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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update!!!!👏
abhiya r soulmate..gr8!!!⭐️
liked the way raichand family trying to bring abhiya togehter.😃
so is abhay pia's lost love...whom she dreams abt n cries???😕
waiting for abhiya's meeting.😍
continue soon.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ashu1909

nice ud. what is connection between abhiya past please reveal soon.raichands r ⭐️ .please update as soon as possible.


thnxx for wonderful comment
it will b reavealed in nxt part
i will b updated by today or by tommoroe
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

nice update!!!!👏
abhiya r soulmate..gr8!!!⭐️
liked the way raichand family trying to bring abhiya togehter.😃
so is abhay pia's lost love...whom she dreams abt n cries???😕
waiting for abhiya's meeting.😍
continue soon.😊


thnxxx for valuable comment..
Glad u like it..
Could be..
Update by today or tommorow
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 4
Pia is starring at moon holding on my tears.she is still in confusion as what she just witnessed is real or mere illusion.she never give hope on him for last 4 years.every passing day for these years she believed that he might return someday.All these years she has just searched for these pair of hypotonic blue eyes in crowd.pia calmed down and throught her tht wait is over.her trip is worth it,her destiny has brought her to the place,to this party.it can't be coincidence to land up in this party.she decided to go back and confront him.what has been reason even after he being alive still choose to stay away from me.what has changed so much that he left me to deal with loneliness. what is he doing is in party or more in U.S.A.Many unanswered questions are required to be sought.As she turned,her heartbeat skipped to find him standing next to me.i kept on starring into those blue eyes.for the moment i close my eyes to check that i am dreaming or he is really standing there.i opened my eyes again,i found him still standing there.Nothing could explain my happiness to see him alive.i felt alive again.some moments ago,i was angry and cursing him for leaving me alone.but when i saw those blue eyes my anger vanished in thin air.i didnt wanted this momment ever end.i wanted to keep looking at his hansome face.suddenly i could see his lips moving,he is talking to me,i was still in stance to hear to anything.my hands moved to his cheek to feel him.i jerked when he placed his hand to my shoulder.when his hand touched my shoulder it sended shiver in my body.it is the same feeling what i was get he used to touch me.finally i came out of the stance.i spoke'akash'while cupping his face.he give me very strange look.i am confused to why he gave me those strange looks.i heard him speak'oh come on dnt act like stranger bhabzz.i knw y r furious at bro. why are you taking bro anger on me.you know him he loves teasing u,i didnt mean those words.you r most exicted for my birthday.u made entire arrangement.wnt my bhabzz be at his fav person birthday 'he said.'akash why r u behaving like stranger,'pia.bhabzz it is too much,i m going,bro can cool u down'.abhay is about to leave then pia held his hand firmly not let it go.'akash,what r u talking about,i am pia,ur pia'. 'Gosh bhabzz' suddenly he jerked his hand from my grip and rushes away from the balcony.
Sid and kabir are watching it from the distance.'why did he leave'kabir.'His vampiric senses worked at wrong time he realised that she is human girl not metz'sid.'u knw ur little bro has never talked about his human life.his ability to cover his thoughts has never let us know his past.i am sure this girl has definetly related to his past' sid' yup bro,i saw love in eyes of pia for him'kabir'little bro be ready 2 answer'sid.
pia is firm that that he is her love.she will get him back in her life.but she couldn't understand she has came 4 abhay raichand birthday.why his akash claiming it to his birthday.
Pia proceeded back to party and her eyes is searching for blue eyes.i found him standing at the centre stage with elderly couple.
They spoke'Hello ladies and gentlemen,welcome to our son abhay's birthday party'.i m still confused that birthday boy is supposed to be abhay raichand but what is akash doing in middle.i noticed this couple hugged himsaid'happy birthday abhay' .He responded back with dimpled smile while hugging them'thank you mom & dad'.
Their words took earth out of my feet.I am numb as to what i just heard.i couldnt understand with same face and those blue eyes.it is abhay raichand.when alina jerked me out of thoughts.
i asked alina' won't you introduced me to birthday boy'.she took to him.He is surronded my some people.He seems to enjoying with them.alina kissed his cheek said'happy birthday abhay'alina.I felt jealousy pang run in my body to see alina kiss abhay.
"You look gorgeous'abhay.
'How i stupid i am.i forget to introduced my new friend pia dobrial.pia,this is my best friend abhay raichand'alina.
i m shocked when alina introduced me to him as abhay.she introduced to entire raichand family.i got surprised see to maithali raichand.we are exatly the same.
finally abhay spoke'sorry pia to what happened at the balcony.i mistook u to my bhabzz'abhay.
'it is ok' pia
'Nice to meet u pia' Abhay
my heart is nt taking the fact that he is not akash.this is not right momment to confront him.alina is right on fact that it is best party i attended in my life.
I got shocks of my life.first to find akash but who is introduced to me as abhay raichand.second.maithali raichand and me are look like
Abhay is sitting at bar with jeh.abhay and pia are continously starring at each other.their is eyes never left each other.it didnt go unnoticed by sid.
'u like that girl'jeh
'what made you think tht buddy' abhay
'the way u r starring at her' jeh.
Abhay expression changed like he is trying to hide behind jeh'who invited T to my party' abhay rushed out of bar to avoid T and collided with pia.pia is about to fall when abhay held her by waist.when their eyes met,they forget world around them.
Abhay came out of stance and straightened pia.
'i am sorry,i m avoiding someone'abhay
'i saw u rush out of bar ak..abhay' pia.
'u seem new in this place.i never saw u around'abhay
'i am came from india to sign deal with ur company'pia
'u r from dobrial industries'abhay
'yes,i am pia dobrial,daughter of arnab dobrial'pia
'i am abhay raichand'.
'happy birthday abhay,sorry i didnt buy gift.i had no idea to what u would like'.PIA
'God this girl'abhay'which one'abhay'girl in short black dress with lots of make up'abhay.pia busted out in laughter on seeing abhay reaction.'what,she keeps throwing her on me.i hate it'abhay'just look at ourself'pia.'u said u didnt get me gift,can i have pleasure dance with u as a gift.plz help me,she will back off once finds me dancing with u' abhay.she couldnt refuse his request his akash. Her heart refused tobelieve that he is abhay not .she nodded in approval.abhay extended his hand to pia and she slipped her hand to his.she felt so right and secure holding his hand.they moved towards dance floor holding hands and already lost in each other eyes.The raichands was overwhelmed to see abhay on his own will taking a girl to the dance floor.'see chand,this girl is abhay soulmate.my son ask a girl for dance.i could already some affection in his eyes for her' haseena.'hope abhay fall in love with pia'chand.The chandeena was smiling to see abhay take pia for a dance.they were happy to their son this way.
Here chapter 4 of this ss..i hope u like it..any mistake plzz forgive..hit like and comment
Edited by sweet_neetu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

THANKS YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS.I HAVE UPDATED CHAPTER 4..HOPE U LIKE IT

Edited by sweet_neetu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey I loved ur update.I guess Abhay was akash in his human life & he dont wnt 2 ruin Pia's life so he left het coz he became vampy.Am I right?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

Hey I loved ur update.I guess Abhay was akash in his human life & he dont wnt 2 ruin Pia's life so he left het coz he became vampy.Am I right?

YUP RIGHT DEAR..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oo wowww LOVELY update:-):-) Abhiya dance:-) Wow... Abhay is Akash na? Waiting for the next update:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it!!!!!

thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
yar just loved it...
awsome abhiya meeting...
but y abhay went away from her??
is abhay was aksh when piya love him?
loved their dance sequeal...
waiting 4 next...
cont soon

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