My First FF- YEH VAADA RAHA(chp 19 pg147) - Page 91

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HII friends,i know all of you are very angry with me as its been ages since i updated the ff.😳😳 but i m really sorry i was hell busy these days😔. here i have come with an update but i m not satisfied with the way it has turn out to be😒, i really wanted to give a fantastic n long update to you guys but i guess its due to the long break that i couldn't write it well😔...i had to go through previous chapters to understand where the story is going. so its very average chapter...sorry in advance if you wont like it or if you all have also lost the track of story then do let me know i will discontinue it. n sorry for the grammatical mistakes as i didnt have time to read n check it again 😳

CHAPTER 16 RELATIONS, EMOTIONS N COMPETITION

Weeks passed and 10 galas were already over. Till now journey of Hurricane was pretty smooth. They worked really hard and managed to secure their positions in top 5. the producers and organizers of the show were happy with high TRP's and contestants were happy with increasing fan following and such a big platform they were getting by this show. Hurricane was no different, they were also happy that finally there dream will come true. However abhay was not at peace completely. He was happy for the band but somewhere in his heart he felt his happiness is incomplete without his loved ones. He was missing them badly. He was standing in his room near the window, engrossed in his thoughts. He was missing his mother's sweet and encouraging words. Though haseena has phoned him few times but he wanted to have some quality time with his mother so that he can see how happy she is for him, the shine of pride in her eyes for him. And although it seemed weird to him too but it was true that he was missing his father also. No matter how irritating chand was but he has become habituated to their little arguments. Infact he loved to poke him and loved the way he always win in their fights leaving chand more irritated(he let out a small laugh at his wicked thoughts) but he secretly hoped that may be chand also missing him and he will come to meet him, hug him and be proud on him forgetting all their differences.

He came out of his thoughts by a knock on the door. A person came and informed him that his dad chand raichand has come to meet him. He felt suddenly god has listened to his pleading heart and a warm smile crept on his handsome face and he went to meet his father.

IN THE LOBBY

Chand was standing facing the gate, hands in pockets of pants, waiting for Abhay, all lost in thoughts but his facial expressions were giving idea that he was preparing the agenda of his meeting with his son and repeating in his mind that this time he should not let him win n make sure that he will come with him right away. Abhay was coming towards him, smiling, happily surprised but the moment their eyes met he understood that they will be having another heated argument.

Chand – Abhay, I want to talk something really important to you.

Abhay (sarcastically)- I know dad, that's why you are here, obviously you were not missing me.

Chand – stop being sarcastic. I am not in a mood to start an argument.

Abhay(boring tone)- yeah right, so whats your important issue.

Chand (excitedly)- I am going to Newyork to sign a deal with the leading company there. It will be a big deal for Raichand Industries after that we will be huge name in international market. The business world, news agencies all are looking forward for this deal ant not only this it will open new avenues for us all over the world…..

Abhay (in a boring tone and confusion written over his face)- dad…dad…I understood what are you trying to say…but why are you saying this to me???

Chand (decisive tone)- because I want you to come with me. This is a perfect platform to launch you in business world….and…

Abhay (started laughing, a tinge of challenge in his laughter)- and what made you think that I will come with you?

Chand(now angry on his behaviour n irked with that challenge he threw in front of him by laughing blatantly on his decision)- why are you laughing like an idiot? I am not joking. I want you to come with me n that's final.

Abhay (now highly irritated)- seriously dad I think you should go to see some doctor or is it because of the old age that keep forgetting things? Have you forgotten about your challenge?

Chand(angrily)-I remember it very well, I am not asking you to leave the show, I am just asking you to come with me for two days…just two days. It is a life time opportunity for you. Why don't you get it???

Abhay (irritated and angry, not willing to lose this battle of argument as if it's the matter of his pride n honour)-thanks for remembering dad…but just for your information..you had given me two years and till then no interference….so your business deal n foreign clients can just go to hell. I m not interested in coming with you, besides the rule of the show doesn't permit me to go anywhere between the show.

Chand(trying to argue)-but abhay….

Abhay (showing indifference)- you can go dad, I have to prepare for next gala round.

Chand (raising voice in a last hope to convince him)- Abhay just listen to me once.

