ABHIYA ff-MY DESTINY COMPLETED

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neetu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: cccppp
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wow lovely updates!!

continue soon..😃
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thnxx...try to update asap

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neetu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: anjali0111
nice update!!!!!

liked abhay here very much...he is vampy but still cheerful n happy.
finally pia enjoyed n had fun...hope abhiya meet soon.
n she is maithili's lookalike...maithili here also was abhay's past...or someone else?

thnxx for liking it...

abhay is not 200 yrs old vampy..he is new vampy..

abhiya meet in nxt update..

maithali is already married to sid in here..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

great yaar I relly like this storyline Abhay in a new avtaar😛 plz cont soon and what's in piya's past?

Edited by vikramdey - 13 years ago

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neetu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: rashi.rose
Wow what a Lovely update:-):-) hayeee:-) AMAZING:-)

thnxx for liking it..

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masked2011

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

wow nice update...waiting for abhiya meeting

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neetu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: vikramdey
great yaar I relly like this storyline Abhay in a new avtaar😛 plz cont soon and what's in piya's past?

thnxx for liking it..

yup piya has a past which will unfold soon

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neetu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: masked2011
wow nice update...waiting for abhiya meeting

thnxx for liking...

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neetu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Thanks for encouragement friends and ur valuable comments.i will be updating my third chapter today itself.hope you like it

