New ff-: The fateful night note on pg147 - Page 5

Originally posted by: bellaaa

romita that concept is really nice yar...
loved the prologue and character sketch yar...
loed it...
do cont it soon...
waiting for update...
thksss 4 pm me too

Thanks yaar. I am glad u like it. I will try to update asap and will pm u.

sorry i am late. but really nice star. continue soon

Thank u so much friends for ur appreciation. I am writing the first chapter so, do comment. CHAPTER1
It was a cold misty night in dehradhun. Snow was falling all over dehradhun. In a mansion, far away from the city was standing a blue-eyed young man. He was heavenly beautiful. Tension, anger and sadness was written all over his face. Suddenly from backwards a scream came 'jay...'. The man immediately ran towards the source of sound with a speed which can't be seen by normal human eyes. As he entered the room from where the sound came he saw a beautiful young curly head girl was sitting on the bed. The girl was looking scared. The man rushed towards her.
The man-: (with a cold but still in a little concerned voice) Don't worry, u are safe here.
The girl-: (with a scared voice) but where am I and who are u?
The man-: (with the same cold voice )I am Abhay Raichand and u r in my house.
The girl-: but why am I here?
Abhay-: actually u met with an accident and I didn't know where u stay so, I took u here.The girl-: But I don't remember anything. I only know that my name is piya and nothing else...
ps-:I am really bad at english grammer so, there may be some grammatical errors. Sorry, for any mistake. Next update will take time. Till, then enjoy reading it and do comment. Pls read the note below.

Originally posted by: masked2011

sorry i am late. but really nice star. continue soon

it's ok. Thanks for ur appreciation.

nice and please write big part so i can enjoy more reading... but this part also very nice dear...

Chotu but nice update
so, piya doesnt remember anything! What happened to her?..
I hope, abhay decide to keep her with himself..! :)
Continue soon
thanx 4 d pm
tc

Note sorry friends I think I have some problem in my cell so, I think I am not able to send pms to all. If anyone can, pls do it for me. I will be really grateful.

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

awesum...continue soon

Thanks yaar. I will try to continue soon.

wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of the story
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: masked2011

nice and please write big part so i can enjoy more reading... but this part also very nice dear...

Actually, I do updates from my cell so, it's reallu hard for me to write big updates. Thanks for ur appreciation and I will try to write big updates.