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~Dreams~

Prologue

A poem about piya to tell her story..


Walking through my memories, Reliving all the pain,
Lost in the agony with nothing left to gain,
Pieces of my broken dreams, lying on the floor,
Drowning in my sorrow, I can't take it anymore,
Then I feel you wrap around me, whispering in the dark,
Telling me to not give up, reaching deep within my heart,
Searching for the pieces, of my broken dreams,
Asking of me, to just let it go.
Could it be so simple, just to let it drift away.
Is it God, or is it Death? I know I've lost my way.
You wrap yourself around me, shelter in the dark.
Telling me to not give up, I'm giving you my heart.
Giving you the pieces, of my broken dreams.
Trusting in your love, to help me let it go.

I want to see a dream like every girl see to have a prince charming but my destiny have decided something else for me. I just want to ask once why i have treated like a animal here dont i have a right to live, to love , to have respect. No answers again. To whom i say, to whom i ask, what to do and where to go? I know he promised me that he will be always there for me then why he left me.. tell me. This place is hell no place for emotions, respect no humanity.Will some one come and take me out of this hell???

Abhay Raichand- 24 years




Only heir of Raichand empire, with his looks he can make any girl drool over him but he is already committed to his sweetheart T. After completing his MBA with his sweetheart. He joined his dad business within 6 months he took Raichand empire to greatest height, he is clever, sharp minded like his father, intelligent can take out business out from any bad situation.His biggest wish to get settle down with his sweetheart T.

Tanushree {T}: 24 years



She is beautiful, fashion diva. You can say abhay heartbeat. They have been in college together did there MBA and fell in love. T is very practical and doesn't take abhay seriously but yeah she is very possisve about abhay and cannot share him with anyone.

Piya Dobriyal-20 years old




Only daughter of Dobriyal family. She lives in London. She is beautiful but as innocent like a kid, down to earth, and traditional girl. The is a medical student and wants to be a doctor. She doesn't know about love but yet she had a dream of prince charming, she lives in a luxury just to give orders but she remains to live a life of simple human being. If someone see her the first reaction would be "she is a fairy"

Jay Dobriyal { 24 yrs}




very sweet and lovable person. He is his dad dream and mom's pride. He loves her sister Pia to an extent. He hates when his father shows in difference with piya. He understand his sister pain but whenever he try to ask his father he has to go through his father arrogant behavior. He wants to keep his family happy. He helps his father in his business but he loves to travel..

{all charcters are same}

PART-1

Mama , Papa I want to go to India Pia said in low tone
Arnav looks at Pia , Pia is nervous what her dad will going to say as she never been out of his home and now she wants to back to India. Sugandh she is standing beside her daughter and eager to know her husband reaction as she knows that like always her daughter dream will going to be shattered soon.
Why you want to go India as you know that I will never allow you to go there Arnav said in stern tone..
But papa listen me oncePia said looking down.
I told you and that's final, you are not going anywhere Arnav start checking his files again. Pia was in tears.

Sugandh comes there and takes her princess back to her room. Pia was in tears and being as a mother she knows Pia pain. She wants to enjoy her life fully like any other girl, but due to Arnav rude behavior. Her child is not happy.. She never understand why he was so indifferent towards Pia. Arnav give all freedom to his son Jay but never cared about Pia. Here Pia was shedding tears.

Sweetheart dont cry, you know mama dont like to see you crying and if jay will see you crying he will make a mess.Sugandh said sweetly wiping her tears.

But Mama I want to go India. I want to practice there as a doctor. I want to help poor people. In London everything is fine but India there are many places where they need medical help. I studied so much hard to achieve my dream. what's the use of my study..Piya still sobbing

Oh baby you know that your papa will not allowed you to go anywhere. Dont think about this too much.. Sugandh tries to console her baby Pia.

