abhiya SS 'broken mirror' UD-pg-116,, last UD

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anjali

@adnilover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#551

lovely update Heena!😊

Abhay and Piya are getting closer and the last part was really hot😳. I loved piya's shyness and abhay's naughty comments. They are so cute. And abhay had mushroom soup for piya, awww😳

Finally, all barriers between them have fallen.

Update soon!

Edited by piyabhay4ever - 13 years ago

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#552

awww heena that was limit of brilliance
the update was...i m sorry i don't have words to describe how much i loved it
the blossoming of their love was described vividly
u have no idea how much i love ur writing style
u actually made me shiver more than even pia was shivering during the last part
it was so hot yet so divine
only u can create such a magic now i want u to continue from where u have left don't leave that to our imagination 😉😳
please update soon i m dying to read the next part
btwn how many parts r left of this ss

Edited by shivanirajput - 13 years ago

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#553

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Instant reaction has been given earlier to comes to original comment 😛 I wake up and read your update was the first thing I did and u make me 😡 😆

you are such a tease.. 😛

It was very sweet all the way 😳 the caring, just love symptoms are always very magical and sweet. so i enjoyed reading it.

Abhay is so sweet taking care of her so much. I hope Piya tells him soon how much she loves him. i forgot the 1st half anyways after reading the last portion 😛 😆

*whistle* *whistle* last part was hawttt ☺️ me loves it ☺️ cant blame Abhay for getting out of control...😉 i wish the piya and the entire situation will get out of control soon then we readers will have so much fun 😃 😛

now UPDATE SOON... i mean it.. next update is my christmas gift wanted so u have to 😃 😃

Edited by princess_xeelan - 13 years ago

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peeehu

@MRS.SSO

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Posted: 13 years ago

#554

wowowoowowwoowwo

hawwwttt

lovelyyy

shoo sweet tt of abhay!

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#555

I will kill u for ending it here 😡 😡 😡

OK... just wait for the update of till the end...I promise i will take full revenge for this 😡 😛

back to my KATself 😈

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ramita94

@ramita94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#556

oh my gosh this update makes me wanna sing " mar daala allah mar dallah allah' 😛

Edited by ramita94 - 13 years ago

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan
I will kill u for ending it here 😡 😡 😡 hahahahaha, is this a way to comment on my hard work???😆😆😆
OK... just wait for the update of till the end...I promise i will take full revenge for this 😡 😛 nooo u won't b doing something like this, look i tried my best to make it hawt, av some mercy on me, my mind literally gt blanked after putting so much burden on it😉😉
back to my KATself 😈 try it, i m xactly behind u, u r my teacher😉