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Rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#611

WONDERFUL UPDATE:-) Finaly jey dead and ABHIYA ROCKSSS:-) Superb:-):-)

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@_Chits_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#612

awsome update...👏
at last jeh died...😃
update soon...😊

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#613

Awesome Ayesha. I loved your idea of liquid silver 👏 👏 so finally Jeh is deadand now time for Abhiya wedding... waiting for that 🥳

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#614

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu
Yipee jeh dead...lovely update...aww pia putting mehendi...ur ending this ss ...😭koi na happy ending hoga na...

Aur kitni likhu. I don't want to make this into a chiller party for baches. Its bad enough in the 5 FF's of mine i have added HYBRIDS be it werevampire or Humanvampires.

Yeah we will have a happy ending depending on what U call a happy ending. I might add a honeymoons section to this if U want.

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#615

Originally posted by: kuttu
This part was so action packed. Jai still had some goodness in him. But all the hatred over the years had created so much of negativity in him. So wil the next part be a big wedding update.

Just proves a point kill the misunderstandings and the hatred inside and keep the good alive. Actually Jeh had no good in him left in the show so i wanted to show villains can have some humanity even if its barely visible to the naked eye.. Abhay managed to show even when he had Jeh covered that Human or vampire he never wanted harm on Jeh despite how evil Jeh was.

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Rashmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#616

Yup i want honeymoon sec pls pls

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#617

Originally posted by: priya.1
wow nice update aysha!!!!
finally Jeh is dead... 😃
mobile tracking 😉 bt the way u made abhay kill Jeh ws a good idea...
continue soon buddy!!!

Thanks Priya. Farro ne idea di thi kal jab maine sab ki madad li thi on how to get Human Abhay to kill off Jeh. I didn't want to turn Jeh into a human or turn Abhay back to being a vampire because then all my FF's would turn into the same thing almost. Better to have a variation right?😉 Killing Jeh now this was my invention altogether albeit the inspiration came from UNDERWORLD.

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sandeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

#618

wonderful update

finally jey is dead .

waiting for abhiya wedding .

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#619

Originally posted by: anukrati
AWESOME AND SUPERB UPDATE. ayeshai really like jeh ending that part is really good and it is better than jeh end in show.u are awesome ur all ff are superb. join cvs pkyek next season they really need some one like u ayesha great update. update soon and thanks 4 pm.

I hated the way JEH died in the show it was so stupid. The hero didn't even have the last laugh. This SS i worked very hard on i even resorted to asking help on idea's for this FF from people on AT'S from Anjali, Shivani, Faroo, Peehu they all helped me.

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#620

Originally posted by: harinisriram39
Thats a nice one 👏. Are you going to end the SS with Abhiya's marriage 😭 . Please do continue as a sequel na. Would you show Arnab as vampire? And thanks for considering my request of shy Piya. Yes. I want to see a shy but willing Piya with Abhay taking the lead. If you could add more fun by Misha calling up Piya asking her suggestions and Abhay teasing Piya to tell Misha about them. I know I am being dramatic, but I would want to see a worried and hopeless Piya that she will never have the moments of happiness because something would go wrong at the last minute like Jeh kidnapped her on the day of her marriage. Some kind of uncertainity disturbing her that Abhay might leave her one day considering her safety. However Abhay senses her discomfort and tries his best to assure her that he is fully convinced that she can be safe and complete only with him. So would like to see more of a possessive and demanding Abhay (opp of Piya in your FF Eternally waiting for you). Just like what we got in April in the show where Abhay feels jealous about Kabir and the scene in the locker room when Sid watches them. Now am I being naughty 😳

Harini This SS was only meant to be about ABHIYA as humans. I hated ARNAB as a vampire so he's dead in this SS.

I can make Pia shy. In fact im my SOULMATES FF Pia was very shy, blood ties,i have Pia in every avatar but its only later on i placed Pia as a VIXEN because we weren't getting Abhay making any moves then there was the possibility of him hurting her with him being a vampire but now we can take this element out in this SS. For me Pia was always so eager to kiss ABHAY in the show so i made her completely crazy for him in my FF's while Abhay remains the same. I didn't like the way he sofened up in the show.

Abhay will be a lot more pro active in catering to Pia now because he knows Pia inside out. Living in has its advantages.

PS my sequel on Eternally Yours will have ABHAY do a role reversal with Pia.😆