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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

sorry for late comment😳

it was fantastic update⭐️
jay's plan, pia's emotions, abhay n wolves fight...everything was described very well👏


It's ok yaar!!!
Thanks a lot dear!!!!
awww glad u liked them all, thanks yaar!!!

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plz plz plz romi pm me also when you update...

Thanks for reading, will surely pm u yaar
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Chapter 34

Dehradhun Forest

The sudden sound of lightening striking in the sky and the arrival of heavy rain along with flashings and this heavy winds blowing around had given a complete different and new look to the usual calm atmosphere of these jungles in Dehradun now, the jungle doesn't look like a place where only creatures habituates, it looks more dangerous and violent, now it's no more pitch dark, but due to continuous flashings most of the surroundings is visible clearly, it looks like a war zone now, the usual silence in the jungle is now replaced by noises, several large trees fallen here and there, dry leaves and branches covering the jungle floor, scattered body of some animals most probably of wild wolfs, some are badly wounded while some are fully dead, pool of blood surrounding those dead bodies, any normal human being would think all these are cause of some natural calamity or disaster or may be result of some wild animals fight, but this is not the truth, the real reason behind all these destructions is the happening of the ages old war, the ferocious fight, between the sworn enemies in the world of supernatural, that is the vampires and the werewolves or wolves!!!!!!!!!!!

In the middle of all these destructions, someone was standing there still, as soon as some light due to the sudden flashing again, falls on the face of that still figure, his face becomes fully visible and it can be seen clearly that the person is none other than Abhay Raichand himself, the contours of his face have changed now, blood dropping from his two pale white fangs which have turned red by now cause of blood covering them, his blue shaded pupils are now violet or purple shaded, he looks worn out, badly injured, bruised, wracked up, huffing badly still, some scratches and deep wounds are formed in his arms, legs and chest which are bleeding badly, he alone has fought and managed to kill around twenty wolves by now but still he is standing upright as if some power is giving him the strength to fight still, to fight for his belonging, for his beloved, for his Piya and for their unborn.

Around twenty five wolves is still surrounding Abhay, yes as soon as Abhay had managed to kill half of the troops, again more wolves joined the troop, how will he fight more twenty five alone? but he will try with every ounce of his strength to fight back this whole troop, before anyone could sense anything else, again seven wolves all together leapt on Abhay making him fall on the ground, again a rapacious fight started but this time Abhay felt weak, defenseless but still continued to fight, he managed to bite two of the wolves and tear them apart but one of them managed to bite his left arm making it to bleed badly, a deadly scream escaped from his mouth while in the mean time another wolf managed to bite in his right leg giving him a unbearable pain, tears of blood rolled down his cheeks and only one face was now surrounding his mind, face of his angel, those baby brown eyes, as if giving him the courage to again get up and fight, no he can't lose, no he vowed to protect his angel and he will, Abhay with his other arm threw all the five wolfs and again tore away three of the wolves apart, but still twenty left and who knows may be more, no it's not the time to count the number of enemies, still he needs to fight all of them and then Jay and not to forget Trisha and god knows who else!!!!

Abhay looked around and saw still pairs of twenty gray eyes glittering in the dark, staring at him as if he was their prey, he gave a fierce scream and ran towards them in his vampiric speed, now he was fighting with all twenty alone and it seemed like he was losing now, he managed to kill one or two and throw some of them miles apart but so many seems to be impossible for him to fight and manage alone, suddenly one of the wolf leapt on his chest , but before it could have done some major harm, a powerful force threw it away at a distance of around eight or nine meters away, making Abhay shocked and gaped thinking who could have been his saviour now, Abhay looked around and found Piyali standing there, mumbling some spells and behind her stood his mom and dad with another six member of the vampire clan, and among them two were female while other four male and Abhay could easily sense that each member standing there was at least thousand years old or more than that as a complete strong and different aura was coming from them.

In a fraction of second all the wolves those were over abhay was thrown miles away and again a ferocious fight started but this time vampires were more in strength thus resulting in the defeat of the wolves.

Meanwhile Piyali, Chand and Haseena helped Abhay to get up from there and made him sit underneath a big banyan tree which was some miles away from the war zone. Piyali mumbled some spells and slowly slowly Abhay's wounds started to heal. Abhay recovered a bit but still he was weak.