Abhay (gritting teeth to control his anger)- you listen to me dad, everytime I try to bridge the gap between us..everytime you ruin my efforts. Everytime I hope that you will understand me but everytime you crush that hope. Now I think you can never understand me…may be I should stop expecting any kind of support or anything from you. But I would like to request just one thing dad…plz let me live in peace ..atleast here. Now plz go before anyone notices our lovely meeting, I don't want to create any scene here.

IN ABHAY'S ROOM (academy)

Abhay was on the phone, talking to pia who was consoling him and asking to concentrate on practice n forget about anything else.

Pia (patiently)- try to understand abhay, he is your dad..in a way he is right at his place.

Abhay(sounding shocked n hurt)- I cant believe itt. Your are taking his side. You are pointing my mistakes.

Pia (calmly)- abhay I am not taking anybody's side….and don't over react, first you need to calm down. Come-on, stop being angry n take a deep breath and focus….

Abhay (highly irritated)- for god sake pia…I don't need your advice. to hell with your deep breath n focus. I don't wanna talk to you. Sometimes you just talk like dad and I hate that and right now I hate you (he cut the call without giving her any chance to speak)

On the other side pia was shocked at what he said and how he cut the call in middle. She became angry too and stared blabbering in anger – "what does he thinks of himself..huh?? Mr. sadu, rude, arrogant…I was just trying to help him n he…he…fine (talking to disconnected handset) I will not give you any advice…argghhh…I hate you too."

Shona was passing by her room and heard her blabbering which raised her curiosity to know the reason of her anger though she knew it must be something related to abhay and she enjoyed their little fights so how could she miss this one.

Shona (innocently)- any problem di??

Pia (still looking at the phone angrily but secretly wishing that it will ring any time and abhay will say sorry)- yes, a big problem and you its name is Abhay.

Shona (controlling her laughter)- really? What did he do?

Pia (narrated the whole story)- can you believe it? He cut the call.

Shona (showing fake anger)- What? He cut your call. I didn't expect this from him. He really did a big mistake. You should not forgive him this time. Let him be alone, sad, frustrated, angry (accentuating these words to draw pia's attention) so what if it would affect his performance, he did a big mistake and he should pay for it so what if he was in a bad mood (tried reading pia's expression who had already started melting on hearing those words which she used to describe abhay's state)

Pia (feeling guilty)- actually he is not at fault completely. He had a fight with his dad and I was lecturing him about relations n all that…may be he got frustrated n said those things in anger.

Shona (controlling her laughter and still showing fake anger)- so what di? But he shouldn't have acted that way.

Pia (now looking worried as finally it hit her mind that what abhay must be going through)- but shona…he was angry on his dad…n now on me (looking down with guilt). You know him na, he is very emotional, he will keep this things in mind and it will affect his performance…damn..what I have done. He needed me n I couldn't understand it. I should go to meet him…right now (she left without waiting for shona's answer) on the other hand shona was smiling on her di's innocence n cute fights of two lovers.)

ACADEMY (PRACTICE ROOM)

Hurricane was practicing for the upcoming gala round. Everyone was trying his best except Abhay who was all lost in thoughts and finding it difficult to concentrate. After third time when he sang wrongly Angad became angry.

Angad (irritated)-AR what are you doing yaar? Focus man, you are two notes higher than the required pitch.

Danish- yes, angad is right. AR take a break if you are stressed out but remember we can't make any mistake at this stage.

Abhay (showing indifference)-yeah right, now all of you also have problem with me. Then I should better go from here (left the room leaving all of them puzzled at his behaviour)

Ruhi (confused)- guys ye AR ko kya ho gaya hai achanak. Kabir tumhe kuch pata hai kya?

Kabir (scratching his head)- I don't know, let me find out (went to look abhay)

Abhay was in his room again, muttering something under his breath and crumbling the piece of paper in his hand in which he has written the song for his next performance. Kabir saw it and ran to save it as they didn't have any other copy of it.

Kabir (snatching the paper)- AR, what are you doing? Bechare paper par toh taras kha usne tera kya bigada hai?

Abhay (angrily)- kabir, I am not in a mood of talking, leave me alone.

Kabir – par hua kya?

Abhay (more angry)- oh God, everyone is hell bent on irritating me first dad then pia…now you…leave me alone (threw a pillow on kabir n told him to get out)

Kabir (catching the pillow)- ok ok chillax dude…I am leaving(he left before abhay throw something hard on him) he saw pia was just about to enter the room.

Kabir – hii pia. Thank God you came, AR ka dimag kharab ho gaya hai, only you can handle him.

