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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved abhiya meeting
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hope u guyss liked it..plzzz do comment on it and hit the like button too..😊


CHAPTER 3

DEHRADUN,DOBRIYAL MANSION:

In the morning after having a breakfast all were gonig to get ready for a college.piya didnt seen abhay anywhere even his brother sisters were here.piya thought he must angry with her thats why not showing his face to her.so she decided to say sorry to abhay right now.piya goes to abhay room before knocked it door was opened already.piya enter the room and look for abhay but he is not there,she goes to the center of room and standing look for him at the back of her abhay is standing.

Abhay coldly said:what are you donig here?

Piya with a jerk turned around and saw abhay standing very clsoe to her face:i was just looking for you all around.why didnt you came to have breakfast with all of us?we were all waiting for you..

Abhay:that why because you again think that i am drinking a human blood,how disgusting creature am i in the earth right?i should also told all of them too plss not to kill human for blood thrist at all as how heartless we are after all we didnt bother or care someone and sucked their bloody lifes na?saying with anger...

Piya having a tears:abhay i ...

Abhay:plss i didnt want to talk with you piya.leave me alone.abhay goes near his table to took some books for his college study..piya going near to him..

Piya:abhay i am sorry really very sorry i didnt want to hurt your feelings.as i am not know about yours life so when seeing you all having a blood and listened when you said that you all live on blood only so i thought that you all might drink human blood..and never even tried to think that even when we were weak and want some energy ..we also drink blood (animal blood)but for your side i stop thinking about like this and whatever i thought that time i spoke not knowing that you may also be lived on animal blood...i am very sorry abhay plss forgive me...i never do that stupid act again plss..saying all this in a crying tone...abhay who didnt turned around when she said all this now face her...

Abhay:how do i believe you?i know you are thinking about us same like as that..

Piya:no abhay.i never thought like that believe me.we also are some werid creature, a witch how do i thought about vampire.do look in my eyes abhay you cant see i am not lying...crying more harder now...

Abhay coming closer to her:shhh stop it piya...you are crying like a baby..

Piya:no first say you have forgiven me..

Abhay:ok apology accepted now stop crying ...removing tears fron her cheeks and looking into her swallon eyes..piya also looking to abhay eyes..

Piya:friends now?

Abhay with full smile:yes...you look better when you cry and winked...piya hitted abhay...

IN THE HALL:

Priya hurriedly down to the stairs and about to fall than suddenly kabir caught her from her waist..when kabir looked into her eyes he saw a burning fire in them ...priya get away from his clutches.

Priya said:how dare you to touch me?

Kabir:hey i am not interested to touch you i was did that to save you but saying thank you.you even insulted me..

Priya:i am not a bloody human ..you are forgotten i am a vampire..got it never ever dare to touch me again saying this she left the place and went out for waiting others..kabir smelling a different smell from her and get more angry and thought what hell she think of herself..sucking vampire..

Milan,abhay,alina and piya comes to down as sid, misha were waiting for piya...piya sees kabir and thought something is wrong with him i will talk with bhai later...alina joyfully said lets go guyss to rock the college with this misha also says yup lets go for it..sid in his mind to see alina like that...mad girl..the raichands go with their own ride and dobriyals go with their own..

MOUNT COLLEGE:

In the college two mercedes in black stopped in the parking.when raichands come out of the car everybody were staring them like they belong from the other planet..they met with dobriyals and walk with them in the college.as they walk piya sees several girlzz drooling over milan and ahay..this is not new for piya and misha becz these bimboss also drool over their brothers too but now piya feels very strange.everyone is looking over raichands from down to top..boyzz are too x-rays priya and alina making this priya uncomfortable...

Dobriyals all took them to their friends group...to the canteen

Misha:hey everyone...

Ruhi,angad,sauriya,t,aryan,prachi looked them with bright smiled...hey guyss how are you all..ruhi said that..

