Book 2 FF:Till the End of Time(updt*June8*pg140)

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Monkey

@TISA0711

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Posted: 13 years ago

#331

lovelyyy update.i hate that gaurav.who is the other person there with jeh nd gaurav?WOW 240 kisses. . . ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️.bt why 242 in precap?whatever eagerly waiting for the next update.

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#332

awsome superb update yar...the way u explains piya abhay emotions thts r too great...loved abhiya part when piya says to abhay 240 kisses wow...so happy piyas memory vame back and now abhay do whatever piya said to him...so arman is vampire hunter and he saved amby thts gud...hope so aryan also try to make it to alina yar poor alian...waiting 4 next update eagerly but its time to update now but very excited 4 it...lovely update

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#333

hey tanzie that was an amazing update
i loved it to the core
aryan's point of view was very well written he is such a darling i m glad he has decided to give alina a chance i will be looking forward to this pair
i guessed that armaan would save amber but him being a vampire slayer was a shock
so now he know about amber being a vampire wonder what will he going to do
i m soo happy finally Mr i m a beast has got some senses
pia's punishment was shocking but its giving me goosebumps right now
240 kisses😲 seriously how will they be able to control
lloved the title of next chapter can't wait to read it
thanks for pm

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flora212

@flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#334

Great update dear.👏240 kisses😆

Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#335

WHAT THE...???*Arnav style*😲.😡.🤔 *Neetz spends her entire pocket money on eggs and tomatoes and throws them all on Tanzie!*😡.😡

HOW COULD YOU TANZIE? HOW?😡 WHY? Why do you hate your readers so much? Firstly, you left it at this point and now you say that we won't get another update for a while and then you expect us NOT to throw ande-tamatar on you?😳 AND btw, this is not called a 'long update'😛

Anyway, coming to the update, AbhIya😍 I love them soo much, man!! Lol! This Pia is the best, I tell you. Bechare Abhay ki baja di, ABHAY ki!😛 Haha! Loved the punishment. Serves him right. We got kiss therapy after so lonnnggg😍 Yeh banda kabhi nahi sudhrega! He will see how Pia walked into danger because she was with him but he will conveniently forget that he is the reason she is even alive in the first place otherwise her swine of an uncle had made sure she'd die before her wedding. Stupid tyaagi baba🤔 Chalo chhaddo, all's well that ends well😳 Hayyee, Abhay blushing, aww!!❤️

OMG, Arman is a vampire hunter? This wasn't expected😲 But good, he saved Amby😳 This means he knows about Amby and Abhay being vampires for sure and maybe about Aryan being a wizard as well. I wish he'd killed that🤬 Gaurav as well. Just wounded, Arghh!

Aryan's so damn cute, man! And adorable!! Aww! You see why I love him so much?😳 Aww!! Rofl, he will be under Pia's control as well. Good, two powerful supernatural brothers dancing around her little finger, lucky chic🤣.🤣 I think Aryan has played a big role in bringing AP together as well. He puts some sense into Abhay's head. I just love their bond. Remind me of the depth, intensity and unconditional love which Stefan and Damon have. Intriguing and heartwarming. BTW, I read someone say they want Aryan with Peehu, not Alina. Count me in on that one as well. I, too, prefer him with Peehu specially since we know Peehu does love him❤️

The name of your next chapter is enough to make me☺️

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#336

superb update tanz

i loved it

all character is pov written very well specially aryan . i m glad aryan know about alina feeling and try to gave her chance .

omg this is shocking armaan 's vampire slayer . but he save amber . gurave such a jerk. finally our hot ty come to some sense and now he stop his stay away mission .i like pia here . waiting for next part eagerly .continue soon .

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Anukrati

@anukrati19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#337

WOW
SUPERB UPDATE TANZIE REALLY LOVELY
REALLY SORRY FOR LATE REPLYING
abhay save pia, and pia question bombarding too cute.love it
love the idea of pia memory back,2nd life and vampire spell broke.genious thats why u are amazing writter.
OMG 240 KISSES, what a punish ment. now let see who will save mr. abhay raichand.
love aryan saying ab aaya oot pahar ke niche it is ab aaya vampire pia ke pahar ke niche.
what about ambi?
really excited
UPDATE SOON
TAKE CARE and thanks 4 pm.

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sudeshna banerjee

@sweet_sudeshna

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#338

amazing update dear

nw waiting 4 da 242 kisses eagerly😳

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Ayesha khan

@abhiya4evr

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#339

AWWWSOME update!!!!! 😃
arman is a vampire slayer 😲 😲 zor ka jhatka bht zor se laga !!!!! 🤣 so does he always knows that amby is a vampire??? 🤔
what to say about abhiya!!! 😍 😍 😍
they were super duper adorable!!! 😍 n 240 kisses in punishment 😲 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
egerly waiting for next update ☺️
see i m already blush hard ,pta nh next update ke baad kya hoga 😆 kahi me tamatar me transfer na hojayo 😆 🤣 🤣
thanks for a totally awsome update!!!
thanks for pm n sorry for late cmnt...

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#340

Originally posted by: heena_mehta
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nw i m serious , u should gift me a dictionary first, only then i would b able to comment properly coz my english, hindi n german , all three r nt enough to put my thoughts into comments, atleast i m badly in need to learn some new adjectives

abhay's pov was simply oustanding ... this kissing therapy always work😳😳😳..., finally abhay broke his own made walls n i reli don't want this sentence in ur reply "dt who knws may bhis this side wl come back" enough of torture for us n pia😆😉..

vampire's compulsion part , u made it look so perfect n completely acceptable... awww thankuu huny...thanks a lot i miss healing kisses a lot more coming up 😉 thanks... i worked on that compulsion part for a while to make it logical 😆

pia's pov was , awww i totally loved it...finally she took d charge😆😆😆/...i m dying to read how wl she get abhay his punishment fulfilled😉. i mean 240 kissess ke baad to khuch bhi hona possible hai😆😆 best she is gonna control aryan also...😆 who says dt if u av powers u r truly powerfull😆

cmng to aryan's pov- write watever u want frm his pov, d heart of this guy is so beautiful, dt watever he thinks , it touches ur heart directly😳😳😳 maybe that 242 kisses r never gona happen 😛 now dont kill me after reading it 😛 😆 yea.. yea... Aryan 😆

armaan as vampire slayer😲😲...d point is how came he become d part of this whole supernatural business??

n like i always say d best thing abt ur writing, ur way giving equal importance to all characters😊 correction Arman is a vampire HUNTER not SLAYER.. he is not gifted. he is like Alaric. I have learnt that from TVD as i say

super like👏👏

luv u🤗 luv u tooo 🤗