Pia- I know kabir, he is upset because of me, I will make everything right.

Kabir (smiling)- I know you will…best of luck…and beware…the volcano named Abhay can erupt any time (winked at her and left)

Pia knocks on the door

Abhay (shouting)- kabir, I think I made it clear to you. I dont want to talk to anyone.

Pia (asking from outside)-not even with me?

Abhay (quiet surprised to see her but maintained his sadu attitude)-yes, you included. (looked to the otherside)

Pia (entering inside)- abhay plz look at me. Okay I am sorry. At least listen to me.

Abhay (showing more attitude)- listen to you…when I asked you the same what you did…you were lecturing me about how to be a good son.

Pia (looking down)- I am saying sorry na. I was just trying to help you. I don't like it when you fight with your dad, we should respect out parents and their wishes n not fight with them.

Abhay (was cooling down a bit by her sorry was irked again at her last sentence, he moved close and clutched her from shoulders)- pia..pia…pia….that happens in your family. Your family is perfect. Your upbringing is different….and my family…my relations with my dad are very different…you wont understand pia…you have always experienced a loving n caring nature of your parents but I have seen completely a different side. Its not that I don't respect my dad but …but I have always longed for a complete family n its love..and I still do….(closing his eyes and sighs) and no matter how much I try to solves my issues with dad, he…(voice heavy n low, reflecting his pain) he always find ways to irritate me..n now I am tired of all this. I only have you pia n whenever I feel upset I just want you to listen to me, my heart n understand me…but you…(anger returning in his voice, left her with jerk).you know what…something I really hate in you is that you always come up with your so called intelligent advice at the wrong time which is just impractical to follow….gosh!! why you always try to prove him right…why cant you listen to my POV.

Pia (she had the idea that abhay is upset but she didn't know he will react like this. She was not prepared for this n hence didn't have any answer she could just feel that he is really hurt n she is also the reason for it so tears of guilt n hurt came from her eyes n voice became shaky)- I am really sorry abhay. I didn't mean to hurt you…I was just…I thought (started crying unable to control her tears anymore)

Abhay (turned around hearing her sobs, the sight of pia, crying helplessly n guilt written all over her face did something to his heart that he didn't understand but suddenly he started feeling strange pain in his heart as it couldn't stand the sight of love of his life crying like this just because of his rude behavior. He forgot his anger n melted in few seconds. He took her in his arms)- hey pia, pia stop crying plz. You know I cant see you like this.

Pia (still crying, though she felt it in the warmth of the hug that he has already forgiven her but she wanted to be sure)- are you still angry at me??

Abhay (caressing her hair)- no..no baby. Plz stop crying (cups her face n wipes her tears with his thumbs) I was never angry at you…just frustrated and upset with the situation. I am really sorry, I always end up venting it out on you. I am a very bad boyfriend, always makes you cry.

Pia (hugging him)- no, you are the best thing that has ever happened in my life and don't say sorry, its ok. Usually in such situations we fight with the one we love most.

Abhay (tightening his grip around her)-thanks for bearing with me n my mood swings. Really you are my rock, my support system. I don't know what will I do without you. Plz stay by my side…. Always.

Pia (parting a little and looking into his eyes with all the love she had)- I will, I will be there for you…always . nothing can separate us n nothing can change my love for you.

The confidence with which she was saying each word brought a sudden rush of emotions inside abhay's heart. His heart swelled up with pride of having such a girl in his life and deep ocean of love inside it told him to never let her go n shower this girl with love n exactly the same he did by showering sweet little kisses all over her face and mumbling "I love you" between each kiss and at last he touched his lips to her soft waiting lips n kissed her passionately pouring out his love and all those feelings which he couldn't convey through words. After what seemed like an eternity, they parted, but didn't let go of each other, holding very close, foreheads touching, arms encircled around each other's waist, breathing heavily but feeling each others' proximity n warmth. They stayed like this for few minutes until there breathing became normal.

Pia (breaking the sweet silence n parting a little)-abhay, your band needs you. You all have come so far now you don't want to return empty handed…right. Problems will come in your way but you will compete till end. (caressing his face with the back of her hand) you should go now, all are waiting for you. I should also leave.

Abhay (pulling her again in a tight hug, refusing to let her go n complaining like a kid)- no, you are not leaving so soon. 10 galas are over meaning 10 weeks…10WEEKS pia. We havent's met properly infact we don't even talk as often as we used to because all my time goes into this damn practice. I missing you so much, when this damn show will get over?

