My First FF- YEH VAADA RAHA(chp 19 pg147)

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Anj01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1111

Originally posted by: devilish-grin
awesome update...it was lovely n dat dress was also gorgeous

thanks dear😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1112

Hey dear sorry fr nt commenting earlier. Awsm update. Luved abhiya romance. 😳 thax fr pm.

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Anj01

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: i_luv_abhiya
Hey dear sorry fr nt commenting earlier. Awsm update. Luved abhiya romance. 😳 thax fr pm.

hey no need to say sorry
thanks for reading n liking it😊

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@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Wonderful update anji!!! 👏 Brilliant potray of scenes!! Its commendable the way u wrote the thing. This chapter had a major turning point and u have explained every scene wth required details.👏
frm abhay meeting his friend alina,shona to-his mother was very aptly explained!👍🏼 the lovely n cheerful relation btw abhay n sona comes alive in dis update!👏
abhay-chand argument was very well penned. Serves chand right bt sad to see he had no change of heart. And it will never change i guess. And ths is surely going to bring trouble for abhay n pia in future.😔
haseena-abhay moment was endearing. 😊 The mother-son had bth missd eachother soo much.
Nw pia! Oh..anji u have dne truly a great job here. Abhay n his restless to meet pia was so realistically shown! The way he was searching her,then getting agitated in nt being able to meet her was so natural n systematically written it makes the whole thng mre effective!bravo!👏
so all their barries had gne nw. 😳
hope ths dsnt bring any trouble for pia in future.

i loved the part-where abhay insisted pia to wear what she is comfortable in n nt to wear to please him. It say how genuinue his feelings her n how wonderful a man he is. 😳
Overall Great work! 👍🏼 Thanks 4 pm.
Precap-sona in hospital? I always felt u knw the amount of heighlight her character received,that sumthng is nt ryt, sumthngs going to happn to sona. I hope she stays safe.

P.S. Sorry for late comment bt u knw i was very busy. Sorry again. :(

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