Piyali made Abhay drink some potion which she made using some magical herbs, few drops of her own blood and few drops of wolves' blood.

Abhay felt a certain kind of energy building in him as soon as he gulped that potion, he was feeling that someone boosted him with double energy power now. He was now ready to fight back for his life, for his Piya, for his child at any cost, he will not lose this battle, he will not!!!!!!

Piyali looked at the confused expressions of Abhay, Chand and Haseena and understood their confusions, she smiled a bit and explained.

Piyali-: When Abhay and I left for searching Piya I took these herbs along with me because I knew very well that we have to face this kind of situations, these are magical herbs used by us witches to maximize our powers to certain extent, but yes only we white witches can use it and it will benefit us while for the black witch it will have opposite effect it will reduce their powers, but on other super naturals it will have a good effect if they drink these along with original white witch blood so, I did the same with Abhay it will now provide him more strength and all his weaknesses will be gone and as for wolf blood, u all know that it can heal injury caused by them so now Abhay is back to his usual self, all his weaknesses are gone now and is ready to fight again!!!!

Abhay who was quiet till now moved his body a bit and he realized that Piyali was right all his pain, strains were gone now, he broke the silence and spoke up,

Abhay-: Piyali, mom, dad u all should go back now, Piyali is right this potion worked and I am feeling completely fine now,

I am ready to fight alone now. I don't want anyone to come with me, I will take care of everything myself.

Haseena, Piyali and Chand were shocked with Abhay's decision now, how can someone be so selfless to think of others life before his own? Vampires are suppose to be heartless but today they understood that vampires too have a heart, at least vampires like Abhay Raichand have a heart, it may have stopped beating long ago but it was present inside him which made them aware of their humanity, of their past human existence, Haseena looked at Abhay and saw him few steps ahead of them, he was about to leave, no this time she won't let her son to be alone, this time they together will fight and whatever happens they will face it together. Haseena moved ahead and shouted, 'Abhay stop' making Abhay stop in his tracks.

Haseena-: Abhay, I know u want us to be here, safe but why don't u understand that u alone can't fight all of them, and if they succeeds in their plan then do u have any idea what will happen? Will we remain safe? No they will destroy us along with the whole world, everything will get over infront of our eyes and we will be helpless, do u want that Abhay?

Abhay-: but mom'

Chand interrupted in the middle,

Chand-: Abhay there is a limit of everything, we are coming with u that's it, I don't want to hear anything else, Piya and the unborn are not only u responsibility Abhay, we all are with u and we are equally going to take part in this war that's it.

Haseena-: yes Chand is right Abhay please we want to repent for our mistakes, for our sins that we did by killing ur family, innocent humans, plz let us do atleast this much for u.

Abhay-: Ok I won't stop anyone from coming with me if this is what u all want but I want Piyali to go back.

Piyali-: (shocked) what? Why would I go back? If others are going I will come too, that's it.

Abhay-: no u can't come with us, plz try to understand, if anything happens to u then how will angel come to this world? Piya and angel won't survive if anything happens to u and who will be responsible for all this, me, being a father I will be responsible if anything happens to angel, yes, I am being selfish here but as a father it's my first priority to keep u safe for my child's sake at least.

Piyali-: Abhay I can understand ur priority but do u have any idea what if something happens to ur child or Piya infront of ur eyes? Abhay try to understand, u can fight with wolves and warewolves but with Trisha u can't, no other supernatural other than a original white witch have the power to destroy her, to defeat her, and I promise I will use my powers in such a way that my protection shield won't break.

Abhay-: (frustrated) fine, do as u all want!!!!!

Before anyone could say anything else, Abhay stood up and in a fraction of seconds vanished from their sight while all others, Chand, Haseena and Piyali along with the vampire council members left and started following the way Abhay exited just now!!!!!

Jay's farmhouse

In the dark room

Piya was now just sitting at a place, at the corner of that dark, damp, cold room, unable to move herself a little she just rested her head on that strong brick wall, she was feeling a sudden kind of pain in her lower abdomen, as if her child wanted something from her, he was kicking her, hurting her but she was helpless she neither had the energy to shout nor had the strength to move, tears were just flowing through her eyes, but silently, no sobs nothing could be heard, she just moved a little bit to support herself well and silently prayed that may god send her angel, her Abhay, her saviour for her child soon, little did she know that god have granted her wish long ago, her saviour have already arrived!!!!!

