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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 9:
ABHAY POV
that night everything changed ...pia was in icu ...when nurse brought my son...i carried him in my heart...i was very happy...i never thought my life could be so perfect...doctor told me that pia's cancer couldn't effect abhi so abhi was saved as pia she had to be in icu for some time beaocuse of her weaknees and cancer...but after an hour electricity went out...then i heard pia
voice crying for help...i handover abhi into mom's hands and went inside as i was walking i saw fire smoke...but now no voice...i went inside...i couldn't see anything properly...but as i walk ...i saw burning body on the bed i shouted but no reply ... i saw her all burned...i warp her with my jacket... i was crying then i picked her up but that moment something hit on my head and i fall down...everything was blank...
...
i woke up and found myself in my bed i touched my head and saw a bandage was tied on my head..i was trying to remember what had happen...but when pia name came in my mind i jumped...ran outside and saw sid with abhi...he gived a fake smile but i could see darkness then said"heybro u woke up"'yeah where is pia?..she isn't in the room or in the mansion...whe is she"i got scared but he bow
is head down .."bro..."my heart was racing then he said renaming his head down"she...she is...""what speak up!!!!""she is dead!!!" he was crying ...i couldn't believe my ears...everyone came out side...they were looking at me but when i turn to them their head were down...they couldn't match their eyes with me...i asked "where is she"..."the graved yard near our mansion"...without a second i started to run...sid and dad were running after me trying to stop me...but i couldn't believe...then i enter started looking of the graved yard i was crying shouting...this can't be happening no..plz!!!...then my eyes felt on that coffin which was looking all new went near...as i was taking steps...my legs were shivering...my heart was beating very fast then my eyes felt on the plate..the name...the name...the name!!!...was PIA RICHAND ...REST
IN PEACE ..I FELT ON MY KNEES I WAS CRYING...THEN I removed the cover of the coffin...and saw sand i started to gug with my hands...i wanted to see her then sid and dad came they pulled me away way but i didn't stop"abhay...stopit!!!...stop being mad!!!abhay!!!"i wasn't listening them then some other ppl garther and try to stop me pulling me away from the coffin...then i stopped...i was crying hurting myself...i couldn't save my love my life ...i lost..i had lost!!!!
...POV ENDS...

ABHAY STAND UP AND GOES TOWARDS THE STUDY TABLE...TAKES PIA PHOTO IN IT HANDS AND HUG IT...HE SAT ON THE GROUND AND SEE ABHI CRAWLING
TOWARDS HIM...HE SEE PIA PICTURE...

Abhay"pia i wish u were here with me to see son grow up...plzz(remmebering the event just happen)plzz be my pia or otherwise how will i survive...

...
RUHI HOUSE
Kabir:soo u r pia jaswal...
Ruhi:yes she is the one
Pia:stop it..(looking at kabir)tell me how do u know me?
Kabir:well...the person u met back on hill..is abhay richand
Ruhi:oh.w8 w8!!!...u said abhay richand? right...now i remember
the child we had found i saw him in airport with his dad abhay
richand...
Kabir:well yes...his wife face is like urs...
Pia:what?!?!?!
Ruhi:really?
Kabir:that all confusion is...his wife dead in india when their
marriage only took 8 to 9 months...
Pia:so he thinks i m his pia?...
Kabir:he love his soo much...
Pia:well i m not her...i born in new york...shifted here...from
childhood till now...i never went to anyplace
Kabir:not even india?
Pia:nope...
Kabir: but then...look abhay is my closed friend ...he did
everything for my happiness...my mom dead...i drunk alot...my dad
losted his hope..but a good friend abhay helpped me and now is my
turn..plz try to remmeber..plzzz...for him...u can be his..
Pia:stop it plzzz...i told u i m not the one...i never saw him...
Ruhi:i hope this personal matter wouldn't effect on our deal right

EVERYONE LOOK AT HER...PIA STOOD UP AND TURNED AROUND...LATER
KABIR STOOD UP...STARTED TO LEAVE...BUT NEAR THE DOOR

Kabir:fine...(looking at ruhi)don't worry this wouldn't effect on
our deal

HE LEFT ..PIA SAT ON SOFA RUHI CAME TO HER

Pia:y do his words is soo...u know...soo
Ruhi:feeling pia feelings
Pia:but dad told me this i never left los angles...
Ruhi:i know..ur dad even said that u had an accident here which
erased ur memories...
Pia:i need to go home now...

...
ABHAY MANSION
KABIR ENTER ABHAY WENT TOWARD HIM

Abhay(holding him from his shoulder):soo i told u na she is my
pia...my pia!!!!
Kabir:abahy she is not ur pia...plzz try to understand..
ABHAY(pushing him):no!no!no!...she is my pia
Kabir:i went their...she never went to india or any other
place...she was born in newyork...shifted here...
Abhay(falling on ground):y is this happening to me y?

...

INDIA
KURANA'S MANSION
JEH IN HIS ROOM LOOKING AT THE PHOTO OF PIA

JEH POV
y did u made me do this pia y..i told u be quite but u...i loved u i cared for u...but damm it abhay came between us...and my other damm secert...that secert runied everything...everything...i still remember...when electricity went out i went inside the icu and picked u up..but u woke up and started shouting..my other men replaced u my a burned body and put the fire in ...i carried u from back door but before going we could hear abhay voice ...but i put my hand on ur face...took u away...

PERCAP:
jeh reveal hw did PIA RAN AWAY...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
i hope piya cums 2 know abt her past
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Posted: 13 years ago
I love this ff... This ff is one which i look forward to...
Poor Abhay...i feel really sorry for him...
He really wants his pia back ...
Kabir is such sweet friend...
Im eager to know d mystery behind Piya...
Thanks for the pm...
Continue soon...
Love u ...
Renuka (Remona)...
Edited by renuka1997 - 13 years ago
iqrahareem thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rashi.rose

wowww... AWESOME UPDATE DEAR:-):-)


THANXS!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pkyekvisu

loved it

i hope piya cums 2 know abt her past


THANKS!!!..AND SOON!!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum dr!!!!
i loved it...
abhay is really in pain... i cant see him like dat...
plzz bring pias memory back... i want 2 see abhay pia happy...
n i hate jey... waiting 4 how he done dis 2 pia n abhay he was abhays friend den how???
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
I loved it
Oh i hope pia remember abhay soon
Plz cont..
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Posted: 13 years ago
THANKS GUYS FOR LIKING IT😳... I M SORRY FOR NOT REPLAYING TO UR COMMENTS😭 BUT I LOVE IT😃...SO DO LIKE MY POST AND DON'T FORGET TO COMMENT!!!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dr...
abhay is in so much of pain...
thnk pia's dad lied to her...
hope abhiya finds out the truth soon...
continue soon dr...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

awsum dr!!!!

i loved it...
abhay is really in pain... i cant see him like dat...
plzz bring pias memory back... i want 2 see abhay pia happy...
n i hate jey... waiting 4 how he done dis 2 pia n abhay he was abhays friend den how???
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm

THANX FOR LIKING!!!

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