FF:DON'T BREAK MY HEART AGAIN last chapter pg 116 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
superb update dear .
i loved it .
now abhay friend with abhi .
i like misha and pia convo .
jey jerk comr to create problem
waiting for next .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
wow awesome updte very good so abhay n abhi friends wow precap seems interesting what will happen now
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of the story
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
well nice story but very little and short ,please up date soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
such a lovely update..aww abhay n abhi frnds! Kabir wil knw abt abhi! Waiting for abhiya to meet
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Chapter 7(1)

Jeh got out of his car and moves towards the gate of the house where pia lived.jeh rang the bell .After sometime,a guard came infront of the asked-oh mr.jeh ,what can i do fr u sir?
Jeh(in arrogant way)-PIA DOBRAIL!WANT TO MEET WITH HER?
Guard-sorry,sir she is not at home.
Jeh-so what?let me enter the house.i will wait here till she comes.
Guard-sorry to say,sir .madam has told me that no strangers should enter the house when she is not there.u can come to meet her at evening.
Jeh(shouts)-STRANGER!HOW DARE U CALL ME STRANGER?U KNOW WHO AM I?I AM PIA'S FUTURE HUSBAND.
Guard(afraid)-I...I...I AM SORRY,SIR!P..PP.. PLZ come in.
Jeh enters in the house.
...

Outside the fashion department

Abhay and abhi are still talking.Abhay began to like abhi very much.actually,abhi
is talkative like pia and he also ask to much questions just like pia.abhay also like his questioning habit as he misses pia.
Abhi-uncle,what's ur favourite hobby?
Abhay-hmm...football.
Abhi-wow,me too.ok what is ur mort important part in ur life?
Abhay (hesitatedly)-well...my wife.
Abhi-oh! U r married! So u have any children?
Abhay-nop.
Abhi(sadly)-oh,i thought i would like to play with them.
Abhay-why?dont u like to play with me?
Abhi-play with u?(gigling)u r big?
Abhay giving smirk-so u think i am big?don't forget my hobby is playing football?
Abhi smiling-so,wanna play?
Abhay smiling-sure!
Abhi ran to the children room and brought his football.abhay and abhi began to play football.abhay was feeling comfortable after long time.
...
Abhay's cavin

Kabir has finished his all work.now he is going to take some rest.kabir says to himself'phew,this abhayna he makes me do all the wrk and he sleeps like idiot'
suddenly kabir thinks'hey, wait a min.where is abhay by the way.'
kabir became worried.
Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Chapter 7(2)

Outside the fashion house

Abhay became tired due to playing with abhi.abhi is laughing'so uncle u have become tired'(bouncing the ball infront of abhay)
Abhay pretanding to be irritated'yah of course'.saying this he pulls abhi on his lap.abhi is enjoying sitting on abhay's lap.On the other hand, kabir is searching abhay.He spot him near a tree sitting on a bench with a little boy.he became shocked.but when he saw that the boy was just duplicate of abhay, kabir became more shocked.kabir'oh dont be stupid .what the hell r u thinking?'
Thinking this he left the place.
Abhi suddenly says to abhay'hey,i need to go'
Abhay-why what so hurry?
Abhi-my momma must be finding me. See u 2omorrow.
Abhay- OK...wait.
Abhi-what?
Abhay-hmm...we became friends but u didnt tell ur name.
Abhi-o yah,my name is abhi.whats urs?
Abhay-abhay richand.
Abhi-wow,our names r almost similar.bye abhay uncle,see u next time.
Abhay-see ya!
Abhi runs from there and abhay smiles to himself and says'smart boy'.
...
Kabir is walking through the coridor and lost in his thoughts. suddenly he sees pia and thinks'pia!what she is doing here?'and sees abhi running to pia'mom!'
kabir become shocked and thinks'what?pia has a son!And this is that boy whom i saw with abhay.how is this possible?does it mean it is abhays son?no,no. whatever it is i need to find out!'
...
Precape-kabir and pia meets.kabir asks pia about abhi.
Guyz will pm u all later.do comment.
Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
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wow!!abhi and abhay were too cute and what is kabir gonna do now!!
Edited by ilove99 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

amazing dr!!!!

abhay n abhai are developing gr8 bond!!!!
jey forcefully enter pias house... dats not gud!!!!
kabeer knows abhai is abhays son now!!!!
hope abhay gets dat info soon...
precap is interesting cont soon
Edited by Akshi0019 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
interestinggg... nw kabit knws d truth... jeh is sooo rude😡
abhay & abhi... r nw bst frnds...thks 4 pm😊
Edited by luckdiya - 13 years ago

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