SS-You brought the colours! Xmas update CH11-pg76 - Page 8

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Oh really nice update Meera.
Poor Piya has a lot on her hands! The office-cabin part was very cute though... Though he was so rude to her I really found it funny 😆
Loved it

Originally posted by: CIDMaaneetNaksh

Resherlved

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oky...this time.. I hope I am not late...😃... haina?😉🤗yupee

first of all... I like black... coz I like evil 😈

hmm.. now the update... first of all... one confusion... the guy who approached Piya wasn't Abhay...I guess na?🤔no it was a random guy

and... uff... was that Abhay... kya adaayein hai... sachchi😳

me fainted🤢abhay hai hi itna dashing😉

Pia... what happened to her... do clear it soonish...😃oh!dear she's in dreamland!oh r u asking abt y is she udaas?🤔will tell soon.

can't wait to see what happens next😎

and that file waala scene...was superbly written... I mean...it's hard to depict what we see in words... but you were stupendofantabulous 🤗Thank you...but samajh nahi aya kya😆tu kahe toh writing standard thoda low karun?

I was smitten by the way you write...! beautiful...!And i am smitten flat by u taarif😳

have to specify- that guys was SO mean...😲... I mean...really... mean... ufff... teri adaa! I love the way you get angry!😳guy matlab abhay?

btw... coming to next post...

what yr? this update came out really beautiful...! dun say you weren't happy... it was all too awesomeThanks... will churaofy some scenes from your SSchori not allowedwhich scene😆...! hmm... tu na aise Update likhegi na...toh bomb girega PKYEK forum pe...!haye!!aur mujhe par toh tune foolon ki barish kar di!🤗

jus kidding huh!

continue soonish... very very soon haan! that's my order...samjhyo ki naaahi😆nai🤣

btw... next time you better tell me... when you res...I dun wanna be peechhe waala train ka dabba😆okeee

muah... *hugz*

-shi

Originally posted by: anjali0111

wow nice update!!!!!!!!👏
Thank u
u potrayed abhiyas characters well.👏

so abhay yahan b sadu hai😳...i think the image really suits him...he looks even more sexy while showing attitude.😉yup

while pia is quite different frm her usual self...she is nice, cooperative but still silent n indifferent.😔bcoz she has faced hard time and it resulted in this...i mentioned in 1st update
liked their first meeting...he is totally a "work devil"😈

so the very first meeting itself had its effects on pia...huh😉...she already seems interesting in finding out the reason of abhay being sadu(.😆)

but i m confused a little bit.😕(Again questions-but now i also have a question mai kuch zada hi ghuma rahi hun kya...is it to difficult to understand)...in first chapter, para 1 u have written abt pia dreaming of sum1...n it was mentioned that he left her...my confusion is - was that first para was like prologue n she mentioned abt abhay or it was her past in which sum man left her n now she is starting her life again. plz clarify this thing.😕past...it was first chappy not proluge

continue soon. 😊