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Posted: 13 years ago

#701

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Woaaa just superb sayu!!!!!
Everything frm beggining to end was described and written beautifully.
omg abhay is really a question bank here, so many question he asks lol.
So,kabir loves alina, plz make them a couple later and I am happy ke piya knows that abhay doesn't love alina.
Abhiya in library u again reminded me of pkyek, I want some romance here plz.
precap is interesting, yipee finally got my abhiya.
plz update soon next part, I am waiting and once again sorry for late comment dear.
Thanks for the pm.

yaaa...seriously Abhay is a qn bank here 😆 uske qns bandh karne ke liye hi maine use Piya ke sath lock kar di 😆 lets see age kya hota hai 😉
& don say sorry 😡

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Posted: 13 years ago

#702

Wowww... Awesome update dear:-) plz cont.. Abhiya hayee;-) I LOVED IT:-):-):-) Cant wait 4 next part yaar...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#703

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
Awesome updt👏

thanx for liking it Prima 😛

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670134

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Posted: 13 years ago

#704

Originally posted by: rashi.rose
Wowww... Awesome update dear:-) plz cont.. Abhiya hayee;-) I LOVED IT:-):-):-) Cant wait 4 next part yaar...

ohhh...m so glad to see u back ! thanx for liking it dear 😊
now only Abhiya 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#705

Hey friends ! I thought to update tomorrow , but I just realized that tomorrow updating will not be possible as I have clg & after that direct tution 😭 so m thinking to update now . & its too late night I am updating from cell . so again there will not be any cover pic & the update will be divided in 2 parts , part 1& part 2 . plz scroll down after reading part 1 to read part 2 😊

sorry for the inconvinience 😭

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#706

UPDATE 15 part 1

Abhay & Piya standing in front of a closed door inside a dark library . The door got locked from outside ? But how ? Piya turns to Abhay " How this door got locked from outside ? When I entered obviously it was open . After that you too entered , that means it was open still then . Then how it got locked now ?"
Abhay surely did not get pleased by such indirect blame . If the door got locked what can he do in it ? And whats this girl is trying to say ? Abhay thinks to clear her missunderstandings " Look I really don't know how it got locked , but I think I should clear up a point to you . I did not come after you . You came after me . I was seating here since long 2 hours . So you are the last person who saw the door open . Ok ?"
Piya was just feeling to bang her head on wall . Abhay Raichand ! Whom she was avoiding since morning , now she is locked in a room with him at eveing ! Wao ! What a great situation it is !
Suddenly Abhay starts to laugh loud which made Piya hell irritated . "Is some comedy drama going on here that you are laughing ?" Piya asks angrily . Abhay just seems to be unable to check his laughter , but still he tries to reply " Actually that is . Just now I thought to check the time and saw its 5:15 now ! And the thing is college closing time is 5 . So I guess when college closed , stuffs closed this library too and in that way we got trapped here " Abhay stops .
"Shitt ! But how can they lock it when we were inside ?" Piya seems to get really annoyed . The room is totally dark , the only light coming is from her cell phone's screen . In this little light Abhay can see the clear mark of annoyance on her face . "Nope , annoyance doesn't suit her" Abhay thinks "She was looking more beautiful in anger" Abhay giggles which made Piya more irritated . "Now why are you smiling again ?" She asks angrily . Yes ! Thats what Abhay wanted , the angry look ! Abhay says "Actually I think the room was dark and normal human can't see in darkness . So may be he couldn't make out we are inside !"
Gosh ! Piya was just feeling like to shout loud ! "Yess ! Why didn't you switched on the lights ?"
"Me!!!" Abhay gives a shocked expression broadening his eyes . He is actually enjoying her anger and annoyance . He got carried away yesterday seeing her beauty , but he never knew she looks more beautiful in anger ! Abhay himself is amazed to see how much he is irritating her , but he just can not check it too ! He tries a little more " Why should I ?? I just came here to seat . I didn't need light . But you were searching books , so you must had !"
Goddd ! Piya clearly gives up and seats on a chair . Abhay also comes and seats on her opposite chair . Piya was now keen to end this fight " So is there any other way to get out of here ?" she asks in a hopeful tone .
"None" Abhay replies .
Piya: "God ! Then we should inform others that we got trapped here " and she picks up the phone .
Abhay : " No chance . Check the screen . Being an underground chember this place doesn't have much friendship with networks ."
Yes , he is telling indeed the truth . Piya switches off the cell once and then switches it on again , but still no result . Now ? Now what to do ? She can easily contact her family by telepathy , but what to tell Abhay ? How she informed them ? Better to drop this idea . But...she just can not digest the fact that she has to spend the whole night with that Abhay Raichand ina closed dark room ! But why dark ? Piya ties to switch on the lights , it did not .
Abhay informs "College is closed , so power supply also disconnected ."
Wao ! Just splendid ! Piya seats down with extreme dissapointment and annoyance .

IN KHURANA HOUSE

Alina was walking in her room impatiently and was dialling a particular number in her cell phone again and again . But every time a dissappointed expression was getting painted on her face . But she was still trying again and again hoping to hear ringing sound this time . Jeh enters her room and finds his sister walking through the room looking tensed and trying to call someone . What happened ? He gets worried . "Hey Sis ! What happened ? And whom you are calling so desperately ?" He asks .
"Its Abhay !" Alina answers in a worried tone .
"Abhay ? What happened to him ?" Jeh seems to get puzzled .
"You didn't notice Vai how he left from canteen ? I am just too much worried ! I just hope he is not angry on me !"
"Not at all little sis ! Perhaps we were teasing him too much ! You don't worry about it !" Jeh says in light tone .
"But Vai , I am trying to call him since so long , but everytime the not reachable messege is coming ! Where he is now ??" Alina still sounds tensed .
Jeh tries to relax his sister " Come on ! Don't worry ! It must be a network trouble ! Just chill !" and he leaves .
Is it ? Is it really just a network trouble ? Alina seats on the arm chair and tries again , but again the same recorded voice dissapointed her .
"Oh God ! Where are you Abhay ?" she heaves a deep sigh .

