Book 2 FF:Till the End of Time(updt*June8*pg140)

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#861

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wow!!! That was a superb smashing update tanzie!!!! 👏 👏 👍🏼
ya! It was full of shock bt d way u presntd it wth thrill nd action,it was just magnificient! ⭐️ ⭐️

hm..so i was ryt! Poor aryan was desparate to save hs wife n unborn child nd thot dis is d harmless way!! He trustd mohini whch was no doubt hs biggest mistake!!
mohini: "he is pure heartd mayb mre than Abhay!!" 😲 i hv no probs wth dis sentenc tanzie,as i adore aryan😳 bt may i knw y its so!!?? Is it 4 d huge aryan fan followng?? 😉
bt on serious note he is truly too much innocent nd datsy he belevd a dangerous entity lyk mohini!!
bt wat abt peehu nw? Will mohini truly b able to kil peehu as per her plans?? Is there no1 who cn save peehu? 😕
and who was mohini talkng to? It seems there's sum1 else too who wants revenge 4m abhay is thus helping her!!
Omg!! Mohini is soo disgusting!! 😡 She left abhay in a cmplet mess!! Poor abhay! Nw wnt b able to remain hmslf anymre!!
and she evn shatterd poor aryan's world nd made hm a traitor towards abhay,pia...hs whole family!! 😭
Oh..i am feeling bad 4 both aryan n abhay nw!! 😭 mohini hs ruind both their lives!! 😡

hm..bt i cnt deny dat dis whole twist made my fav8 ff ❤️ evn mre interestng nw!! 😛 😳
nw it will b a treat to watch abhay's change of behaviour towards evry1 n specialy Pia!! 😉
on a serious note it wil b anther test of pia's love..both of their love! 😳
the road scene already gave a hint of dat i guess,as abhay's face changd a bit hearing hr name nd her tears wrenchd hs hurt unknwngly nd made hm feel 4 her... !! 😳
bt again 1mre questn..mohini said she knew abt peehu's cnditn evn b4 cuming! Does dat mean she had evrythng plannd frm d beginning?? And does d blood she tuk 4m abhay is really gonna bring bck ragini?? Ok.ok..nw i wil stop! If u dnt wanna answr dez qustns nw its alryt!! 😆 In dat case i wil wait 4 d updats to get my answers..😛 😊
once again..it was a terrific updat truly..⭐️
nw m waitng to see abhay's actns n hw pia handle hm..plus wats aryan gonna do nw..nd wil amby b able to knw d actual truth...😊 nd am waitng to get all dis answrs!! 😳
cntinue soon..thanx fr pm..take care..🤗
p.s. I said i wud unres n glad i was able to mak it.!! 😊

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Rumki

@rumki34

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I had gussed it before that may be peehu is pregnant and Mohini is using this as weak point of Aryan but never thought that Peehu will be in a serious state.why she took such a big risk?plz don't kill Peehu. Peehu is mohini's cousin but still mohini want to kill Peehu🤢

Mohini has become so evil.she wiped off abhay's memory but what will happen to him now😕?hope pia will be able to help Abhay.feeling bad 4 pia😭.she was so heart broken

Mohini is trying to wake Ragini😲 but is it possible?hope Mohini wont hurt Pia.

one question how to kill mohini?

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#863

wow! Wat an update, tanzie !

OMG! Mohini is one wicked witch .. (sanjeeda is a gud choice).. She wants to bring ragini back ! Will she succeed?.. (who do u hav in mind for ragini ) ?

My poor aryan... He is so helpless.. But now, i want him to fight back mohini & save abhay , peehu & his child... Dont kill peehu.. Plz !

Abhay lost his memory but i'm sure that even the darkest magic cannot erase piya from abhay's heart !

Eagerly waiting for the next chap..& to see the different colours of abhay raichand..

Continue soon
but, u didnt pm me this time ! :(
tc

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#864

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Tanzie, why are u doing this? WHY? This was supposed to a pleasant love story with hurdles.. Hurdles could be someone else and not Abhay himself..

Please make him better in next update itself! PLEASE!

Aryan.. Did he really trust Mohini? I know his kid is important but the fact of last one purity wasn't stricken in his mind before? Only after Abhay was thrown as trash? Oh my Aryan, I'm really upset on u!

