bad for Abhay...he's having conflicting emotions so its not easy for him too.

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

first of all thanks a lot for weaving our crazy suggestion so well into your mystery.👏next, did abhay just had a flash of the past in the last scene, but u know i often wonder, if present day abhay will remember that he had met pia in the past😕</font>[/DIV]

Thanks Dishu. Ur suggestions were actually brilliant, so it was a pleasure fitting them in. About your question : Abhay will remember Piyali, but he does not know who she really was. And actually, that was a warped version of the past that he saw. He saw it as Pia but the person may have been different ...or not :P

@Mandy : Aw thanks hun... That's too much of praise you know!
Yes actuall, there's kind of a big reason why Reina is doing whatever she is doing...
About Sid... It's actually the fact that Haseena misses him more than Abhay or Chand.. In fact I dont think Abhay misses him at all.. So its natural her thoughts jump to him na?
Well ... If Abhay didn't spout his stay away lines, he wouldn't be Abhay, right? He's too noble for his own good. Lol.