FF-Hum Tum:) chapter 23 on pg 96...NEW UPDATE*****

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flora212

@flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#501

Dear u r just amaizing writer!👏I am really pleased with ur way of writing.😃 And who is that old man telling about future?😕 Is he abhay dad?😕 And is abhay dad alive?
Abhay leaving...no...😭
And plz do give happy ending of this ff!😊 If u give sad ending i will be shattered😭 cause ur os still makes me cry! 🤢And abhay is prince?😳 And the grandfather of abhay seems cruel?😡 Hope abhiya realise their love fr eachother soon!😉
Want to see more romantic moments.😛 Update soon...🥱

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@Trouble.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#502

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awesum updt...loved abhiya...n d dialouges...hope abhay changes his decision ...hope they realise their luv soon...n thnx 4 d pm n continue soon

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#503

awesome update

loved it

so abhay's grandfather is behind that box

I hope Abhay takes the old man's advice and do not leave the house

continue soon

thanks for the PM

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#504

Loved the abhiya scene yaar , awww abhay cares for piya soo much , and the hell where those guys and why is chain soo precious , upd soon waiting for some more abhiya seen , u rock and thanks for pm

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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#505

Awesome update. Hope abhay changes his decision. I.loved the last dialouge where abhay said piya to write all her question in a piece of paper. Pls continue soon and thanks for the pm.

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@_Chits_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#506

awsome update...👏
abhay n pia both care so much for each other...😊
hope dey realise dat dey love each oder soon...😃

plz unfold da mystery of da gold chain soon...😕
for which dey wanted to harm pia n abhay...
hope now he does not leave CHINTEN...😊
continue soon...😊

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#507

God bless tat baba or priest whoever it was , he did an excellent job yaar by putting some brains in abhay , I think now he won't be living and abhay's dialogue as usual classic loved it yaar plsss upd soon can't wait for next upd

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.AgapiMou.

@.AgapiMou.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#508

Superb update!!anxious 2 kno if abhay shall leave or nt..i gues he l nt leave..so d mystery man z hs own dad!!update soon..cnt w8..

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Monkey

@TISA0711

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Posted: 13 years ago

#509

sorry didn't cmmnt on previous updates.bt read them all nd really loved those.

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#510

"Write all your questions down on piece of paper, and someday in the future, if I'm in the mind to torture myself, I'll try to answer them," Abhay said irritably.

This surely cracked me up. Brilliant update normally I would hate the king but right now loving him as that might keep Abhay with pia