Edited by sweet_neetu - 13 years ago

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neetu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Chapter 3
Pia bid goodbye to her parents.They hoped that when she returns back,they wish to see their jovial daughter back,it is like miracle they hoping for.but they are parents they can never lose hope on her. While they stayed back at home.but they r relieved as jeh assured them that he has made all d neccesary arrangements for her stay at us.panchi n misha accompanied her to drop her to the airport. She was waiting for jeh to arrive there.After few minutes of wait,she spotted jeh coming towards her.
'God,he is hot'whispered panchi.
'Sis, he is future son in law of raichands.
Pia introduced jeh to her sisters'thats panchi n misha my sisters'.
'pleasure meeting u both'jeh.they left to catch the plane.while walking to plane,jeh told pia that he had made her stay arrangements at raichands guest house.The flight took off.
At R Villa
While abhay was away,the raichand family is into serious discussion after jeh call.
Flashback
jeh'hello jaan'have u reached at dobrial office'Alisha.'yes,i have already finalised the deal'jeh.'congs,when r u retuning'alisha'in evening tommow'jeh.''wow,u will b for little bro birthday''alisha''i have something very important to tell u.what i just witnessed,i couldn't believe my eyes for some momments.piya dobrial with whom i had meeting is exactly like metz bhabz''jeh.'what are you saying'alisha.'i could feel that she definetly has some connection with abhay,she is an old soul like abhay'jeh.''if u thinks so that make sure she comes along with u,leave the rest with us'alisha.'dnt worry,i will make sure of that' jeh.flashback ends.'so we found my sis and abhay's soulmate,i told u hubby when abhay came back i was sure she will came back too.maya can't b wrong'metz.'i guess metz is right'sid.'kids,we should think a way to make them meet,we all know how abhay reacts when we ask meet girl'haseena.'yes mom,we have to create a situation and make sure they meet'kabir'what about we call her to bro's birthday 'alisha.'that is a perfect idea,alisha'metz.'that is already done,jeh texted she is coming'alisha.'we have a put a perfect plan and their is no place for flaws'sid.'yup bro,i will b happy if he finds his soulmate.i know he never put efforts find his special person'kabir.if pia is abhay's soulmate,their one sight of each other will make them fall for each other'haseena.'very true,haseena'chand.they r planing abhay and pia meeting.they are putting their best to make it the most memorable day.With pia arrival,the raichands had all reasons for turning it to be special.Pia and jeh reached u.s.a. He dropped her to raichands guesthouse.it is small house with two rooms with elegant decoration and in stuffed all the neccessary things is neaby city.they r also arranged a car for her in case she wants to do sight-seeing and shopping.'hope u liked it' jeh.'its beautiful. Thank you for making all arrangement" Pia.Don't thank me , thank alisha.its her n abhay's hang out,being alone for sometimes'jeh.'its beautiful' pia.'i and my sis alina rtwo house away,any help call us.ur dinner is in kitchen'jeh.'thnx' pia.i forget u tell its is abhay raichand birthday party tommorow.They have invited you to the party,if you wish to come,be ready by 7 in evening and no meeting 4 tommorow'jeh.Jeh left.Pia made call to her dad that she has reached safely.pia was tired so ate dinner and sleptAt R VillaAs clock struck 12,all members enters abhay who was resting as vampires can sleep if they want to.Raichands in unision singing'' happy birthday to u abhay''.he is overwhelmed by his family's gesture.it is just begining more suprises are waiting for himHe already recieved his suprise to see jeh back again.'Thank god buddy u r back.Finaly i dnt have to be with kabir in d party'abhay.he loves kabir but hates kabir's company as he tries to fix date during these occasions.'Come on abhay,i cant see u lonely.my surprise is no dates for today'.'bro,could have asked for anything better'abhay.Sid took him oustide and pull out the sheet over the car.Abhay saw a red lamborgini.he is delighted'thnxx bro,u wished to own it.u r best bro'abhay.He took keys and drove out of R Villa.He is thinking that is family knew him very well.they knew what he wants without saaying anything.it is perfect begining of the perfect day.he knew he will more wonderful evening awaited for himPia woke up and bathed.she is in deep thoughts to whether to go for the party.the bell of house rang as she opened the door she saw a girl standing infront of her.she intriduced herself"hi pia,i am alina'jeh's sister right' pia.'yes,i brought u breakfast' alina.'thnx alina'pia.'are you going to party'alina.'no'pia.'r u sure,i mean u dnt want miss the best party of this city.I assure you wont be bored'alina.'hmm,I will go as their is no meeting today but u have accompany me'pia.'sure,i would love to' alina'friends'pia'Friends'said alina while shaking hands.'what r u going to wear 'alina.Pia brought out a blue dress from her wardrope.'this one.finsh ur breakfast&come with me'alina took pia to her house to her wardrope.she showed her a beautiful pink gown 'Try this'alina.while pia was changing,she called metz'Done,i have give her dress u brought.i m sure my buddy will b blown off'alina.'defintly alina'metz.' u look gorgeous pia.u can wear it for party'alina.they spent rest day doing chit chatting.pia got ready and alina came to pick her.pia is looking mermersing in pink gown with light make up and diamond pendant.
At R Villa
R Villa hall is decorated with orchids,blue and white coloured curtains&glowing with dim flourscent light.The guests started 2 arrive for party.The Raichand r set to excute theirplan.sid n metz pretend to fight before party.their eyes r set at door waiting for pia's arrival.chandeena saw pia enter d party with alina.sid is asking to convicing abhay help him.'lets go down,they r waiting 4 u'sid.suddenly pia eyes went to stairs.her heartbeat skipped at d sight of seeing the pair of hyptonic blue eyes.she is in tears to find him in d party.sid couldn't believe his eyes seeing her standing next to alina.'look bro,metz is angry,she didnt came to me'sid.suddenly pia wanted to have fresh air,she didnt wanted people to spot her in tears.Alina took her to balcony.'plz bro help me,she went away from party'sidabhay agreed to help his brother and proceeded to balcony.he found her at balcony standing starring at moon.
Here is 3 update..plzz throw tomato for stopping that point.i promise u full flegged abhiya next update..plzz hit like and comment

Edited by sweet_neetu - 13 years ago

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Romita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#100

Yipee! Me first.
awesome update yaar. I really loved it.
waiting for abhiya first meeting.
so, abhay is piya's lost love or what?
pls continue soon dear and thanks for the pm.

Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago

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