Book 2 FF:Till the End of Time(updt*June8*pg140) - Page 33

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Posted: 13 years ago
how cud u end it here without giving us those 242 abhiya kisses 😉

neway, nice update. armaan a vampire slayer. so does that mean he knew all along about Amby 😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
Tanzie dear!! Hope u r well now!!

First I never complain on you for giving short updates cos I know you wont give one..! Problem is the story is so tempting that the end makes more impatient!!😃

Nice logic about vampire compulsion. Aww.. Piya's punishment - No wonder Abhay is all ready to go home now😳

Wait what - Arman is a Vampire hunter?? That was shocking dear!! Thought he was an innocent chap !!

As usual, I loved Aryan most - The way he feel for Alina and Peehu!! My poor hero 😭
Thanks for the PM dear!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Reserved 😳

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Hey tanzie 🤗
Here I am :D ;)
Firstly I feel like hitting your head when you end the updates when it is going to be the most exciting one!
Aur 1 paragraph type karne ko keyboard mana karta hai kya ? :-/
😡

As you might be knowing,.i had to read 7-8 pending chapters, so I will look like a crazy if I give my comments on all of them in detail 😆 and I assure you that I will make you crazy too along with me after you read a comment longer than the update 😆 🤣 But I will touch those points which I loved the most 😳

But but but ! Before that.. Tanzie Can you just give me Aryan ?? I am so in love with him.. what a character you have developed yaar ! 👏 meri setting kara do na us se 😛 seriously man..you dont know how much I love him !
I so envy allina 💔

That part was heart breaking when abhay took away piya's memory 😭
But poor piya ! She could still dream of him..sacha pyar ise hi toh kehte hain lawyer saheba 😉
I felt like jumping around to know that abhay killed deepu aunty ! 🥳 but that gaurav ! Ewww..jaisi ma waisa hi beta . Yukk 🤢 I am waiting when amby will rip off that wolf.. you know I had a doubt on amby when you first introduced her character.. after all piya cant befriend a mere human being ! He/she has to be a supernatural element 😆
And I was sure that she is a vampire when she told arman about drinking blood in the canteen 😆 and when aryan was talking over the phone and they finalised to move to dehradun..i knew yes ! It has to Amby Raichand. Though I was curious to know her real name 😆 But arman being a slayer ? That was a shock man ! 😲 now the question being does he knew about amby before ? 😕

Oh yeah..how can I forget how abhiya met again in that party ! That was beautifully written tanzie. Loved it.. POV of all the characters present were put just perfectly.. then piya working in his office and he being jealous on seeing jeh with her..that was so cute ! And when abhay dropped her home, misha's teasings cracked me up 🤣 no idea how she is going to react after knowing who is piya actually ! Love the bond piya-arman-misha share 😃

Lastly our lovely couple. Gosh how hot and passionate were their scenes ! Absolutely hawwwtt 😈
Piya seducing abhay was totally unexpected but totally approved by me 😎 🤪 my tigress is back ! Not going to let abhay go.. Now looking forward to the 242 kisses.. 2 extra kisses khushi mein yaar ? 😛

I will take your leave before you go insane..😆
Par yaar mere aur aryan ke bare mein kuch socho na 🤣 🤣
Update soon..
The best compliment in the dictionary is for you. Go and search. Mil jaye toh bata dena. I will use it for you. So addicted to your ff ! Love it beyond words.. You are a star tanzie ⭐️ 🤗
Edited by Chinky_RPattz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow.superb.fantastic.awesome.great.marvellous...so on... Terrific update...dont have words in my vocab to describe it... Loved it thoroughly
Huh 242 kisses huh?? Waiting for it...
Plz plz plz update sooonnn
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for pm
superb upadte
good to see everything sorted out b/w abhay and pia
waitin for ur next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Tanz awesome update!!!
Finally pia got her memory back!!!
Loved abhay - pia convo... Finally abhay gave up n nw he had to follow wt pia says 😛 it's gona be super cool 😎
Armaan too knws amber's identity n saved her frm dat gaurav 😡
Loved da last part.. Aryan-abhay convo 😆 thnks for no warning 😆
Loved pia's 1st punishment for abhay!!! 😳
bt hw did 240 kisses become 242??? 😕 😉 😆
Il surely throw ande tamatar for stopping here!!! 😉 🤣
continue soon dr... Waiting for da nxt chap 😍
Edited by priya.1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic now abhay was in pia's hand continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Tanzieee 😡 what is that ❓how could u end there ❓😡 specially when next update will b late 😭 😆 but loved it dear awesome update so Armaan saved Amby hmmm n he is a vampire hunter 😲 that was unexpected yaar n what about Gaurav uska khatma hua ki nahin or he is just hurt but I would like n I want Amby 2 kill him it's her right 2 kill him as i said before n Jeh also came to know that Amby is Gaurav's ex-wife but does he know d whole story or not n also I wanted 2 ask before does he know what her mother did 2 Pia I mean c tried 2 kill her n for what n all those things c did n what lead 2 her death n d whole story ❓ loved everyones POV's n Pia ne kya punishment di hai Abhay ko 😉 😆 but I dought is it really a punishment for him or a reward 😆 but in a way it will b an punishment if u know what i mean 😉 😆 chalo mera essay khatam hua😆 n thanx for pm😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!!!!! it was jus awesome!!!!!!!!👏
it was full of shock 😲n happy surprises!!!!!!!😊
first of all abhay treated pia wid his famous kiss therapy😳...which we were dieing to read😉... then her memory came back...thats all we wanted since so long.
you beautifully described pia's pov...her emotions, pain,helpnesness when abhay again tried to convince her to stay away frm him...her outburst...her reaction when he saw abhay entering the room...the way she touched his face n cried...all was fabulous!!!!!👏⭐️👏 a big hug to you for describing it so well.🤗
abhay's inner turmoil...his myriad emotions seeing pia like that...in pain, feeling guilty for leaving her...n accepting his defeat n finally promissing that he will not leave her n love her till the end of time❤️...all this was mind blowing...i had happy tears in my eyes reading this!!!😃
n pia's naughty punishment☺️...made me blush thinking about your next update😉...make it soon n give us long chapter full of abhiya romance.😉😳
aryan's pov was also nice ...so he knw that alina love him...poor guy..torn between his past n present...😕..well...whoes gonna get him in the end...peehu or alina???
n that 🤬gaurav...kill him asap...btw you have created a nice villain in the form of gaurav...but what about the real villain..mohini...where is she??? you havent told yet much about her n abhay n aryan's past...reveal it soon.
n lastly you gave a surprise by reaveling that armaan is vampire hunter!!!!😲 what turn will his n amby's story will take??? eagerly waiting for that.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update!!!!!! pia ko sab yaad ageya!!

cant wait 4 da next update!!! abhay ki punishment u noe

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Posted by: Susmitasumi96

3 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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