Sid:we are fine my jan...

Ruhi:dont call me that uggg...

Piya:you both are again started...guyss meet them raichands...

Thay all shake hands with them...

prachi:oh my gosh milan you are too handsome..

Milan smiling: you are also much beauty...stating that misha is looking milan to unbelievable eyes and said in lower voice to milan : she is a friend of us so behave...

Milan just said: hmmm..

Abhay:you all are too nice ...

Aryan:you all are vampires right??as we introduce ourselves me,angad ruhiand suriya are hybirds and and prachi,t are witches too so dont get panic to this...

Angad:ya we are half wolf and half wizards...but you all now some long years ago..the ruled of our creatures changed now we cant live with our family as all wolfs,vampire and wizards live only with their same mate now...so we all are a family like...and these pointing towards dobriyals..are our family members like..so now you all are also welcome to the family...

Suriya:so what..i feel happy to live with you guysss..and you guyss also having a too much fun with us..what say angad...

Abhay seeing a uncomfortablness in angad:well i dont want to be the part of yours family..you are a flirter saying to angad..the way you gives hints to that girl(sitting on the side of canteen)i saw you .u are a big flirter...hearing that ruhi shout what you are seeing that girl.i know that i have a doubt on you i will not leave you now.abhay what are you saying,i am innocent ruhi he is lying trying to trap me,he know that we are in love that why making a scene that you will not leave me.trust me ruhi..all are laughing for the angad condition everyone knows that he is gonna be dead now...abhay tell her na i am donig nothing...abhay smiled loudly...ruhi try to hit angad..he run from there ruhi running behnd him...

Sid:wow abhay you did a superb job yar...poor angad..

Aryan:ya he is dead now...

T:coming closer to abhay seems you are very naghty abhay and take her hand on his shoulder.piya is seeing this with wide eyes..abhay stare to piya and smiled than...

Alina:oh he is not but seem you are...winked to abhay...says in her mind go ahead bhai...abhay gives dagger look to alina...milan also smiled in that statement of alina...

Kabir:if this all drama ends than we should move now to our class..

Piya:ya we should go to our classes now...but its so funny na that we all are in the same class..bhai remain with us so they will keep an eye on us but why all you are in same class..i mean is there any issue with you guysss...priya seems tense for piyas question but milan hold the situation" mom dad always want us together like one so we always study in same class even i am bigger than all...piya smiles and they all move to their class way...

IN THE CORRIDOR:

They walked in the corridor suddenly priya smellled them felt his aura ..she alert all of them in mind.."they are coming closer guyss"..abhay ,milan,alina looked each other and abhay held priya hand tight to esure her every thig is alright..than a boy come running to kabir ..hey coach is waiting for you to basketball ground..

Kabir:oh shit! I am gonig guyss..while running in the corridor he hits with someone and fall in the floor...

A group of boys standing in front of kabir..he looked upward and get fraustated..a boy with browns eyes and other to him grey eyes glaring him with evil smile...

Jeh:oh i have not seen like a garbage at you..poor guy seem hurted gaurav

Garvav:oh tititss common get up .i will help you with this..saying this he moves forward to him but kabir stood up and held his collar and punch him hard...

Kabir:dont dare you to come in my way...jeh also come in between and started to hit him hard but suddenly he fall down with head pain like someone pinching him..kabir looked upward ans saw piya is standing with all and she held her eye on jeh and didnt blink her..

Piya:dont you try to finger on my brother u get that straight...you dog..hearing this gaurav moved ahead but piya spell on him held his neck...back out if you want to live..and throw him on the wall..abhay coming closer to him now..

Abhay:you never ever now touch anyone got that because i am here now...never think about to harm them specially to her you should go first to me than...giving him angry look..gaurav stood up...misha,sid run to kabir who is standing with them now and watched it all...gaurav look to all raichands and saw priya and evilly looked at her...but didnt said anything to them and took jeh with all his group...a girl watching all this in a hurrified eyes...

