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Posted: 13 years ago
great update!!!! thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa

that was superb update yar...
really liked it romi...😊
loved the cd scenes that was too gud...
piya felt jealousy thts nice...progress in their relation yupieee
lift scene was too nice...piya felt shy...
cont soon dear...
just lovely update...



Thank u so much. I am glad u like it. Ur comments inpire me a lot. I also like that scene. Thanks a lot yaar for liking it. Yea, piya has started feeling for Abhay as she has started to fall in love with him. I am so happy as u liked it. will try to continue asap. Thanks for ur lovely comment.
Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Nice update Romita 😊0„2Love Abhay Pia's interaction. Continue soon.

Thank u mansha. I have worked hard on their interaction. I am glad as u liked it. I will try to continue asap.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: raichandroxx

nyc update romi
i luvd their fyt ovr music hehehe...
reveal d mystry soon
thanx for d pm


Thanks yaar. I am glad as u like it. I will try to update asap and the mystery will be revealed soon. U r always welcome dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya0006

great update!!!! thanx 4 the pm


Thanks and u r welcome dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update. lets see if danish able to help her or not...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: masked2011

nice update. lets see if danish able to help her or not...


Thanks yaar and danish will help be able to help them to some extent.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Here is the next part.
Chapter5
City hospital
Abhay and piya both turned and saw a boy was hurriedly coming towards them.
Abhay-: oh god kabir! U came, I thought u forgot that u have to come here.
Kabir-: sorry, abhay but my head was severly paining in the morning so, I got up late today.
Abhay-: it's ok. How are u feeling now? Are u ok? If u want u can go back home.
Kabir-: no,no I am ok now. Let's go inside. We are getting late and where is the girl u were talking about?
Abhay-: oh I forgot to introduce both. Kabir this is piya (pointing at piya) and piya this is kabir my best friend(pointing at kabir)
Kabir-: oh hi piya, nice to meet u. We can be friends too.
Piya-: hello kabir, it's nice to meet u too. so, friends and both shaked their hands with each other.
Abhay-: if u both are done with ur introduction then, we shall go in as we are getting late.
Kabir-: ok let's go in.
Abhay, piya and kabir went inside the cabin and saw that danish was busy in studying a file.
Abhay-: Dr.Danish, can we come in?
Danish-: yea,yea come and sit. U all don't need permission to enter my cabin and abhay stop calling me dr. danish I am just danish.
Abhay-: ok,ok next time I will take care of it. So, danish I hope u know about this case as kabir must have told u already, so I am not going in details. Do u think u will be able to help us?
Danish-: yes, I know everything and I will help her, but first I need to know about her past.
Abhay-: but, she doesn't remember anything about her past.
Danish-: l know,( to piya) so, piya right?
Piya-: yes doctor.
Danish-: first of all u can call me danish as i am abhay'a friend and kabir's brother so, from now on u are also my friend. U have to open up with me. Don't hesitate in asking anything as it's necessary for ur treatment and think me as ur friend ok.
Piya-: ok danish(smiling). I will try to cooperate with u.
Danish-: that's better. So, now tell me what do u remember anything about ur past? Maybe some name or any flashes u have. Pls think properly and tell. U can take ur time.
Piya-: no, I don't remember anything except that my name is piya.
Danish-: are u sure? I mean u remember ur name but not ur surname, right?
Piya-: no, I said na I only remember my first name.
Danish-: Do u remember someone special from ur past?
Piya-: (after thinking) no.
Abhay-: danish, she sometimes takes name of some jay, while sleeping.
Danish-:hmmm.. I think ur promblem is solved to some extent.
Abhay-: really, but how?
Danish-: though her conscious mind doesn't remember anything but her subconscious mind remember some parts of her past and I am sure that this jay is well related to her past. There is only one solution to it.
Piya-: what is it?
Danish-: hypnotism but there is one problem in it?Abhay-: what problem?
Danish-: actually, dr.maya who hypnotise people is out of station for 15 days and she is the only renowed hypnotist in dehradhun. So, we have to wait for 1 months.
Abhay and piya together-: what!
Danish-: yes, and so piya have to stay with u abhay for next few days.
Abhay-: but, I can't keep her with me for so long.
Piya-: who said I want to stay with u?
Danish-: Abhay u have to keep her with u as she don't have any place to go and piya u also have to stay with him as it is necessary for ur treatment.
Abhay-: ok, I will keep her with me but only for 1 months.
Danish-: that's good and piya, u also have to listen to him.
Piya-: ok, danish but only for 15 days.
Both were giving glowering look to each other.
Kabir-: whoa, if looks could kill then I am sure one of them would be dead(smiling).
Abhay-: shut up kabir
Kabir-: ok, ok let's go back home.
Danish-: so, piya I will meet u after 1 month. Bye guys and piya take care ok.
After that, three of them left after saying bye to danish.
Outside city hospital
Abhay-: so, kabir should I drop u to ur house.
Kabir-: actually, I came here by my car so, I will go back myself.
Abhay-: then, we should leave so, bye kabir.
Kabir-: bye abhay, bye piya and take care.
Piya-: thanks kabir and bye.
Abhay-: bye kabir.
Abhay and piya both went towards the parking slot where abhay's black mercedes was parked. Abhay and piya both sat on the car. Piya sat on the back seat.
Abhay-: what do u think urself? Am I ur driver?
Piya without protesting got up and came and sat on the front seat.
Abhay-: that's better.
Abhay started the car, and started driving the car. Suddenly, abhay took a different route. Piya got shocked.
Piya-: abhay, this is not the right route. We must take the left one.
Abhay-: we are not going back home, but somewhere else.
Ps-: I have written the next part. Pls read and if u like it hit the like button. Pls comment and tell me shoud I continue or not. Ur comments give me a lot of inspiration and if anyone wants but doesn't recieve pm pls let me know. Sorry, for any mistake.
Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

nice update ...😊

Edited by hema_rawat - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
So pia has to stay with Abhay for a month interesting.

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