ABHIYA FF GROUP:::SANDS OF TIME::18 July 12 pg 148

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#671

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Superb update dear.
u have taken the story to the direction in which it meant to be i.e dark.
It was ruthless of abhay to bite ayaan but it shows how dark his character.
Now piya has no power, she is poweless.
So, both abhiya are revengeful now, wow.
Waiting for the next part. Pls continue as soon as I get time.
thanks for the pm.

I was totally disheartened by how easily ABHAY was reforming. I want ABHIYA fighting each other like cats and dogs.

The story has to move on ABHAY has a routine which was broken. Pia had rules to abide by again this is broken. Eventually the balance has to be restored somehow right???? They are supposed to bring the best and worst out of each other. So now Abhay's rought the worst outta Pia while Pia will in due time bring the best out of Abhay.

Next part should be fun to read i think. Anji has a brilliant job at hand.

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#672

Originally posted by: TeDylove
so now story is back in track...pls ayesha i request u,,i know u handed this FF authority to dishu..but made this story dark..i really love it..😛

now pia's all energy and powers gone i think and she will only human now..so leats see how she will fight..😊
i love abhay's gray character.🤢.and i think after abhay's bite ayaan will be fine..bez of it..?😕

hope fully we can see abhay's past ..and pia's secrete hope not out yet..

will be waiting for next part..⭐️

Correcting the DARK FF was a MUST. A NECESSITY.

Abhay has already been infected with some kind of love drug on PIA he just can't differentiate between lust and love yet not does he have the emotional or mental ability to see good right now. He feels betrayed by Pia and her taking him to the lake was a big no. He's not stupid but he can do his calculations and see when someone is playing him.

On seeing ABHAY'S past well i made a slight suggestion to Anji its up to her what she decides.

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#673

Originally posted by: urmita
wow ayesha...awsome update..
so the story is back on its dark story track...how cud abhay attack a little kid- god abhay is like pure evil , poor ayan...
what will happen to pia now.. nd how is she even going to make abhay pay if she is this drained of power...
pls be quick with next update...m too eager to wait...
update soon..😊

Yeah the dark track is so back I wanted ABHAY to be HEARTLESS. Its nothing new killing children was fun for him in his past lets not forget to mention tasty but its much more rewarding killing girls.

I am trying to get my writers to free up some time. So Hopefully we get the rota back on. Next book DISHU is in charge of it coz i am bowing out.

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#674

Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay
wow ayesha back in action ...very dark story ..feel bad for ayan ...you up date this ff after a long time ...but i must say it is superb and very dark ...i love it ...worry for piya what happened with her
waiting next up date very eagerly hope this time you will give up date soon
just awe-some 👍🏼

Don't get your hopes up this is only a temporary fix. I am still quitting all form of storytelling until my works over.

I am still chasing after something Like a bull in a china shp. I need my evidences sorted first.So until then i am a caged bird

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#675

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
oh gosh ! Thanks Ayeshu for bringing this ff back on track,it really is DARK now! Oh no so Pia used all her powers... How is she going to stop Abhay now?

The FF makes some sense right. I kept writing then deleting then writing. Eventually the pin dropped. I had a moment of clarity.

How will Pia stop ABHAY????I don't know but she will have to remind Abhay of who he was. Then get him to spend quality time stewing over the wrongs in his life and make it right as rain for him.

TOUGH LOVE approach

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#676

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.
awesum ayesha!!oops..pia usd all her powers!!now what??nd what's abhay gonna do??its getting dark..

I want Daniel's involvement back in so i have requested a little of him and show how Daniel came into ABHAY'S life. This will be further down the track

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#677

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
Wow wow wow super wow gal u won me over again. what was that. oh my god Pia is no more an angel now Abhay will kill her update update sooner

Good thats the reaction i want Will ABHAY kill Pia???? No idea. He just wants to get laid Now he just wants blood. Pia's blood.

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#678

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what is abhay planning to do?

FOR now he is just getting Pia where it hurts Counting this magnitude of betrayal will cost Pia but she will take him down with her.

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#679

Originally posted by: TISA07
omg! omg!what's this?piya is nt an angel anymore???what the hell is abhay doing?

Time to reassess the enemy. So Abhay is picking at Pia's weak points. AYAAN her friends and family. This is just the tip of the iceberg.

Love never runs smoothly neither does redemption.

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#680

Originally posted by: luckdiya
Omg!!!!!! Shocking update killer abhay is bck..& piya is no more an angel...poor ayaan:( hw culd he? He is sooo evil..rgt nw feelin 2 bad..i thought dey r fallin in ❤️ bt i ws wrong... Wht vil happen nxt??? update soon... Story is gttin interestin day by day

Abhay never reformed. He was on the brink of turning for Pia until she'd taken him to the lake then he saw her fight werewolves off. Cleaning up after a tirade of relentless killings

love will have to wait Pia's about to get even now this is so much more interesting

I am more excied reading my writers work and see the magic ok i just want blood and guts🤣