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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello friends 😊 now me going to post the 1st update of my first ff 😊 I know , there may be lots of mistakes... but plzzz don't throw eggs or tomatoes on me 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Update - 1


Dubai , a city in UAE . A rich prosperous city for rich prosperous people . It is an evening at the most prosperous elegant region of the city . A huge , classy , beautiful castle comes to view . The nameplate at the gate reads " DOBRIYAL MANSION " .Inside the castle everyone seems to be very busy , busy on the preparation of the party going to be held . A male voice comes to ear supervising all preparations & hurrying up the workers . Everything going smoothly , party hall looking marvelous , but it seems like he still is not satisfied . He is Arnab Dobriyal , the most senior & most powerful member of Dobriyal mansion .Every time he runs after perfection , he just loves to be perfectionist . Then a female voice comes to play consoling Arnab that everything is fine , the party is just going to be the most perfect party ever Dubai saw . She is just too much annoyed with Arnab's over anxiousness . She is Sugandh Dobriyal , Arnab's wife . She seems to be very happy as the party is going to be nice it is really important that everything go on nicely , because it is the final party they are going to host in Dubai as they are leaving the city tomorrow forever . Yes , they are leaving forever . Suddenly Sugandh feels tensed thinking how their daughters would react on this decision . As far as she knows she expects that would not effect the elder one . She is well habituated with all these . Sugandh is actually worried about the younger daughter , every time when they took such decisions she got sad , most probably this time also this decision will make her sad . But''. Sugandh's thinking going on''what a dramatic situation it will be .Today's party , today's celebration''everything is just for her , just to make her happy . But at the end it will leave a sad mark on her . Sugandh's heart is breaking feeling her daughter's pain , but she can not do anything . This is Arnab's decision & to be honest it's the right decision for them . Suddenly a noise brings her back to reality , a girl with lots of shopping bags in hand enters the castle & as soon as she arrived its obvious a noise is also running with her . this chirpy bubbly girl is none other than Panchi Dobriyal , Sugandh & Arnab's elder daughter . Seeing her Sugandh heaved a sigh of relief . She was just thinking too much ! But now she is quiet relieved , she knows Panchi will handle everything , Panchi will take care of her sister . Then Panchi saw her mother upstairs & comes to her just jumping off some steps . her first question is " where is our birthday girl ?? "

Sugandh smiled a little & replied " in her room "

Panchi just flew away like a storm to her younger sister's room . In the room she spotted her sister standing beside the window seeing the sky . Mild breeze is blowing disturbing her curly hairs , they are falling on her face again & again , but she is not just giving attention them . She is staring at the sky continuously , perhaps lost somewhere deep in thoughts . Panchi just cried " OMG !!! Our birthday girl isn't ready yet ! "

The girl turned , she got a superb careless beauty with loads of curly hairs , a pair of baby brown eyes & a bonus of rose petals like leaps . She is the birthday girl , she is the main attraction of today's celebration . She is Piya Dobriyal .


Precap : Arnab's announcement leaves Piya shocked !




So , this was my first attempt to write , here I request again plzzz don't throw eggs or tomatoes on me 😲 😆

Edited by Saayaniz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
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Nice starting..😃
u described evrything very well😃
conitnue soon n thnx 4 d pm😃
Edited by abhiya_pkyek - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
wrong post..sorry😃
Edited by abhiya_pkyek - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Wrong post ????? I posted anything wrong 😲 ????
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
lovely update continue soon..😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: TeDylove

lovely update continue soon..😛

Thank you dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Nice update , piya's description was very well waiting for abhay 's entry , please continue soon 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Nice start. Waiting for more!

Glad that u liked it 😊 i was so nervous while posting it 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: sweetmonaya

Nice update , piya's description was very well waiting for abhay 's entry , please continue soon 👏

thanks dear 😊 will update as soon as possible 😊 & ofcourse its abhiya lovestory so abhay surely will enter 😉

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