Abhiya SS: Destiny's Desire Update 14 page 60 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey that nice os really gud start now have fun begins btw abhiya that was awsome u r well wrriten dont worry that superb plz update soon and plzzz add me pm list plzzz conu soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of the story
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Nice OS Shivani. Keep Writing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow awsome plz add me to ur pm list 😊
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Thanks Everyone i will surely pm you all

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 2

Chand comes over there, where Haseena and Abhay are standing

He says well there is a party at the Dobriyals and we are invited

Haseena for what

Chand says Mr dobriyals is expanding his business and he has invited all the business mens and their family to the party and we should go to . it is a good opportunity to get acquainted with everyone especially if we are gonna stay here . So both of you are coming with me to the party

Haseena yea we will.

Abhay : do I have to come?

Haseena yes you do since we all are invited

Abhay okay fine I will come but I am not interested in blending in with humans

Then Abhay leaves from there

@Dobriyals

Madhu and Arnab see's piya and says hello Beta

Piya: hello Uncle Auntie

Madhu to piya : there is a party @ our house Beta : please do come your uncle and I will be really happy

Piya: but Auntie it is a Business party how can I come?

Arnab And Madhu : you are our family Beta and it's just a party

Piya: but

Misha interrupts and says no buts or no you are coming and if you do not come I will come pick up you piya madam

Piya okay fine I will come

dobriyals house party

the Raichands come to the dobriyals house

Arnab: hello Mr and Mrs Raichand welcome and come in

Chand , Haseena, Abhay walk in

Madhu comes over there and says hello mr and Mrs Raichand and calls Misha and piya over their

And ask them to take Abhay over their in their friends group to hang around

Misha: hello Abhay my friends and I are over their and we are having our own mini party would you like to join

Abhay: no I am not interested

Haseena grabs his hand and says ofcourse he will join you all and says right Abhay

Abhay follows Misha and piya over to their group and Misha introduces Her friends Kabir, Angad, Tracker, and other girls and boys to Abhay and says lets us all enjoy our own party instead of hanging around over there.

Piya: Hi Abhay

Abhay: Just ignores her and walks away

Piya walks to Abhay and says excuse me I was being polite and you are just being so rude you could have said Hi too

Abhay: my choice and I don't feel like talking to you

Piya: well I was being polite and before she could say something else he walks off

Misha comes over there while piya angerly says to herself piya kya zaroorat thi tume use baat karne ki.

Misha: why do you look upset

Piya: I was trying to be nice with Abhay but he was being rude. I don't understand whats wrong with him. I thought since when I met him for first time we had a fight I should end it.

Misha: well forgot it. Don't waste your time on him . wait a second are you falling for him because yesterday you were like you don't care and you do not wanna see his face then what happened

Piya: well its nothing like that trust me and I thought maybe he was in a hurry like me yesterday and he was upset and I just irritated him more and I should say sorry but I guess he is sadu.

Misha: forgot him yaar

Piya: yea

After party is over piya goes to her hostel

Piya @ her Hostel

Thinking: why is Abhay so rude , why doesn't he talk nicely to me or anyone. What is his problem, why does his behavior affect me I feel really sad why. I mean people before I met him have been rude to me but I did not care. Is what misha saying true. Maybe I am falling for Abhay No piya wake up what are you thinking no way you are falling for him. Remember you are here for your studies

@ Raichands

Abhay Thinking: Today I met the girl again, she was trying to be nice and trying to say sorry to me but I was rude to her, I am rude to almost everyone but why did her tears pinch my dead heart. I don't have a heart, I am heartless but I was rude to her and I felt like her eyes were telling me please don't be rude to me. I don't know why is it because I have met many human girls in past 200 + years but I never seen such a innocent sweet nave girl like Piya. Maybe I should say sorry to her.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Suru ho gayi nok jhok ki yeh Kahani.😆 Brilliant Shivy.👏 Continue soon😊
Edited by snitchseeker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

nyc shivi... its gr8!!!!!!

now abhay will say sry 2 pia!!!!
cool yr!!!! i m waiting 4 d nest part... cint soon n thanks 4 d pm,
Edited by Akshi0019 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely shivi!!!

so abhay is gona say sry to pia...

continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice part next part hoping for more abhiya

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