My First FF- YEH VAADA RAHA(chp 19 pg147) - Page 39

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

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jus loved the update❤️

the date was all dreamy n awesum😍

n d dialouges too😛

continue soon n thnx 4 d pm

Originally posted by: _Sonu_

That was such a cute update Anjali...😳 aww thanks

Loved each part of it...esp. that part where Pia was waiting for Abhay to ask again for d date.. 😆 ya both were desperate to ask each other but pia said it first under the impression that he is asking for date

And the date part was so perfectly written..Abhay is so cute and adorable here.. glad u liked this naughty n cute abhay

I loved the romance in the rain...☺️ awww😳😳

Thanks for the long update dear..It was not at all boring.. thanks for the lovely comment...i m super happy that u liked it

Continue soon...😃 sure

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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anji plz dnt mind dear,but after reading dis updat i feel like pulling ur cheeks!!! 🤗
😳 😆😆😆 i wont mind it...i m habitual to it my brother keeps doing that
it was mindblowing,awesuum !!!!👏 👏
wat a beauutiful romantic update!!! ⭐️
i truly enjoyd every bit of it!! 😳 thanks for appreciation indu...glad u r liking my ff...u know talented writer like u giving me such lovely comment...its huge compliment in itself😳

shona was cute wth her naughty remarks!! 😊 yes she is fulto filmy n nauhty😆
haha..lovd dat part where abhay was going to ask pia abt shona's school timing bt pia thot othrwise n said she was ready 4 d date!! 😳 yes both were so desparate to ask n pia said it first feeling impatient😆

the scene right frm abhay picking pia up ,thy hvng dinnr n d rest.. to d beach was incredibly beauutiful !!! 👏 i lovd it! ❤️ awww.😳..glad you liked it

and d fav8 of mine ws wen abhay askd pia fr a dance in d rain and he askd her to listn to d music of nature.. was just wonderfuull...!!! ⭐️ so u liked it..first i thought this is too filmy😆
abhay humming hs new song nd later wen askd the reply he gave ws truly amazng! You wrote dis part in such a lovely manner tht i really dnt knw wat to say!!! ❤️ 😳 ur beautiful comment is itself a big compliment u dont need to say anything else😳
i likd dat part too where pia ran to d sheltar nd abhay stood n d rain!! Tht was realy new nd diffrnt bt lovely! As we always get to see nly girls njoy rain!! Bt here u reversd it nd i likd dat!! 😛 😳 yes my abhiya are little diff...its abhay who is more open, cheerful, positive inspite of his disturbed family life while pia had all the love n protection of her family then also she is little skeptic n introward ...totally diff from the show

the lyrics were lovely!! glad u liked it...i thought it will sound childish with some rhyming words here n there😆
I was hookd til d very last word!! 😊 So nw do u really thnk dear,tht u made us bore wth ur update??!!! 😉 😊 actually i thought that it is longer than the usual update so some people can find it boring
wth dis updat u provd once again tht u r truly an exprt n depictng romance!! I loved loved loved dis update!!! ❤️ 🤗 thank u thank u thank u...keep commenting as i get motivation from ur lovely comments🤗🤗🤗
🤗and oh..ya i forgot to mention abhay n piya both of their dresses were beautiful!!
good to know that u liked it...i m not much into fashion n all😳


plzz continue soon...awaitng d nxt part eagerly...
Thanx a lot fr pm...tk..cre..😊 ur welcome..will update tomorrow

-indu

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.

aww anji!!that was a lovely update...nd the last part was sooo dreamy and romantic...luv ths abhiya...nd i luv the way shona is bonding with abhay..cntnu soon:-)

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Wow. That was really romantic!

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

wow awesome and beautiful date. it was simply breath taking 😊

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
I'm wondering what is going to happend next in your story
thanks for the pm