New ff- the fateful night bk2 updt on pg 138 2/11 - Page 97

Originally posted by: Divya6696

Nope.. I want it now..!!!

Hehe.. kidding baby.. take your time.. 😃

Lol darling thanksie

Originally posted by: Aish-Naksh

res again me first yapieee 😛
Just loved it..u describe it very well i love ur writing style..hope abhiya meet again sooon really very sooon because its so long time..abhiya just rock..jay n trishna so much bad na...i just hate them..plzz update sooon asap.thanks 4 pm..once again just loved it..update ur broken paradise too ok...

Lol yea u are first!!!
awww thanks a lot dear, u like my writing style😲 lol shocking!!!!
yea they will meet soon dear. I know they are villian na, lol glad u liked it so much re!!!
yea will updt by tonight.
U are welcome dear and thanks again re!!!

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

ah it was hell long tym

well awsm update

please ab toh jaldi se abhiya ko mlvaa do😳

lol yea I am late. Thanks a lot dear. Yea they will be united soon.

Originally posted by: koli97

waiting 4 dearr romi🤗take ur time😉

Yea di it's almost done will reply to comments and write the rest and post it.

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Yea di it's almost done will reply to comments and write the rest and post it.

🤗okk dear😊

Originally posted by: koli97

🤗okk dear😊

😳

Originally posted by: mandy1024

<font color="#0000ff" size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"> That was an awesome update Romi 👏0„2Wat makes u say it isn't good? 😡0„2It was well written also. So now that Abhay has broken the treaty wonder wat will happen to the Raichands 0„2I hope Chandeena n Piyali are all safe 😭0„2I liked Jeh's story. It was written very well. What else can u expect from a creep like him? 🤢0„2But I guess some part of Pia knew that truth n tat was the reason she didn give in to his so called charms 😛0„2Poor Pia 😭0„2I hope Abhay reaches on time, n finishes those 2 creeps off for good 😡0„2Abhay is hurt so badly 😭0„2n I hope Chandeena come to the rescue soon 😳0„2Now that Pia has been feeding on blood will their baby turn negative? 0„2I hope nothing happens to both Pia n the baby. So its a boy? 😊0„2Tats good news 😳0„2Please stop feeling bad at the end of each update Romi 0„2Ur doing a good job n I always look forward to reading this story 😊</font>

Awww manasa thank u so much for ur lovely comment, means a lot to me yaar!!! Lol coz I myself got confused with what I wrote lol, awww thanks re writers like u think it's well written is a big compliment!!!
Hmmm what will happen to raichand's u will see in next updt.
Glad u liked jeh's story and u think I managed to write it well, thanks dear.
Yup u are ri8 piya knew, her heart didn't let her trust him and u know our heart never lies.Hmmm he will reach them soon.
Yea abhay is injured badly, yea they will come. Hmmm that u will know in future updates, hopefully not😉
Yup it's boy😉
Awww I will try to be confident from next ones lol, awww thanks a lot!!!

Originally posted by: .rumki.

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awesome update👏. So Abhay finally crossed the boundary to save Pia. But how will he fight alone? Hope Chandeena will help him</font></font>

Thanks dear!!!
Yup he broked the treaty and yea they will help him for sure.

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Gunner

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Still not unresed 😔

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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wow!!wow!! wat a wonderful update romi!!! 👏 it was mindblowing!!! 👏 why u thing its boring?? its awesuum dear! 👍🏼 I loved this update very much! 😊 the way you described the darkness,beauty and danger of the forest was just brilliant! 👏 then the way you portrayed abhay,his feelings,agony,love n determination n to break every boundary for pia was just outstanding!! ⭐️ abhay went to save pia alone and didnt even wait for others to come becoz he didnt want to risk chandeena's life!! wat an amazing vampire he is! that is y we love Abhay Raichand so much!!! and you explaind all ths wonderfully dear. 👏 I liked piyali. she seems to be genuinely worried for abhay and ready to help him in anyway.thts really nyc! 😊 oh..pia is suffering so much! her tears falling in the ground and vanishing in the dark...there is no one to say that..pia I am here...no one to soothe her...' oh..i loved this lines and the way u brought out her pain is soo beautiful..!! dear your writing is becoming more n mre wonderful wth each update! bravo!! 👏 I hope chandeena will nw help abhay in whatever way they can. and they decided to break the treaty n help abhay,that shows no matter what they are,no matter they are heartless predators bt still they are more human than humans...which is truly remarkable...!! and gosh..this jay!! he is totally disgusting!! 🤢 I hope abhay kills him soon bt before that he teaches jay a very gud lesson...! he is more evil than trisha and he deserves to be punished!! now I hope abhay reaches soon n saves pia along with their unborn! Trisha is feeding pia blood and thats really dangerous,i hope pia n the unborn remains safe! Am feeling scared for angel.donno what this trisha is upto! Plzz carryon soon dear...cant wait for the next...thanks a lot for this wonderful update...and thanx for the pm...🤗