Mama please help me I just want to fulfill my last dream. I know after sometime I will going to get married and I have to live my husband dream like you.This is only a last chance where I can live my life Mama. Pia goes to window and stands there looking out Mama only few people get chance to live their dreams and my college is providing me that chance..Sugandh looks at Pia how maturely she is talking...

Okay I will talk to your father but no more cry Pia turns and runs to her mother, she hugs her mother tightly. Sugandh hugs her baby tightly and patted her back...Sugandh goes to Arnav.

She sat near her rooms french window viewing the huge garden feeling so lonely. All she wanted someone who understand her, respect her dreams. Someone who could love her care for her, someone who could respect her. Appreciate little things about her. She looked sadly at her royal king sized bed covered with pure pink silk spread ..her stuff toys..she smiled ..She comes their hugged them and laid cuddled up. She smiled and dossed off.

Arnav was thinking about the proposal with Raichand in India. Sugandh comes and sits with Arnav passing him a cup of coffee. Arnav takes it and smiles at his sweet wife. Arnav start checking his files.

Sugandh clears her throat. Arnav was still lost in his file. Sugandh repeats her action again

You want to say something Arnav still looking in his files
Yeah I just want to ask If Pia is feeling so low. Sugandh says slowly.Can you please.. Arnav looks at her..I mean we can send Pia to her uncle house {India} for sometime and they can take care of Pia, you know how much they love Pia. Arnav was silent..Sugandh gives questioning look to Arnav. Arnav sees her sweet wife asking something for her sweet girl Pia..She was having tears..How Arnav can deny her beautiful wife wish..He nodes and Sugandh smiles.. Thank you...She looks at him.. You dont have to be.

Raichand Mansion

It was 5 am in the morning and some one with a loud music was doing his gym session making bicep, the sweat was rolling down from his skin, making him more sexy. He was doing push ups up down down up. He was lost in his exercise when a phone rang. He grab his phone and looks at the number. He smiles.

Hey sweetheart Good morningAbhay smiles
hey baby whats up again busy in your exercise a girl says
oh common you know ..abhay sees himself on mirror
okay okay dont start with your lecture again..a girl says
oh really then what to want to start sweetheart abhay says in husky voice. he comes out from his gym and comes to his room..
abhay baby i called you because dad wants to meet you and your family so dont be late sharp 8 o clock at my place..a girl waves her hair and that was T looking at abhay and her snap.. bye tc love you
love you too darling will be there..abhay smiles and cuts the call.. he falls on his bed and thinks... he start dreaming but a knock at door disturbs him.

Back in London {Dobriyal Palace}

Later in night {guys time difference} Pia comes down to have dinner. She was wearing his dad favorite dress. She sits beside her mother. She smiles at Arnav then Sugandh and looks down. Here comes the big brother Jay, he comes and hugs Arnav , Arnav smiles and hugs him back. Pia looks at her father, how much she is longing for her father love..Jay comes hugs his mother and see Pia having tears. He comes and hugs her wipes her tear which is unnoticed by Arnav and Sugandh. The table was served with Indian food with 7 main courses and 4 side dishes..6 varieties of sweet dishes and Italian food made for her.

Pia she looks up
yes papa Pia looks down at her plate
my P.A had booked your tickets for India. Arnav said while eating his food.
Pia smiles and looks at her mother then Jay. Her eyes were showing how much she excited for India. Jay was happy for his baby sister after so many days she was smiling. Yes she was his princess ...he always wants to see her baby sister like that only...
thank you papa Pia looks at him but Arnav nodes his head
you will be staying there at your uncle place, i dont want to get any complaints from there. As I know we will get surely your complaints.. Arnav said in rude tone which bought tears in her eyes again. Jay and Sugandh notice this..
but papa jay says , Arnav sees him
all of you eat your food jay sees his father and start eating food.