Now, who will turn Abhay back to normal? Peehu?

Peehu.. Is she in death bed? Really? No chances of survival?

Mohini-- She is set in motion to revive her sister back.. How many twists Tanzie..?

Could you possibly think of an FF that doesn't have an twist at all? If that was an exam then you would sure sure get poor/no marks!

The Twists queen!

Thanks for the PM dear!

Edited by --Siva-- - 13 years ago

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#865

tanzie with each update u take my breadth away!!awesum!!omg!peehu is pregnant??and she really will die??oh dear..what must aryan be going through..and that mohini..arghh..how evil..i literally have no words..she plans to bring ragini bck?????omg.,and what has she done to abhay ..how dare she???u said abhay vl b like this until...until whatt???dying to read nxt part!!!

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#866

omg!!so much turns nd twists!!!!😲abhay ko jo hua so hua since he is the hero to wo to thik ho hi jayega...bt m realy feeling bad for aryan peehu nd pia...mohini is so evil how cn she???to matlab agar ragini wapas aa rai hai there must b some dark magic...meaning she cn also b evil...nd y do i feel that that caller whom mohini was talking was jeh????dying to read nxt chappy thank u for pm.

Edited by -juhi-lily- - 13 years ago

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#867

Awesome tanzie!

I knew it...Aryan isn't bad..I knew it!!!

God I seriously hate Mohini...and terrified for the next updates! God Tanzie why do you like giving me heart attack... Update quickkkllyyy😆😆

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Prima :D

@Trouble.

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#868

Poor aryan..

it was amazing...loved d last part😍abhay was cute😍

waiting 4 d colours of abhay raichand😍

Edited by abhiya_pkyek - 13 years ago

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squirrel

@urmita

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#869

tanzie, u just keep dropping bombs with every update..😲😃..awsome work...bt u didn't even pm abt this update...nt fair..i was so impatient already...

nd reading this update...i was like---whoa! wait, what???😲

peehu is pregnant,nd dieing?..that stupid girl,phirse ek buddhu wali harkat karke aryan ko phasa dia...poor soul.😕..i hope she lives, or what will happen to aryan?...i fill so sorry for him...i just new it was something to do with his peehu...poor aryan.😭..bt he really shudn't hv trusted mohini with abhay or even baby&peehu...

that chudail mohini.😡😡..how dare she do this to abhay.😡...i m feeling like strangling her...pls give her a painful death at the end of this ff.😡..nd she is gonna wake ragini?...not cool...nd does she really think making abhay clueless is gonna make pia hate him...not gonna happen...right?..nd there is sumone with her...dont tell me that ragini is gonna be back claiming my abhay..😡dont kill peehu, dont wake ragini pls...

this is the trouble starting...bt dont do nything unbearably bad like that pls..

so now abhay raichand is gonna hang btwn being sadu, lovely nd baby! huh! ...m already excited..😆..pia will win him back with love m sure...love is most powerful..par vo pia ki life ko khatre me to nehi dalega na.😕...m afraid abt that...pls dont make him go to dark side or anything...i dont want that in this ff...nd he is gonna be like that untill what..that baby wont be the one to break this spell right?..coz thats gonna be a longgg time...😲

update again soon...cant wait to see our 'No-clue Raichand'😆...and dont forget to inform after dropping bombshells like this...😆

OMG look at this i just wrote an essay...😲over-reaction i s'pose..😆😆

Edited by urmita - 13 years ago

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sonali

@--sonali--

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#870

🤗Tanzie-awesome update..👏..!thank u...like it very much..⭐️.!

so pia found abhay..❤️..bt what tht mohini hv done to our abhay😔 yar...!bt kuch bhi ho...u say na...to...,😃

m jst egrly waiting for this :

😍

Next Chapter: Colors of Abhay Raichand

Note: So all the Abhay fans, hold your breathe to see extremely rude Abhay being Sadu again with Pia, seducing her being extremely sexy, behaving like a child and innocent and happy when Pia takes care of him... all in one update. He has no idea who he is anymore so he will simply keep changing now... until... wait 😉

so update soon...!thanx!take care!love u!

Edited by --sonali-- - 13 years ago