FF:DON'T BREAK MY HEART AGAIN last chapter pg 116 - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update abhay teasing piya poor abhay he is so sad plz piya or abhay ko jaldi sai miwa do and that t now she is coming in paris to ruin there life update soon tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
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Chapter 16(1)

Haseena calls kabir. He pick up the phone at third ring.
Kabir- hello?
Haseena- kabir its me! Haseena aunty!
Kabir(excited)- oh aunty! Whats up! How r u?
Haseena- i am fine. Tell me how is abhay? And how r u?
Kabir- Me ! I am great! Abhay, he is fine.
Haseena- ok, thats good! Now i need to talk to u something related to abhay! I know , it would be better if i talk to abhay but i think it would be better if i talk to u!
Kabir- no problem aunty! GO ON!
Haseena then tells all the things related to abhay maraige. Kabir became shocked but he composed himself and said' dont worry aunty! I will take care of everything!'
Haseena- thanks beta! Take care! Bye.
Kabir- bye.
They both hang the phone.
Kabir to himself- looks like things r getting little bit complex. I hv to inform abhay! Other wise if pia knows anything, fuel would be added to fire!'
Thinking this kabir rushes out of his room.
...

Pia's apartment

Pia has cried whole night. In the morning, she was having a severe headache due to crying. She went to bathroom and freashen up. Suddenly her mobile rang,
pia- hello!
Nurse- mam, we r talking from hospital, ur son abhi r totaly fine! U can take him to home!
Pia, happily- really! I am just coming.
Pia hung the phone and got ready quickly. She put some make up so that abhi could not find out that she was crying whole night. As she walked out of the gate of house, she saw jehs car coming towards her.
Jeh shouts' hey pia! Where r u going?'
Pia- to take abhi from hospital.
Jeh stops the car infront of her- come i will give u lift!
Pia smiles- no thanks! I will on my own.
Jeh- come on, pia. If u go with me, i can also meet with abhi!
Pia thinks fr a while and said' Ok . Fine.'
Jeh and pia drove to hospital.

At hospital

Abhay has already came in the early morning to meet with abhi. Abhay is very happy not because he is going to meet with abhi but because abhi is his own son. Abhay enters ICU.
Abhays sees abhi is siting on the bed with his back with angry face. Abhay smiles- hey abhi! Whats wrong?
Abhi shouts in excitement- Uncle!!! U came?
Abhay sits on the bed near him- How r u feeling now?
Abhi with full confident- Fit and Fine.
Abhay smirks- hmm...I see! So when r u going back to ur home?
Abhi-TODAY!!!!
Abhay surprised- What? Today?
Abhi- yep! Mom must be coming!
Abhay thinks' what , pia is coming? Oh no! I hv to go from here, she will not like me to see me near abhi.'
...
The hospital garage

Kabir has arrived to talk to abhay. At that moment, jeh and pia also arrived. Kabir saw jeh and thinks' i hv seen thir man some where?'
Jeh put his hand around pia's shoulder and went into the hospital.
Kabir became shocked and decided to go inside the hospital.
Jeh and pia went in a lift and did not notice kabir. Kabir who is lost in his thoughts went inside the other lift. Jeh, pia and kabir came out the both lifts at same time. As kabir was still lost in his thoughts he bumped accidently on pia.
Kabir says sorry and notice that it was pia.
Pia smiles- oh kabir! When did u came!
Kabir- hmm...right now? To see abhi...
Pia- oh yah! Let me introduce...kabir, this is jeh my friend and jeh this is my best friend kabir...
Jeh gave a fake smile and shook his hand with kabir but inside he was feeling jelous to see pia smiling with kabir.
Pia- so lets go and see abhi!
Kabir- yeh sure!
...
In ICU

Abhay and abhi has talked fr long time. Suddenly abhay realised that he has stayed fr long time so he decided to leave before pia sees him.
Abhay- ok abhi, i hv to go now. Get well soon!
Abhay got up from the bed but abhi grabbed his hand and said with sad sound' U r going so soon! '
Abhay looked at abhi who is looking at him with teary eyes. Abhay thought' abhi i just wish i could live with u and ur mom like this forever but...maybe it is not going to happen. I love u my son.'
Abhay came near abhi and put his hand around his shoulder and said' Hey i am not going anywhere! By the way i can meet with u in office, right!'
Abhi with broken tone- but may be mom will not take me to office because of my acident!
Abhay- no problem. I will come to ur home to meet with u?
Abhay was also not sure as he said this.
Abhi happily- really! YEPPIE!!!
At that moment , kabir, jeh and pia entered the room and pia froze to see abhay sitting near abhi.
Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago
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Chapter 16 (2)

