ABHIYA FF:-UNITED chapter 9 page 54 18/2

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chandni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
I'm really loving your story
thanks for the pm

thanks for liking..

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chandni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta
awesome update
Danish is 🤬 I hope Abhay teaches him a nice lesson

cont soon

thanks for liking...u will see what happen with darnish..😆

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chandni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: masked2011
wow nice update. both feeling for each other and abhay ne music system bhi tod diya... lol

thanks for liking...and it just start to break the things...😆

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chandni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: luckdiya
nice update ...i luved abhiya meeting...⭐️
thx 4 pm:))

thank u diya..😃

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chandni

@TeDylove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

guys i fill like i can continue my ff hindi more well..so hope u dont mind..

res for update..

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chandni

@TeDylove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

abhay enter in house fuming in so much anger...he directly walk for stares..he dint in mood to talk with anyone and he also didnt want to be angry on someone..but he stop in middle way..he saw house is empty..he thought where are all? its so unnatural when i come home and no one here to tease me..i think alisha already worn all so they run away..smile come on his lips...good for them..and he go to up stare...in his room..he take bath but only one face coming again and again in his mind..arrhh!! why that gal bother me so much..its so frustrated..why i leave her live...abhay control ..he deep breath.how can some one make u so much angry..he is nothing to u..nothing..he greeted his teeth..he though if i closed my eyes then sure she will come again and i cant bear it..he go to his library and takes some book and return in his room..he set on window and started reading ..the fresh ir made him calm and he peacefully read books whole night...

next day is first holiday for pia in S.A. so she little bit excited..though she is new here but she want to go around..after long time she has some peaceful sleep last night but the face of boy come in her dream again and again and she get so much irritated...raining is slow so she decided to walk little bit..she get out from house and started walking but she stop and think what if she met again that handsome arrogant again sure he will run her good day so she take different way..she walking in way and show the way full of greenery..two side of way tall trees are there ,birds singing the morning song and she listen the voice of beautiful birds amazingly..and dont see on rode and kept looking here and there..she again middle of the rode and one bike coming from ahead..the man see the girl admiring beauty of nature and he thought another nature fan..and he shook his head, he stop his bike at some distance and set on bike folding his both hand...smile playing on his face..pia go ahead and ahead then collapse with bike...and she come out of dream and shock..she watch the bike and then show boy smiling at her..

pia: how the hell i am in middle of the rode? i am walking in side way..and she look confuse here and there..
boy: my cutey drag u here.. she want to kiss u na..that why she call u and u come here..he reply still smiling..
pia in shock: excuse me who is cutey? and i didnt listen anyone call me..
boy laugh:oh!! calm down cutey is my bike name..then pia laugh with him..then both stop laughing and the boy extend his hand hi i am jay ..
pia:i am pia ...pia shake his hand with smile..
jay:so u r new here right? pia nodded ...humm..but please when next time u glue with natural beauty take the oath of tree so u can stop getting middle of the road...and he laugh heartily..
pia with fake anger: very funny..and then she smile nice to meet u jay i fell like we will be a good friend..
jay: same to me..come i drop u when i live..i dont think u can remember a path..where u live?
pia: i am live in riachand guesthouse,i am one of employer of riachand empire...and she see the shock in his eyes..what happen is anything wrong..?
jay" no...no...nothing wrong..he shake his head..so u are from rival hh!!! he smile cheerfully..i am the son of khurana's..
pia: amuse.. oh!!! nice to meet u jay khurana..hope our friendship didnt come between business..
jay with smile: dont wary i am not that type person..and if u want u can join our empire..he wink at her and both laugh..come i will drop u in your street ,i cant come near your guesthouse bez if anyone see u with me then they complain of u..and i listen your boss is so khadush..so i dont want him to fire u..u r my friend na..and he started his bike..common cutey one beautiful girl set behind me and we have to drop her..
in whole way they chat of dofferent things...jay told pia about trees and birds..they both enjoy..jay stop at near street..
jay: nice to meet u hope see u again.
pia: me too bye..and pia started walking..jay though( she is sweet girl,i am sorry pia i cant cross my limites) and he draw away..

pia just take a turn of her street and she alisha standing their horribly with kunal..they both stare at her like they see ghost..then alisha walk near pia and hug her tightly..pia is so confuse "pls pia never do it again..never go their"
pia: hey alisha what happen ? i just go for walk..alisha come in sense and leave pia
alisha: i mean u r new here na so i scare what if u get lost..and i come here to take u out and i see u not on home...
pia:oh alisha dont wary actually i lost but some one help me..u know who jay khurana..he is so nice gay..pia murmur in low not like that sadu..
alisha and kunal stared at each other then pia..then again at each other..then alisha spoke"ammm thats good.. next time when u go out pls just tell me..and come on i am sure u didnt take anything so get in house today i will make breakfast for u.." pia made face and trio laugh..they passed whole day cheating and share things pia show them her mom dad pics but didnt tell anything about them..they talked with pia's best friend anu and enjoy lots..in evening pia told them she want to show wild range...and alisha and kunal happily ready..they all go in car..pia want to go in but kunal told her its not good to go so deep..they go to restore-rent..and pack pizza for pia..they leave pia at guesthouse and take leave..