Dehradhun jungle

Abhay was still running searching for any clue to find Piya, several questions surrounding his mind now, where must have Jay taken Piya? This part of jungle was totally unknown to him but one thing he was sure of, that is Piya was in this part of jungle, somewhere here, he could feel her but the question was where? No matter how he will have to find his Piya, he increased his pace more other vampires, Piyali all were following him too but he was like beyond anyone's reach he needs to reach to his Piya soon, each passing minute mattered to him more than anything else as he knew with every passing second his Piya was suffering through more and more pain and he vowed to keep away Piya from every pain, every earthly suffering and to keep her safe forever and he can't break his promise now, no matter what he will fulfill his promise now, at any cost!!!!

Jay's farmhouse

Jay and Trisha have finished their celebrations by now and were just sitting idle planning for their own selves, Jay was thinking how to posses power, success, everything, yes everything alone, for himself, and Trisha was thinking how to remove Jay from her way, how to rule alone, it's not that removing Jay was a tough job for her but now she needs him, she alone can't fight with other supernaturals all alone, she will use him as long as thorns are there in her way after that she will finish off this bloody warewolf herself, she gave a evil smirk to Jay while Jay was lost in his own world, in his own deep thinking!!!

Suddenly the knocking sound of the door brought them back to their reality and Jay sensed that someone from his own clan was there. Jay gestured Trisha to open the door and as soon as Trisha opened the door, a man huffing loudly, injured badly, bleeding, worn out, entered inside the room.

Without waiting for anyone to say anything else, he spoke up hurriedly,

The man-: leader, they... (Catching his breathe) they' have entered' entered our territory!!!

Jay-: (calmly) relax, relax a bit then speak, what do u mean by them? About whom are u talking about?

The man-; (relaxed a bit now) Abhay Raichand!!!

This one name was enough to make Jay and Trisha shocked, tensed and above all scared!!!!

Jay-; (shocked but composed himself) what he broke the treaty? How could he do that? He knows what this may result into but still? I must say that bloody vampire have got guts, what were u all doing then? U all couldn't finish him off?

The man-: leader more than fourty wolves are dead and few injured, I somehow managed to escape and come over here, he alone killed more than thirty wolves, I still can't believe, he is more powerful than we all assumed him to be.

jay-:( banging his fist) damn him he killed so many alone and still he is all right?

The man-: No he was injured badly and if his vampire armies along with that white witch haven't entered we could have finished him off by now.

Now it was time for Trisha to get,

Trisha-: (worriedly) bloody hell, that Piyali is here too? Jay we need to do something immediately, we can't let all of them to enter here, they all are powerful compared to us now call all Ur army we need to protect this farm house, we won't let them win so easily.

Jay nodded and ordered all the wolves to guard the farm house and he decided to stay in with Trisha for time being now, if needed he will step in too!!!!

Trisha mumbled some spells and the whole house was filled with smoke now, she was now ready to escape along with Piya if needed, if she sees that they are loosing the battle she alone will escape with Piya and as soon as the baby will be born Piya will die by herself and only she will rule the world!!!!

Jay was unknown to this he thought may be Trisha is trying to save him with her spells so he allowed to do Trisha everything in whatever way she wants.

The dark room in farm house again

Piya suddenly started feeling choked, she looked around and was shocked to realize that the whole room was full of smoke now, she began to cough badly and tried to breathe properly but it was like she was sort of oxygen now, Is it how if feels before death? She along with her unborn will die now? Is it what is called the last breathe? Is she breathing her last few breathe? No this can't be she can't die even before seeing Abhay for one last time, no god won't be so cruel to her, he can't take away her life before giving birth to this child, no, two drops of tears again escaped from her already swollen red eyes and her hand reached to her belly, she caressed her belly lovingly and silently prayed for her child's life, if god wants he can take her life but after this unborn will be born, before she could think more again she felt a sudden pain but this time she couldn't take it more, she lost her consciousness again, but before closing her eyes only one face swam before eyes, it was of none other than her saviour's face, her Abhay's face!!!!

Dehradhun jungle

Abhay suddenly stopped running and stood at the high land from where the whole other part of the jungle could be seen easily and being a vampire his sight was ten times more sharper to normal humans so, he could see everything more better, clearer compared to humans.

