'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 43

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

thanx prima.yup haseena wants da best 4 hr son

Originally posted by: taz90

Nice update Tora!!!
So even Haseena knows Kate's reality but Abhay still won't listen...
Hope Risa and Tora will help Abhiya...
And seems like Kate will insult Pia in the party...
Cont soon n thx for pm:)

thanx taz..yup of course everyone loves abhay nd wants da best 4 him...lets c to what levels kate stoops

Originally posted by: pkyekfanclub

nice one Tora😊 ahh loved Haseena trying to put some senses in her son's head seriously why can't he see what creature Kate is ? plz someone slap her from my side in next update😡 both bro-sis are missing eachother and it's all bcz of that Kate that these four got seprated hope Abhay sees Kate's true face soon

ya abhay needs 2 c hw his other relations r getting damaged because of kate..glad u liked it:-)

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

shit i missed the 1st place!
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realy sorry for unresing so late...
very nyc update tora!
gud that hasina asked him to dump kate bt wat to do he is too dumb to dump his so called gf 🤢
hope is tym MR. pia ka sath de...
loved risa nd tora convo😊
waiting for party...!
continue soon thanx for pm😊

thanx juhi:-)no probs dr!!yup the party vl b exciting!!!

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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1st of all 'm really v.v. Sorry dear, 4 unresing so late!!! :((

Nw abt d update!!!
Ashadharan update my princess 🤗
It ws beautiful..n.awesum !!! 👏
each n evry emotion were very well potrayd!!! ⭐️ lovd it!! 😳

thanx fairy:-)aw its no probs re!!glad u liked it and i m glad that i cud portray the emotions well..hehe nxt part is ur cup of tea;-)

Loved it Tora 👏 Abhay's state of mind was very well depicted. Even Haseena knows where his happiness lies but Abhay just doesn wanna face it 😡 Ulloo kahin ka Poor Pia n tat Kate is such a 🤬 I so wish Risa n Tora come up with a plan to kick her out of Abhay's life. Also please no Anik this time between Abhiya plz plz plz 😃

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Loved it Tora 👏Abhay's state of mind was very well depicted. Even Haseena knows where his happiness lies but Abhay just doesn wanna face it 😡Ulloo kahin ka Poor Pia n tat Kate is such a 🤬I so wish Risa n Tora come up with a plan to kick her out of Abhay's life. Also please no Anik this time between Abhiya plz plz plz 😃

glad u liked it mansa...dnt wory it is an abhiya story and no matter wat happens all roads lead bck to abhiya :-)

Originally posted by: abhiora

thanx fairy:-)aw its no probs re!!glad u liked it and i m glad that i cud portray the emotions well..hehe nxt part is ur cup of tea;-)

haha...i knw!!

Very nice update...👏 Abhay is such a fool...even I'm more samajdar than him...😆 Idiot Abhay...Really liked the Tora-Risa conversation...it's sad how Risa misses talking to fool Abhay...even I miss talking to my Di..but here the case is different... And Kate..how mean can she get?? 😡.I utterly dislike this kind of people..but...aafsoos...mera paala hamesha mean logon ke saath hii padhta hai...🤢 Ufff...damn..phir se out of topic bol rahi hoon...silly me..😛 Ok...back to the chapter...what's Kate planning?? well..whatever it is I'm pretty sure it isn't good...😡 Haseena...I just like her character a lot..even in Pyaar Kii...I liked her character...And Abhay...seems like he's in love with Piya...but not ready to accept it...idiot boy..😆.Anyways...overall really nice update...😳.you could've writen more but I understand you must be busy or something...Please continue soon and thanks for the PM guys...😃