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#707

PART2

INSIDE THE OLD LIBRARY

A pin drop silence is existing there . Piya is seating silently , perhaps thinking something . Abhay seating on the opposite chair constantly staring at her . In the little light of cellphones her face is looking more beautiful . Her deep brown eyes , her gorgeous curls , her baby pink cheeks , her rose petals like lips...everything seems to get a dreamy mysterious effect ! But this silence... Abhay just can not stand it anymore . He thinks to break the silence , but what will he talk about ? Suddenly an amazing idea strikes him . Perhaps this is the right time to clear up all the misconfusions , all the worse memories . No one else is present here , he can talk to her freely . May be she also feels comfortable to speak ? Its just too much necessary to sort out all those , otherwise everyday...everyday they have to excape from each other as they had to today morning and Abhay just does not want that . He himself does not know why but he does not want to miss her company , he wants to be her friend , he wants remain close to her . Abhay closes his eyes , gathers a little courage and calls her hesitantly "Piya !"
Piya looks up to him . Goddd !! Those brown eyes ! Again those brown eyes ! As if they will snatch his talking power again ! Abhay feels if he looks up to her or she talks in between its quiet possible that all the courage he gathered just now may disappear . Abhay continues without looking at her " Piya please ! Don't interrupt in between and please listen the whole . Otherwise I may forget what I thought to speak!"
This sounded so much childish to Piya , as if a child is trying to memorise his text and pleading to the teacher not to schold in between . Piya smiles a little but decides to remain silent as Abhay requested . Abhay resumes his speech again " Look Piya , I know... I know all what happened between us yesterday it was really very much awkward . I know the way I behaved to you it was just really too much unexpected an unacceptable . But trust me ! I didn't want to do that willingly . I just don't know what happened to me at that time . When I saw you , you kept your hands on my shoulder I myself don't know why I felt a strange unknown feeling at my heart . I am thinking about it since yest night but still not able to understand . Trust me I didn't do that intensionally . That was a blunder mistake for which I myself could not forgive me . So I don't expect at all that you will forgive me , but I just wanted you to trust that I didn't do that intensionally. You may shout on me , you may slap me if you want , but please don't remain silent in that way . Its threatening me terribly !" finally Abhay stops . At the end his voice was choaked , as if he reached just the previous step of crying ! Piya felt bad for him . He is thinking about this throughout the whole day ! His voice , his expressions are clearly saying that he is not lying . But...but now what should Piya reply ? Piya remains silent for a while and then speaks out " I truely beleive that it wasn't your fault alone . I was equally responsible for that . If you had lost controll I should had stop you , but I did not at that time . I wanted to , but don't know why failed ." She stops . Abhay was listening to her with rapt attension , is her voice sounding a bit sad ? Abhay thinks . Piya heaves a deep sigh and now tries to say in light tone "So no one is right , no one is wrong . Ok ? So just forget that ! And you know in this age...all these happens . You just focus on your future . You know very well what you want and just try to achieve that goal ! And..." Piya thinks to make the atmosphere more light "And I know how beautiful I am . You know even Ranbir Kapoor became just fida on me ! It was just I was not interested in him so rejected !" Piya makes faces .
Now Abhay laughs loud . Oh my God ! He thought she may shout , she may cry , but he never imagined she will solve all these so casually ! He is really very much releived now . Now he also adds with a smirk " oh really ? That means I am more handsome than Ranbir Kapoor !"
His cute dimples reminds Piya someone again ! But this time she did not think about it much . Perhaps she is being habituated with it . They had lots of friendly talks , now its almost 1 am of night . Abhay is literally feeling sleepy . Strange ! She is not looking sleepy at all ! Is not she tired ? Abhay thinks in his mind . Piya isaying something , but all her words are not reaching to him . He really wants to sleep now . Piya looks up when she did not get answer from him . Oh ! He has fallen asleep ! Piya keeps staring at his sleepy face for sometime . After years she is observing this face from so close . Piya moves to his next chair , keeps his head on her shoulder making sure that he does not fall down from chair in sleep . Being a vampire she does not need to sleep , but still she tries to take some rest closing her eyes . But suddenly a shout wakes her up . Piya opens her eyes and surprisingly finds that Abhay woke up , he is perspiring very badly and most probably just now he screamed "Mailthili !" !!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#708

Hey friends ! update 15 is posted 😊 plzzz leave a comment after reading it . as I am a new writer your comments and the no of comments I get help me to make out if it was up to mark or not . So plz after reading comment , its not compulsory that u have to praise me , if you didn't like it say that freely too 😊
& plzzz if you think you really liked it don forget to hit like button plz 😊
waiting for your precious comments 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#709

Wow!!!!...he screamed maithli meaning piya will come to know that hez abhayendra only...yipeee i'm sooo happy...simply awesome now listen very carefully you've to update this ff asap *its an order* coz it is gettin more interesting...so donot forget to update fast n thnku very much for d pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#710

hey sayu awsm update!!!! thax fr pm!! so its abhay's rebirth!! hmmm interesting!!! yr i hope abhiya ko jaldi apna pyaar reliese ho jaye!! abhay ka pia ko irreted krne vala part was awsm!!! 😉 yr ye alina ko hatao!! 😡 next 1 update soon!! 😊