Meanwhile Piyali, Chand and Haseena along with the vampire council members caught up with him too and stood behind Abhay. All were surprised to see that Abhay was standing and observing something keenly, they followed his gaze and was shocked to see saw a big farm house surrounded by large number of wolves, more than one hundred at least!!!!

Piyali-: They are aware of our presence now, I am sure they must have done some preparation for the war by now, clever wolves, whatever god for us atleast we can see our enemies strength, now we have to take every step carefully, we have to act fast but carefully.

Abhay-: That's why I said u to stay back and...

Before Abhay could complete his sentence his face became pale, he was shocked to see black patches of smoke coming out from that house, if Piya was inside that house then? For few minutes he felt like his world crushing down into pieces infront of his eyes, what if something happens to piya or his angel? He will never forgive himself if'

Abhay-: (panicked) no, this can't happen, smoke... fire... my piya... my angel... no I won't let anything happen to them.

Piyali looked at the smoke coming from the house and at the terrified face of Abhay, she interrupted,

Piyali-: (calmly) Abhay relax I know Trisha very well all this are her plans, nothing will happen to Piya or ur angel, they will keep Piya alive till the baby is born, relax they are safe, Trisha is just trying to divert our attention and in this way they are thinking to take away Piya with them, but we won't let them do that, listen to me I have a plan.

Abhay-: (relaxed) Yes, u are right why didn't I think of these before they won't kill my Piya till they need her, we have to act with some plan now.

Piyali-: that's what I said, listen now Chand uncle and Haseena aunty with other and vampire council members will be outside and will fight with these wolves to divert their attention from us, Abhay and I will enter the farmhouse from some other way, I will stop jay and Trisha and Abhay u will take Piya away with u and get away from here don't even dare to look back, we all will reach home by ourselves, remember Piya will be ur main priority then.

Abhay-: no, that won't happen, I can't do that do u think, I can't be so selfish to leave u all alone and run away with Piya, I will keep Piya in some safe place, and will come back here.

Piyali-: no u will not do that, Abhay try to understand, Piya and ur baby needs u now, don't waste time by arguing now we have to act fast before they succeeds in their plan.

Chand-: yes, Piyali is right, we will manage these wolves u two manage Jay and Trisha and rest we will see.

Everyone agreed, Abhay reluctantly agreed too and without wasting any more time they went towards the farm house unknown to what their fate had in store for them!!!!!

Outside the farm house

As soon as they were few steps away from the farm house the whole troops of wolves surrounded them and again a ferocious battle started, Abhay killed five to six wolves alone while others were still fighting, meanwhile Aiyali found a way to enter the house, a open window, she mumbled some spells and the smoke cleared away, she entered the house followed by Abhay!!!!

Both decided to search on the upper floors first, they went upstairs to look for Piya, Jay or Trisha but couldn't find anyone. Piyali concentrated on her powers and assured Abhay that they are here only, Abhay too was feeling that Piya was here only, he could feel her presence, her smell very well, both started searching the whole house but could not find any sign of Piya or anyone else, at last Abhay came across that dark room where they had kept Piya before, he could feel very well that Piya was here, her smell her aura was there all around the room, he noticed that the stole of her bridal attire was lying at the right most corner of that room, he picked it up and saw it wrapped in dust and blood stained in it.

Abhay was feeling more restless now, bloody hell, they tortured his Piya, they dared to touch her, how could they? They gave her pain but he was supposed to save Piya from every kind of earthly suffering, pain right? Then, he failed? No he won't give away so easily, they will pay for every scratch they have given to his Piya and he himself will make sure of that, he will himself punish them, the rage which was suppressed till now started building in him now, and his deep blue oceanic eyes turned the shade of violet again, fangs replaced his pale white canines, he threw the stole away out of anger and turned back to his vampiric form again but this time more dangerous and determined!!!!

Meanwhile Trisha and Jay have managed to take an unconscious Piya with them, and hided themselves in the basement of the farmhouse which was a secret corner made for warewolves meeting only, vampires can't enter this area as it was enclosed by silver chains and the only way to enter here was with a secret passageway which can be only be opened after breaking all the silver chains which were impossible for vampires to even touch!!!