Abhay also froze to see pia. They had an eyelock.
Kabir saw this and smiled to himself. Jeh was burning like a fire.
Then abhi spoke- ahem, ahem! Whats going on? Why u guys are standing like a statue?
Pia and abhay came back to sences.
Pia- huh... Abhi! How r u feeling now, dear?
Abhi smiles- great!
Abhay suddenly said- hmm...i think, i should go now! U guys talk!
Abhay was about to leave when kabir block his way and smirks' What so hurry abhay? We can sit here fr sometimes more! By the way office is closed now, right pia!'
Pia hesitantly- y...yes!
Jeh than shows his face and shook his hand with abhay and said- hello mr. Abhay! Nice to see u again!
Abhay becames angry to see jeh but doesnt show it off and shook his hand with jeh- same to u!
Abhi sounding angry- U guys doesnt care fr me!
All of them laughed. Kabir gigling- abhi,dont worry! we came to take u from here!
Abhi- really! Thanks god!
Jeh- pia, i hv an idea! If u dont mind, we both can take abhi to resturant fr lunch!
Pia- thats a good idea! Isnt it abhi?
Abhi smiles.
Abhay felt sad that pia is going with someone else. Abhi notice this and said' hmm...mom! Can abhay and kabir uncle come with us? U know...they are my friends!
Pia looked at abhay. Abhay saw that pia was not happy with abhi's proposal.
Abhay to abhi- no problem abhi! U go and enjoy!
Abhi became upset. Kabir saw this- hey champ! Whats wrong? We r going, isnt it abhay?
Abhay glares at kabir.
Kabir gulped-... I mean, if pia doesnt mind?
Pia hesitanly- No no, u guys can come!
Abhi- yeppie!
Pia came near abhi and took her in arms. Suddenly abhi said' mom, can i go to abhay uncle arm , plz!(making a puppy face)'
Pia had no choice so she gave abhi to abhay. Jeh was becoming furious that he could kill abhay any moment. While taking abhi from pia, his hands touched with pia's and she felt butterflies in stomach.
Pia took discharge papers. And they all went to garage.
Pia went in jeh's car but abhi insist to go with abhay.
When pia went in jeh's car, abhay felt bad. Abhi saw this and said' hey lets go! What r u looking?'
Abhay came back to senses and went inside car and letting abhi sit in front sit.
Suddenly kabir saw that jeh car is not wrking and got an idea.
Kabir- hey jeh! Is every thing ok?
Jeh- i dont know! Let me cheak!
Jeh got out and cheaked and found that engine is broken.
Jeh- oh shit! The engine is broken!
Pia got out from car and asked' what happen?'
Jeh- pia, car is not going to wrk! What gonna do?
Pia- Oh no!
Abhay saw from his car that something is wrong. Abhay to abhi- hey u sit here, i am coming.
Abhi- ok.
Abhay got out of car and went near them.
Abhay- guys what happen?
Kabir- jeh's car is not wrking!
Abhay- oops, so what gona do?
Kabir- lets cancel our plan, we will go some other day!
Pia- i wish , i could but...abhi...he is so stubborn.if we cancel it then he will make me crazy whole day.
Abhay gigles at pias words. Pia gave a stare to abhay- not so funny, mr.abhay riachand!
Abhay still gigling- oops , sorry!
Kabir- ok i hv an idea, jeh u come with me in my car. Pia u go with abhay.
Pia shocked- what? With abhay?
Kabir-yeh if u dont mind?
Abhay inturepted- no need to force her! If she dont want so...
Pia inturepted hesitantly- no, its ok! I will go with u.
Abhay smirks.
Kabir- so problem solved! Lets go...come jeh.
Jeh was fuming in anger when he saw abhay taking pia.
Abhi jumped in joy seeing her mom coming with him in same car. Pia sat at front sit with abhi on her lap.
Abhay began to drive the car and was happy as pia is going with him after so long time.
When abhays car was on road, chand car passed by them who was coming from airport with T. Chand saw abhay and a sight of pia.
Chand get shocked and thought' What? PIA IS HERE?'
...
Precape- Abhay pia about to kiss...Misha kabir meeting.
Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
luvlly update dear... abhay is sooo sad... luv abhi & abhay bondinggg😊
thanks 4 pm ... continue soon...
plz update ur another ff...
Edited by luckdiya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome ...abhi n abhay's bonding n loved kabir...hope they cum to know wat jeh did 2 abhi...continue soon(n i changed my username from pkyekvisu to abhiya_pkyek)
Edited by abhiya_pkyek - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely
Finally pia giving in to abhay
I hate chand t and mostly jay

Kabir is so sweet
And abhi just like his father
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
I loved it
Haha kabir is trying 2 bring abhiya closer
Moron jeh & T
Its high time pia shuld know abhay never betrayed her
Plz cont
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Posted: 13 years ago
yippe abhiya together in 1 car and i really hope chand comes to know about T's truth
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update..abhiya in same car..wow..n waiting for precap!

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