Raichand Mansion

Come here all of you abhay shouts
He was angry and call his servant. All of them comes runing and stands in line having their head down..
how many times i will have to say that i want my everything ready in time when i want to go office.. Not a single thing is placed properly.
no one speaks, every sees him and all our tensed. abhay sees them and comes to one servant and place his hand on his {servant} shoulder
hey why are you all getting tensed i was just joking. servant sees him

All of them are relieved. Every day abhay plays prank with their servants and make their life hell... Every time they all are failed to guess.. Abhay laughs

Abhay what is this abhay turns see an old woman seeing him, abhay smiles and comes to her.
Oh grand ma i was joking yaar why are you angry.. abhay kiss his grandma cheek..
abhay you and your pranks.. grand ma makes faces and hold his ears
ouch!! ouch!! grandma its hurting please leave ouch!! ouch!! abhay making baby face..
abhay grow up son you are not a kid anymore.. soon you will getting married who will say a son of chand Raichand and haseena racihand is playing pranks on his servant. grandma says is serious tone
OMG grandma are you serious, when i am getting married i dont know.. abhay open his mouth at O shape and looks at his grandma.
I know she holds her ears again I know you will never change ...
ouch grandma abhay says please leave my ear.ouch!! .no u deserve this grandma says in stern voice

Back to London:

She takes her mom and dad blessing and hugs his brother jay tightly. Jay put his hand on piya cheek

baby you just take care of yourself.. have you taken everything your passport , your tickets , your phone.. dont talk to strangers just be yourself. I dont know why you decided to go in a plane when we are having our own private jet.. I am so scared and be sure you call me everyday...jay with concerned tone kisses on her forehead...

dont worry bhaiya i will be fine and i will call.. You please take care of yourself mama and papa.piya smiles.. Pia looks at his father .. he was looking at somewhere else. she comes to her mother. Sugandh smiles and hugs her..

My baccha dont worry chachu will come at airport to receive you. You are having his number. Just call him when your flight will be landed.. piya nodes her head with tears in his eyes.. I will miss you my shona..piya hugs her mother and cry.

If you all are finished with this and all. Shall we move because she is enough mature to wait for her flight. jay looks at his father and Sugandh also

bhaiya and mom you go, i will wait here.. piya says to her mother and jay

jay and Sugandh hug her last time wished her all the best for her journey. Pia thought may be her father will going to wish her but all thoughts were in vain and see them going. she sits there at airport wipes her tears and sees the people who were busy in chatting , somewhere waiting for flights, checking tickets counters.. etc etc. She was happy that she will be able to live her dream for at least for few days till she is back here..


please let me know how u all like it or not
love
kajal

THREAD-1
Part-1, Pg-1
Part-2, Pg-4
Part-3, Pg-8
Part-4. Pg-17
Part-4b Pg-24


































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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice introduction. Loved the first part but felt sorry for piya. Arnav is so rude to her. Abhay's character is also potrayed nice but he loves t na. I only want abhay to love piya. pls continue asap.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kajal continue asap and pm me too!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Jus luvd it..abhy luvs tee..hmmm..bt nly pia 4 abhay!!nw b a nyc gal n pm me..cnt w8 4 d nxt update!!:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kajal...its awesum...😛...Loved it...great 2 see here...N why does Arnab behaves like a jerk???...N Abhay...lol...😆...prankster...😆...Im waiting 2 read further...def abt Abhiya...😛...pls continue soon...n pm me next time when u update...😛...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it...awesum...loved evrything...continue soon😍
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oh i loved it...awesome start..plz pm me when u update...and plz update ur other ff too
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its awsum
feel bad for pia...wondr hw cum arnav do this to his own child??
jeh as pia's brother was surprising,but its good to see him as brother than as spoilsport.
abhay was supercool.lvd him in this non serious and naughty avatar.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nyc start Kajal!! Pls PM me wen u upd8!! And yes I want AbhIya on Abhay-T!! 😆
-Gauri
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wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking froward to your next part of the story
my name is Alicia pm me

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