Gaurav:tania lets go from here...she moves with them with horror in her eyes..sid looked to her with sympthay...

IN THE CLASS:

Sid,miaha sat on the last bench..kabir ,piya next to them...opposite last bench milan,alina sat and next to them apriya and abhay sat...abhay held priya hand with consolation in his eyes..she looked to her borther who cared alot to her...thinking what i have done to you but still you all care for me,love me having tears in her eyes...abhay in mind whatever done its just yours past dont look it your past live a life now we are living.i will not let him harm you this time ,i will guard you from any danger my sis with little smiling face...milan and alina also seen this and both smiled to looking them like this...

Milan:i think she can handle it now what say alina..

Alina:ya bhai.we are here for her..

Gaurav,jeh and tania and cousins of them rohan,rahul,anjali also came with them..and sit on the front benches.gaurav glared to priya and she ignored it...

Piya sees the tensed face of all of them and try to read the mind of abhay but didnt understand anything..she narrowing her eyes to abhay to get something than suddenly abhay turned his face to her..she blink her eyes in shocked ..he just smiled her expression...and nodded his head in no...piya removed her eyes from him...

After sometime angad,ruhi,t,aryan and prachi came to the class and sits next to piya kabir...after attending the class all went to the parking area.they all chatting than priya goes and sit to the car with her all of the raichands sit and go out to the college..piy,misha,sid,kabir,angad,ruhi,aryan,t and prachi,suriya sees that they cant even said them bye at all...piya sense that something is fishy...

DOBRIYAL MANSION:

Piya in her room seeing a horror movie.the door room opened and kabir came into room.piya feel that kabir is distrubed she switched off the tv and said..

Piya:what happened kabir.u seem tensed..

Kabir: i want to share something from you.i feel terribly confused..

Piya with deep corncern:what was that..

Kabir:you now when in the morning i touched priya to save her i smelled her very different as she didnt fully smell vampire its a like a smell of wolf too.i didnt understand how is this possible..

Piya:what are you saying kabir.you mean to say that she smell like a wolf too.this is not possible.you know that along centuries ago this is possible but when the fight between vampire and wolfs arised than to make some peace only one solution made that all creatures clan remain separately to other.no one come closer to other..they all even live different places and their between we were also pissed but after too mush struggle of dad and other clans now we all lived to face each other.. after that ruled applied that on one creature get married to some other different form of creature like witch cant marry to wolf or a vampie how can she smell like that said with full confusion...

Kabir:i dont know piya.thats thing also came into my mind.they must be hiding something from us and if we tell this to dad he will not believe in us.they think our magic powers are not fully gained now.you know that every body has not get the same power to do spells...

Piya: i know that you smell worewolfs too well but i am confused alot.ok you will relax i will try to do something..dont tell this to misha and sid because they stopped us to do that ..and sid bhai thught i am too small all for this..

Kabir:ok i have to go now..

Piya was thinking continously about raichands..thinking about priya and than the changes of their expressions when they met khurranas...thinking of her stopped bing knocked by the door...after answering abhay opened the door...

Abhay: may i came in hope i am not distrubing you..

Piya:oh common dont become so formal with me abhay...

Abhay:so why are you so busy that you didnt show your face after come to college...actually abhay was missing her...

Piya with smile:i was just watching movie than study about my some spell stuff you know that i am not gud in that..trying to concentrate more on that...

Abhay:i think you are great in your powers .the way you beat gaurav its seem you are too gud...if you need any help in that i can do to that...you should only concentrate more on your spells...

Piya:i know that but i need more training for that ,wait a minute how would you now about this...my lack of concentration...

Abhay:while i saw you last night donig all this...but you should only thing about that time your work ...focus on that only...

Piya:hmmm so you can teach me some tips now...(piya thought its not a right time to talk abhay about priya and their behavoirs)...

