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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice cs and prologue. Add me in ur pm list nd continue soon.
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Originally posted by: Jiya_tariq

Nice cs and prologue. Add me in ur pm list nd continue soon.



thanks jiya
will continue n pm u soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start
loved it
cont soon
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beautiful prologue dr!!nd nice cs:-)pm me when u update next
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loved it yar...
awsome prologue...
cot soon
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waiting 4 it starting...
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Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta

nice start
loved it
cont soon
please pm me when u update



thanks for ur comments...will pm u😊
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beautiful prologue dr!!nd nice cs:-)pm me when u update next



thanks...will update soon😊
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loved it yar...
awsome prologue...
cot soon
pm me tooo
waiting 4 it starting...



thanks for commenting
will update tonight n pm u😊
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thanks for ur support guysšŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—...first i was nervous abt it😳 but thanks to u all i feel so confident to continue it...will update tonight.😊
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guys here is the first chapter enjoy😳 n do hit the like button n comment.😊

CHAPTER 1- INTRO OF OUR HERO ABHAY AND HIS GANG.

LONDON, UK

There was a huge crowd on the ground situated backside of the building of a college of London. Everybody was shouting , cheering and making noise n going crazy with joy n excitement …all were youngsters…students of that college n they were cheering for their favourite band – "HURRICANE" which was performing live on the stage in front of them. Yes the band's name is HURRICANE, which truly represents the nature of all its members ie cheerful, full of energy, vivacious, flamboyant n that care a damn attitude that they all have.

As the first song finished, everybody clapped, some girls shouted I LOVE YOU KABIR, you are simply great!!!!!šŸ˜‰. Then they all began shouting one name in unison- AR….we want AR….we want AR and then suddenly all lights were put off and people become quite then one spot light fall on the center of the stage. There was standing a male figure, holding an electric guitar in his hands. His back towards the audience but they know that he was none other than their very own college hero, lead singer of the band AR (as in Abhay Raichand),šŸ˜Ž the moment he turned his face towards audience one girl shouted- LOVE YOU…AR..ROCK THE STAGE BABY,šŸ˜‰ he winked at her and moved his fingers on guitar and with this there was a thunderous sound of clapping. He began with his favourite singer Enrique Iglesias's song- "I LIKE IT". With this every one was charged up with new found energy and began shouting his name louder than ever. Sweating heavily after that lively performance he removed his jacket and drank some water directly from the bottle and also put some water over his head to cool down….with every drop of water falling from his head to his chest making his shirt wet and making him look more sexy.😳

The band performed some other songs which were their original compositions and set the stage on fire. At the end of the event all members of the band (viz, Abhay the lead singer and guitarist, Kabir the lead guitarist, Danish the drummer, Angad who played keyboard and Ruhi the female singer) came to the center of the stage and AR aka Abhay held the mike and said- "Thank you friends for all your support and all the encouragement and love you have given to HURRICANE all these years. As you all know this was our last year so we all have to leave. But we'll never forget these wonderful years of our lives and although this is the last performance of HURRICANE in this college but we'll return soon and this time on a bigger platform. Thanks to college authorities for granting permission for this last performance and bye to all…may you all have bright future.

Scene fades….

NEXT MORNING

Abhay was looking in the mirror thinking seriously whats need to be done with his looks so that his parents will not be shocked to see him like this. Suddenly a voice called him and he looked back coming out of his thoughts and said with a smile- Whats up Kabir???

Kabir (amused face)-😲what are u doing man? Have u got Ruhi fever?šŸ˜†

Abhay(shocked)- what???😲

Kabir-yeah. You heard it right because only she keeps standing in the front of mirror for hours admiring herself and then also irritates poor Angad asking how does she looks. Bechara Angad galat phas gaya ruhi ke saath.

Abhay (laughing)-šŸ˜† hey don't say that. They are cute couple. Now plz help me. Buddy I need to change my get up so that mom n dad can recognize me.

Kabir- ok bro got it. HmmmšŸ¤”ā€¦ā€¦first you need a hair cut and shave and get out of these funky clothes and put on some casual clothes which normal college students wear and yes..prefer long sleeve shirt to hide your big tattoo on your left upper arm.

Abhay (frustated)- OH GOD!!! With all this I feel I am loosing my identity.

Kabir (laughing)-šŸ˜† you will loose much more when your dad will come to know the truth.

Abhay (trying to avoid eye contact)- what are you talking about???

Kabir – I mean I can bet that you haven't tell your dad about your decision that you wanna make career in music and…..(pauses)…you have FAILED in your exams.

Abhay- ok ok…but don't point fingers at me. You also didn't do well in exams and other members also didn't have great result and not to forget Ruhi has also failed…..i mean common yaar we all were busy in that music completion and we also won 1st prize. So I don't feel guilty about the result.

Kabir- yes its true that we don't have good results but its not our dads who is desperately waiting for his son to return n join the business and hoping that his son is busy in collecting medals in studies NOT IN MUSIC.

Abhay (calmly)- chillax yaar. Why are you shouting???

Kabir- I am not shouting AR…I am worried for you.

Abhay- don't worry buddy. I know its difficult but everything gonna be alright at the end. Now come, tomorrow we have to leave so mujhe apna hulia sudhaarna hai.

Scene fades…..

AIRPORT

Kabir and Abhay are leaving for Mumbai to their respective homes. And Daniush to pune. Angad and Ruhi have come to see off them. They are not going as though they are Indians also but their families are settled here only. They both are together since childhood n r engaged now.

Abhay was at the airport with Kabir and Danish. They were talking about the old days. How they come here for studies, met each other and become friends as they shared common interest ie music. Then Angad and Ruhi joined the gang and they decided to make their own band HURRICANE. They never imagined that what started as their time pass will become their passion. Hurricane become popular in college and they started participating in many competitions at bigger level and won many prizes and their band become quite famous n that's how they decided to make it their permanent career.

With the announcements for their flights they came out of past memories and bid goodbye to each other and promise to meet soon to shape up their career.

Scene fades…..following lines* echoed in background:-

Don't know what destiny holds for us

We'll accept it without a fuss

All we know is keep trying

And keep fighting till we have that guts.

Here I end the first chappy I know there was no pia….but I'll give her intro in next chappy. Sorry if its not up to the mark.😳

*(Actually by these lines I m trying to give the effect of narration which we hear in some movies n serial or to be more precise sometime it will be their inner voice…means what r they feeling or sometimes it will be the plans of destiny on their life and it will be in hindi also as I feel more comfortable to express deep thoughts in hindi…..so if this whole thing is boring than tell me I will discontinue it)

Precap- Abhay's welcome n Dobriyals intro…..maybe abhiya's meeting.

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