::ONE SHOT::ABHIYA::BEING HUMAN::: 8 Dec pg 15

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Super cute 😃, super romanctic 😳😍 A stumbling, fumbling Abhay was even cuter 😊 Its nice to see Abhay fuss over normal human routine.

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@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

i think i like your version of human abhay better...this os is very cute...will you be continuing till their marriage?
please do..!

thanks for the pm

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

that was really beautiful and romantic ayesha.

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

superb os dr!!!!

abhiya were so cute !!! human abhay more sweet and naughty !!!. i love abhiya romance .it was adorable. u make my day yr . i loved ur writing . u express abhay facing difficulties without his power was amazing . i imagine all story . well done job .thnx 4 pm.!!!!

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malika

@_symphony

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

hey lovely OS dear👍🏼👏...srslyyy enjoyed it to the core. 😊 And the best of it acc to me was pia enjoying her evry moment with a new transformed abhay. Well i think she has always seen abhay as mch ahead of her in terms of strength development and experience.But again its a simple girl emotion that sometimes she loves to pamper her man like her kid in his moments of vulnerablity...specially if he's inherently strong. Those lil moments which tend to make her man a bit vulnerable like him being sick or missing his family etc are the moments she loves to take care of him which she rarely gets to do coz normally its him who plays the part of the care taker.That's what is happening with pia ovr here...till now Abhay took care of her and the role reversal is wha she is relishing.This whole concept is the best part of the OS that made it sooo beautiful to read. Awesomeee job yr srslyyy 👏