Pia (distancing herself from him with difficulty n smiling on his childish behaviour)- abhay stop behaving like 10 year old kid. You need to do this "damn" practice in order to win this "damn" show (air quoted the words mocking him) its your dream remember. N about missing me…well, I also miss you but don't forget we also have other responsibilities to fulfill…right.

Abhay (pouting)- I hate it when you say the right thing.

Pia(laughing)- but I love it when you agree like an obedient child (kissing his cheeks) n by the way stop complaining ..you are lucky as you are localite, though for less time but atleast we can meet but think about others, they have also came leaving their loved ones and they cant even see them.

Abhay (caressing her hair)- actually you are right, its not enough to just dream we had to endure lots of pain, do lots of hard work to turn it into reality. But I don't care about anything when you are with me (kisses her on forehead)…but the thought of not meeting you….not seeing you for weeks…whoa!!...its dreadful!!!

They were disturbed by the knock on the door. It was kabir who came to inform abhay that the all the contestants are called in the hall where the organizers will make some important announcement.

IN THE HALL

Abhiya came there hand in hand n stood with the other people.

On person form the organizers/producers team- so all the guys n girls, I have some really good news for you all. You will be glad to know that last week our show broke all the records of TRPs in the history of music reality shows on TV (contestants cheered and shouted, whistled with excitement) since our show has contestants from not just India but other countries also, it is getting good response globally and to cash this popularity we have decided we will be shooting remaining galas and the finale outside India. We will shoot at some happening places of the world by giving it the form of live concert.(all the contestants were happily shocked) yes you heard it right! You will be traveling at different places for next 5 weeks and will get to perform live between your fans n will be judged by live audience. So what are you waiting for??? Pack your bags (there was loud noise, cheers, whistles, hurrays, screams from among the contestants. Some also become worried as the format has changed a little n its going to be more difficult to perform live. But the expressions of two persons in the crowd were unexplainable, they were none other than abhiya. Eyes were giving the idea of desperation to be with each other, heart was aching due to intolerable pain, face was showing fear of not being able to meet each other yet lips were curved in a fake smile to show that they are the part of the crowd which was busy in celebrating this news)

As soon as the crowd dispersed pia turned around to avoid eye contact with abhay to hide her tears and said bye to him.

Abhay (stopping her)- that's it……..i am quitting the show.

Pia (shocked at his words)-do you know what are you saying?

Abhay (looking helpless)- then what do I suppose to do? 5 weeks without you….will not be able to see you…no, no way…I cant…oh god just few minutes ago I was dreading this thought n it has come true….hell why did I say such things??? (pulling her close) how will I manage without you?

Pia (showing some courage in order to motivate him)- don't be stupid abhay. Remember what you said just few minutes ago, "its not enough to just dream we had to endure lots of pain, do lots of hard work to turn it into reality". So you cant back out now.

Abhay (desperation in his voice)- but I don't want to stay away from you, (pleading like a child) plz come with me, we will go together.

Pia (smiling on his childish act)- abhay…you know its not possible and stop being over dramatic, its just 5 weeks…we have to be strong. And may be this for our betterment, you will have all the time for practice and I can concentrate on exams, after all I don't want to fail in exam like you (both chuckled at her last statement)

Abhay (finally accepting defeat as he knew there is no other option)- to say that I will miss you is an understatement….i will crave for you…god knows how I gonna make it with out you…how will I survive

Pia(assuring him)- don't worry our love will give you both courage to survive the test of time and motivation to win this competition. (kissing on forehead n bidding goodbye) now I should better go…all the best love.

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next chapter- birthday surprise

thnk god u updated,i was waiting for it from sooo long😛
coming to the update it was awsome😉
that chand😡😡 hw can he be like that😡😡 he shuld support his son😡😡
i loved abhiya part😳 a they will be apart frm 5 weeks
continu soon this time please😳

u knw wat i was badly missing this ff but as u were busy so i am not at all mad at u as we ha8e our own priorities... thaks dat now u updated... a gud mixed emotional update, hope some day chand understand his son and their relation get improve...

nice update anjali. abhiya cute fights, their making up was very sweet and their impending parting was touching

Anji awesome update👏 loved the Abhiya parts they were so cute😳 Abhiya will be separated for 5 weeks Looking forward to the next chapter😳