Outside the farm house

More than fifty wolves were dead by now but vampires were injured badly, Haseena was bleeding still, Chand was hurt too and one of the male council members was lying dead!!!

Inside the farm house

Piyali entered the dark room as soon as she saw Abhay entering it, she was surprised to see Abhay standing in that dark room in his transformed form, his facial expressions told her that he was hell angry now, full of rage, her eyes travelled towards the stained stole and she understood the reason behind Abhay's changed form. She rushed towards Abhay immediately.

Piyali-: Abhay calm down please, don't forget u are a vampire, u can smell someone from his or her smell of blood Abhay, concentrate and u will find her, just try to concentrate.

Abhay nodded and closed his eyes and tried to calm down a bit, the violet shaded eyes were again replaced by calm blue ones, he closed his eyes again, and this time he opened them after few minutes and spoke out, "They are somewhere in this building itself, let's go''!!!!

PS-: ok so here is the next part, after almost one and a half month I updated this ff, but I think this is the worst chapter I have ever written, I just lost the track, nothing is written properly, even I am not happy with the convo's, I wanted to show abhiya in this updt only but cause of my useless detailing I couldn't do that😭, I won't say sorry as I know u all are pissed of my sorry note but it's the truth I am highly disappointed with this one, not that I am saying that I get pleased with other updates but this one turned out crap, but still I am posting it as I have no energy to write again or go through it again, so read, if u like it do press the like button and good or bad please comment, atleast a small one, it encourages me a lot. Pardon me for the delay and yea love u all. Thanks for all the previous likes and comments.😳

Edited by Rmuk - 12 years ago
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Note-: friend, plz press the like button of this post for those who wants to recieve pm's. I have lost my diary where i had made the previous pm list so need to make a new one, i pm'd everyone this time, but from next updt only people in this list will get pm's, so it's my request to u all hit the like button of this post and if like button doesn't works then mention in ur comment the words 'plz pm me' i will add u ok.

Edited by Rmuk - 12 years ago
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omgg this is bullshit how come jeh and trisha become so selfish that they even dont care abt poor soul and torture her to such a extent... i pity on pia and abhay... he had injured severly and then also he didnot care abut his life but his moto is to free his love... a true love... infact i appereciate piyali effort and gud dat chandeen have guilt 4 their act of killing abhay's innocent family but being vampy abhay didnot 4ve up his humanity... emotional update
Edited by trishnawaliya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update romi...
ek k bad ek mussibt aayi n uss se bahr niklne ka rasta bhi aaya..that was fab written..lovd convo of all.hope pia is safe n piyali n abhay reach thr soon.awsm update.
Edited by sukugeny - 12 years ago
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U know wat Romi? I felt the same way after updating my FF after more than 2 months But I didn feel u have lost the touch or the story had lost its essence U needed to take a break due to ur exams n I am glad u gave us an update once ur exams got over 😊 Coming to the update, it was really very good 👏 Abhay fought with more than 30 wolves n managed to kill them all by himself? 😲 No wonder they say desperate situations calls for desperate measures 😉 Glad Abhay could fight his way n defeat the wolves n find his way back to his love n lil angel 😳 Trisha is pure evil 😡 I guess only Piyali can defeat her n I hope she finishes tat evil woman once n for all 😡 She was backstabbing Jeh n well wat else can u expect from her? Besides Jeh deserves it 🤢 I hope Abhay n Piyali reach Pia on time to save her from Trisha 😳 I am sure the superiors n Chandeena can take care of the wolves n I hope Chandeena remain safe Nice update dear 👏 n please stop apologising after every update

Edited by mandy1024 - 12 years ago
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wow so cool yar i loved it❤️ of course yar wo ABHAY RAICHAND hai akela hi sab ke liye kafi hai😉 oh this jay nd trishna are getting on to my nerves😡 hope pia is fine...!
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wow great story plz update soon
i wonder what is going to happend to pia and her baby
thanks for the pm
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That was awesome...jus loved it...it was too good...jus wow i wud say...thnks 4d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!
Jeh n Trisha r torturing Piya soo much! Hope Abhay saves her soon.Poor girl is enduring so much pain.
Trisha is backstabbing Jeh;well serves him right.
Piyali is so much helpful;Abhay is always hell protective about Piya.Loved his desperate fight 2 save his love.
Continue asap.
Edited by cutesukirti1987 - 12 years ago

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