Abhay: why not anytime..sitting closer to her bed you know witches is very clever they can read or try to read anyone mind na...and smired to piya...

Piya nervously:no only those who they want to be... piya realzed what had she said..i mean errr i mean looking to other side..

Abhay:what you mean? Teasing her looking straight to her...why you want to read my mind...you now its just not gud to read someone thoughts...

Piya shaking:i was just ...err like that you feel alright..i saw your tensed face..abhay face expressions changes than cover up quickly..

Abhay:oh you shouldnt take too much worry for me..piya looked to him and about to say when abhay put his finger to her lips...you talk too much..they both stare to each other with longing eyes...abhay removed his finger

Abhay with deep voice:why you care for me...

Piya almost whisper just only to hear him: because you are my frined...

Abhay smiled:i think in future we are becoming best friends and held her hand smiling...piya also smiled and held his hand tightly..piya again thought to ask about abhay..

Piya:abhay i than stop in between...abhay grinned..piya thought i didnt want to loose friend like you.you are my special friend...nothing abhay i just forget what to say...abhay noded..so did you liked our college and friends..

Abhay:hm its nice and about your friends all are gud but t is superb what should i say...making her tease again...piya turned her face to abhay in a fake anger..abhay touched her cheek and move her face to look him...abhay kept her hair lid back her ears..piya just intoxicatingly looking to abhay...abhay again looked her..piya feel like abhay eyes look into her soul...abhay come closer to piya...piya breathing really fast now...looked into his eyes...abhay realize what had just he going to do now..smiled to piya abit ..

Abhay:i have to go piya..bye..

Piya short of words just said:hmm

Abhay went out to piya room and reached his room in a wind speed..thought..what has happened to me..what am i trying to doing with her..oh man what she did thing of me..i should behave in front of her either i will lost her friendship with a stern look into his face..on the other hand piya thought...what was happened in a second ago is that reall...i should control my stupids emotions what will abhay think of me like i am a bimbo..i should carefull that in future its never happened...abhay is really a nice person what should i say a vampire..and started smiling again...

KHURAANA HOUSE:

Jeh and gaurav were sitting near the fireplace..i dont understand after that incident what they are donig here...they definately came here to do something..something is fishy...we were still trying to find out that powerfull creature but all in vain..we were locating for that along ago...saying all frustated gaurav...gaurav have a pateince..i believe that one day we will find that but i will kill that morons..how they will cross our way if they will did something wrong with us than swear i will not leave them and that idiot kabir i will not leave him this time even that leeches were with that black wizards...ya jeh thats the thing which i felt very strange why they were surrounding with them..there is must be something that we didnt know we have to find out about this and i love to met them again specially priya with evil smile...jeh looked to his brother but we were remain very conscious now gaurav..i will keep an eye on them now..lets see what they want...smiling wickedly...tania hiding to the stairs side listening all this conversation become feeling very helpless..she is the one who is still have some humanity in her in this house...

Edited by bellaaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum updt...loved the college part
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for pm
superb update
so abhay and pia are already falling in love
wonder what's wrong with priya...was she involved with gaurav earlier and he hurt her..?
wakitin for ur next part


Edited by MS-meghasharma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update... love abhiya... and fighting part too...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update...👏
loved both da bedroom's wale scene...😃😳
continue soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update... I liked the bit where abhay defended kabir.
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was a long part...
i loved it reading...
ur writing is something i really adore.
i love ur simple reading.

first scene was very well narrated.
it was really good... reading.
second lasy scene ws too good.
a like abhiya here, their relationship is unique.



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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update. So, both piya and Abhay have started to fall in love. I hope Tania helps the raichands and dobriyals. I think there is something wrong between priya and gaurav. Pls update asap and thanks a ton for the pm. Ur writing style is just beautiful.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome update
gaurav and jeh are so evil .. ! Tania seems nice..
I like abhiya's bonding..
Continue soon
thanx 4 d pm
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