pia come on she is so happy but she want to go in wood..so she ate and go to her window..her window open in wood..she set their and admire the trees and one thought made her face bright..she find a rope and tied it with one of handle and she take a leave of house from window to go in wood..when some small distance ahead she jump from rope..she is so excited of her this act..she thought wow this is big advantages to live alone i can do what i want..if i am in home and she shook her head..she started walking in wood..she admire the night and though in night wood seen lie awake..their is no fear in her eyes she fill like she made to leave in wood...she saw some animal and admire them some time and again started walking..she listen the water wave and she started walking their..

in other side abhay took out for hunt..he want to come out of her thought ,that girl!!arrhh!!! then he started running fast concentrate on sent..he then smell human and he stop with jerk,he listen the scream of animal in pain and cry..then sent of human, he thought what is human doing in deep wood at night..is that someone in trouble? then again he concentrate on smell he fill like familiar and he jerk his eye open.."this sent..of that girl..what is she doing here ..is she in trouble...and abhay started follow the sent..and when he reach he stop in horror bez of seen which he saw..he saw the girl try to free a leg of deer from crocodile...she use her full strength and ride on crocodile and try to open his mouth so deer's leg free ,she didnt afraid for her life in her eyes he can see that..then she success and deer run from their with blooding leg...now actual fight start crocodile hurt bez someone free his dinner and he attack on pia..and pia fall in water abhay run and jump in water to save her..she swam in water to save herself and crocodile after her...abhay take her in his arm and jump out river..they both breath ast..pia cluch on abhay like child...she hide her face in his chest..and abhay pet her back try to calm her..
"calm down u r safe .." abhay said huskily.." thank u." after sometimes both come in sense and anger come in abhay's eyes he distance her" what r u doing in wood? and what it necessary to save deer or its another try to suicide.." now pia come with save range" yes i am trying to diifent way of suicide but u always interrupt me...and what r u doing here? r u stalk me? and why that crocodile run away from u...i think he also dont like u.." and she made disgust look.."one more word and i throw u in water myself" in anger his eyes color changed and pia note that in horror..she thought what is this why his eyes color change...abhay think she scare because of him and he smile and his eyes become normal..."now u afraid of me.." then pia come back and stand " i dont want to talk u ..go to hell and i am not scare of u.." and she started walking but abhay pull back her..

abhay: u have to scare.. she is so close to him..
pia:jerk him leave me sadu..i am not interested to talk with u and i am not scared..
abhay dont leave her and pull her more close now his breath caress on her face and she close her eyes to inhale the sent..abhay also melt calm and caress his hand on her cheeks,he think what is this girl doing with me...she also made me angry and also clam..abhay make a grip..scare her..before he start to threaten her one tear drop from her eyes..abhay become shocked.."why r u crying?"
pia with anger leave him"this is none of your business ..and she run from their..abhay just watch her leave her tear bother him..what did i do..arrhh!!! this girl really mess with my head..i have to go from here..and he started running..

pia run from their she scared bez she fill safe in his arm..she fill happy and his sent make her dazzy..she scared bez thinking of her heart break again..she will not effort it..tear started running from her eyes..her past coming in her mind..and again she heart broken..her all happiness gone and she again started crying but she dont want to do it so she go to take bath but his face and change eye color come in her mind..what is it,,why his eyes color change..their is something in him.. no wonder he is classic jerk but...but..he save my life...she smile..but how he come to know i am in trouble?..oh pia its just co incidence..leave it..and she sleep in bed..

abhay return in house he is so much disturb that girl face,sent her beauty bither him lots..and at last he didnt understand why she cried...he want answer he have to find her and asked her why did she cry? he is again so much frustrated..in why to melt down his anger he all ready broken three trees..never any girl make him crazy like this..he is like lion now..just one face come in his mind again and again and he know he have to find her..

in midnight she fill someone near her and she open her eyes in shock,then she saw him..very close to her..then he caress her cheeks and kiss her both cheeks then eyelids..pia is so shy and fill happy..then he caress her lips with his thumb..pia parted her lips and his thumb go in her mouth..pia shyly suck it..and he stare at her lovingly..then he come very close,his breath caress on her face and he about to kiss her but some sound interrupted them..pia made a face and he smile but sound didnt stop..then she recognize the sound its her alarm..he try to leave her but pia clutch his shirt and stop him"wait why my alarm ring now its just midnight na..then he laugh and pia come in sense.."what r u doing here" then she try to jerk him but she hit with something hard...

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Edited by cccppp - 13 years ago

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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Yay me first!
awesome update yaar.
Abhiya last scene was beautiful.
I loved the crocodile part too and the way piya saved the deer.
jay seems to be good here.
I hope abhiya falls in love soon.
thanks for the pm.
continue soon.

Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago

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Sheena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

amazing update!

pia was trying to save a deer! aww Abhay saved her😆

thanx for the pm!

continue soon😊

Edited by abhiya0006 - 13 years ago

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bellaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

yar awsome update...
loved abhay thinking that all leave ...
jeh is nice but he thought in mind to stay in limits what that?
alisha is so sacred na when she went someother way...
ufff abhiya agin in jngle...
in a second they became angry...
loved piya line...crocodile even dont like u...
poor piya...so heart broken...
hawttt abhiya scene in bed with alarm...
i thk its a dream...
cont soon