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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice c.s ... continue soon nd do pm me ..😊
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Nice character sketch Plz cont soon
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character sketch is interesting...😃
plz pm me wen u update...😊
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nice character sketch. continue soon and dont forget to pm me
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awesome character sketch plzz continue n pm me..
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nice character sketch...cont soon 😊
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CHAPTER 1

DEHRADUN, DOBRIYAL MANSION.

A curly head girl is sleeping with curved all the face with white blanket.suddenly a door of her room is knocked and she drifted out of her deep sleep said aloud tht i m coming in 15 minutes.she stood up on her feet open her eyes and went straight to the window and inhale the scent of fresh breeze and smiled and thought that something good happening in her life now i can feel it...what will be that .lets see .she dressed up and came domnstairs.

A man sitting on a dinning table said: oh piya come join me.u r late today.so sorry papa but u know that last night i cant sleep properly so thts y i cant wake up early today but papa its 9:30.its not too late.i m only half an hour late.ya ya i know tht piya but the rule is rule ok.ok papa...but where is kabir and siddhart bhai and stupid misha.

A girl with two boys came to the downstairs; what u called me stupid piya i will not leave u today...the two boys r none other than kabir and siddhart...kabir :u deserve tht my sis...misha:how mean u both two r..ok babba i m sorry u r not stupid but a very sharp girl now happy..misha:ya very becz i m not like bore...sid:ok now everyone stop it.

Madhu serving a dinner to them.arnab u seem very happy today ...any gud news...arnab ya actually i wanted to tell all of u four of them a very important news.u all of them not going college today okkk ...piya :thats the important news u want to tell us huh? Arnab:no' actually u know tht na i wanted to help and peace every where of world of other creatures.today chand raichand called me and wanted a help of me to slove some matters of their family as u all know tht he is more like a friend to me so definately i said yes to him and now his four children come to dehradun today and wanted to stay with us...so please u all behave and u all know them very well tht they r vampire so please u should be stay in ur limits in front of them ok...

And u misha didnt try to do anything naughty...kabir what ever happened dont loose ur temper infront of them...siddhart u are sensible so i hope u didnt do anything stupid because u know vampire very well what the qualities of them...and my sweet piya never try to do mind reading of them ok ...they will understand that u try to read their mind...now i have to go office.they may came dehradun today.give them warm welcome...bye my childs..misha:ufff dad give us too much lecture yar lets see who they are?seems dad are very close to raichands..piya:ya chand raichand is dads very close friend so all of u understand now that we should be remain very gud in front of them and never use our powers for them.kabir:ya ya got it but i feel something gonna be happen which wil change our lives.

Piya:sitting on the bed,reading book on vampire than suddenly she thought,who are the raichands..i never met them only dad and mom know them well.whatever they are if dad said we should be mix up in them than we have too...hope tht they r gud in nature..waiting 4 u raichands...and than she smiled..

RAICHAND HOUSE:MUMBAI

Wow we are gonig to dehradun yupieee..thank god we r gonig somewhere else place .a girl with straight hairs jumping in joy than suddenly a girl with black hairs stopped her.what r u doing alina?stop being soo much naughty u know that well y we are going to dehradun to keep an eye on them..i will never leave them just i wanted a one chance to but the discussion of them cut it between and a boy with brown eyes came in the room and said:priya please stop hurting urself..now forget tht nightmare and pack ur lagguge we have to go now..but where is abhay?

Scene shift to a room;

A boy with blue eyes standing near the window and enjoying the cool breeze along with this milan came into the room abhay what r u doing? Abhay turned back with smiled said i m just enjoying the nature bhai.u know na we have to go now just pack ur bag and come downstairs mom dad are waiting for us. Saying that he leaved abhay...abhay thought:i just hope that everything will go fine but i dont understand the war with wolfs especially with them were with us along time ago that never will be end but now suddenly what happened that dad want us to go dehradun to check them...and y we will go to stay with arnab uncle not to our home?uggg i thought alot common abhay dad mom want us to safe hand that y may be? I also wanted to meet with uncle and their family its good to be with them..

The four of them come downstairs to bid their parents goodbye...chand advised them to be good with their childrens ok guyss dont make difficult situation for them and be mixed up with them .they are very nice people...haseena smiled and hugged their childs and said we will also came when chand will be free from their business there ok dont worry ...

Alina:common mom we r vampires.we can handle ourselves u dont be bother about this...priya:ya mom dad we r strong enough to handle every situation and that wolfies...abhay:ok mom dad we have to go either we will be late arnab uncle must be waiting for us and milan bhai is also with us so chillax nothing happen wrong right bhai.milan with smile: rite ..and they all leave to their journey to dehradun

Chand & haseena:

i hope what i have been thinking thats come true.they know that they have send them there to check on wolfies but i have send them also for another reason..soon they will mix up with the arnab family and liked their childrens also...than we will succeed..haseena:chand i think this is not rite with them and also with our childs what if abhay and others knows that they will never forgive us.and its not rite we didnt even tell this too aranb and madhu .they shuold know about this thing...chand: no no haseena if we tell them than they definately not agree to this because we r vampire and they r witch or wizards so they never try to understand that..when the rite time come thay may know about this...rite now i want all of them should be mixed up..try to know about each other...


Hope u guyz liked it..😊

Edited by bellaaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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First of all a big thankyou for the pm. The update was splendid. I am eagerly waiting for Abhiya meeting. So, what is it that chand and haseena are hiding from all? Pls update soon and do pm me next time too. U are a great writer.

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