p.s. am really very very sorry for unresing so late rey..bt u knw the reason na.? so plz dnt mind dear... and update soon...tk..cre..🤗

Indu dear thank u so much dear for ur lovely comment and appreciation!!!
Dear it means to me a lot when amazing writers like u appreciate my works yaar!! Thank u so much.
glad u liked all those things, ur detailing comments always makes me know my works better and tell me how much I have improved!!!
yea u are ri8 abhay is a vampire with golden heart though vampires are supposed to be heartless but he have a heart not beating but alive which reminds him of his humanity, which makes him so special, that's why we love abhay raichand so much. Yup piyali is a imp and positive character here!!!
oh gosh u loved that part to tell the truth for the first time I liked some part of my work and that was that part and thank u so much for liking them.
awww thanks dear, I try to improve always and all ur and my readers compliments helps me to improve a lot.
yup chandeena will help abhay in everyway, yup abhay's goodness have made them remember their humanity again.
jay is a creep here dear, original villian lol. He will be punished soon ok.
hmmm yea abhay will reach their soon. Abt this blood thing and it result in future u will know with coming updates. Trish is upto what I reavealed already but if she succeeds or not that time will tell😉
awww, I will updt by tonight for sure.
U are always welcome dear!!!
dear it's ok plz stop saying sorry yaar u commented it's enough for me and yea will tc u too tc. And once more thabks a ton for this lovely comment!!!

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Nice. Waiting for the fight scenes nw!

Thanks, hmmm they will be in next updt.

Originally posted by: --Rose--

Awesome update dear:-):-)

Thanks a lot swthrt!!!

Originally posted by: TeDylove

<font size="3">my darling sis this is the best update u give ever...i must say...👏</font>

gosh cd thank u so much yaar for ur sweet appreciation!!!

Originally posted by: abjeya

i am just requesting one thing. please don't make abhiya's child evil. please...

Thanks dear for reading, hmmm will try to keep ur request dear!!!

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987

Amazing update dear!
Who said it was boring?
So power of love dragged Abhay 2wards d direction in which Piya is n Abhay broke d treaty 2 save Piya n their baby! 👏 I feel soo bad 4 Piya,she s in so much pain n dunno dat Black bitch n doggy Jeh😡 r gonna do with her.
So jeh didn't knew abt Piya being a special child earlier n dat s why he left her on d marriage day 2 humiliate n break her bt achha hi hua Piya ghar se bhaag gayi aur usey Abhay mil gaya.
Plss continue soon n end d suffering of Piya soon.

Thanks kirti yaar for ur lovely comment.
Yup power of love dragged abhay to the way where his beloved is!!! Yea re piya is in lots of pain, well they will make piya suffer but abhay will return them the suffering ten times more!!! Yup he didn't know piya being a spl child beforehand, yea ri8 varna abhiya kaise milte lol.
Yup will updt toni8 and piya's suffereing will end soon!!!

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

nice update.

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: J.LO

lovely rd

Thanks swthrt

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

mindblowing update romi!!!!! u described everythng so beautifully👏 Nw our ABHAY RAICHAND has stepped in the battle field jeh nd his vanar sena to gayi kam se...😉

Thanks a lot juhi yaar. Awww glad u liked it yaar!!! Lol yea jay ka banar sena gaya kaam se rofl!!!