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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

How am i gonna get some sleep now? 😭 Abhay died and all evening it was his ghost with Pia 😭 😭 😭 😭 brilliant awesome heartbreaking at the same time

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Oh Tammy!! Why do you have to make me cry!!

😭

It was a damn cute update!! I loved reading it except the ending!! Wonderful OS😳

Thanks for the PM!!😊

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

WOOAAHHH !
Brilliantly written and described!
I literally cried reading this...Great job on writing this amazing OS!

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anjali

@adnilover

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

beautifully written Tamanna! it was heartbreaking. Abhay's ghost was with piya all evening

and hey, I am waiting for an ff from you. And no sad endings in that!!!

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

ooommmggg!!!!!!!!! i m shocked😲
kisi din tum hamari jaan le logi😭
feelin bad 4 pia... abhay died💔...&it ws his soul... 🥺

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Divya6696

@Divya6696

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

AWESOME Dear...!!👏
You made me Speechless..!
It was so Beautiful yet Heart wrenching..!!!😭😳
You really made me cry...!😭
Piya.. the poor soul..! She was all drowned in Abhay's love..!!
Brilliant Dear.. Truly Brilliant..!!👏👏

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tamanna

@tamannamalik

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: flora212
Wonderful tamanna!i really loved it.glad u liked it😊so abhay was the ghost who was wandering with pia.yeah😊

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tamanna

@tamannamalik

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: rashi.rose
OMG... OMG... OMG... Its jus HILARIOUS yaar:-):-)...

it was not suppose to be hilarious😕 but i am glad u enjoyed it😊

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tamanna

@tamannamalik

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni
oh tammy its wonderful os dear .thank u😊
i loved it .glad u liked it😊
poor pia abhay 'died .yeah
i m crying now .awww
u write wonderful dear .thank u sooo much😊
poor pia she spent whole day with abhay soul .yeah

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tamanna

@tamannamalik

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: hpoirotac
Tamanna, you made me cry.I rarely ever do when i read, but when i do, i can't stop...awww so beautiful,Tamanna, so heartbreakingly beautifulglad u liked it😊. I love this OS...it will be one of my favourites forever...that is so sweet, thank u so much😊

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