os THE BEGINNING OF A FAIRYTALE lastpart pg 28

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: hemarawat
baautiful os shivani ...

thanks for reading and appreciating🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni
amazing update shivani !!!
i loved it!!!!! abhay pia are fully carried away in love!!!!
i loved dere passion 4 each other!!!finally babby .wow
its wonderful!!!
n thanks 4 d pm!!!

thanks for reading
the baby part is the symbol of their happily ever after

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: sunflower52
Loved your OS and ending and the description of Italian cities were really good.

thanks well for description of italian cities all thanks to google

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: ilove99
brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!this new abhay's just the man every girl wants ...and pia is too lovely tht i can't describe!!!!!!!!!

so true in fact abhay in any form whether vampire or human is the dream of a girl but its just pia who got lucky with him always

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: kuttu
A month long honeymoon. Pia sure had the raichand for herself. But still jealous . Come on give the guy a break. But it was a beautiful ending to a fairy tale.

abhiya deserves a good break after everything they went through
well what can i say about jealousy it is a symbol of love

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta
awesome update
loved it
it was the most romantic part
only Abhiya filled update

thanks
this os is dedicated to only abhiya and their happy life now on

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: pkyekfanclub
aww shivani what an update yaar really awesome wonderfully described n pia is pregnent yayyy u ended it on such a beautiful note really amazing

thanks for reading i have promised to show pia pregnant and i did that symbolises a new and glorifying beginning of their life

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: princess_xeelan
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It was such an wonderful OS Shivani... 👏 👏
Pura romantic to the core... loved it 😳 abhiya romance was so beautiful through out the OS...their longing ot be each other and finally becoming one.. happy moments...passionate honeymoon and OMG your description of Italy... marvelous... it was perfect till the end and I loved reading it... i started reading it when u posted chpt 1 but sorry cudn't comment... 😳

thanks tanzie i was in a way waiting for ur comment only. they always mean a lot to me. this os was dedicated to only abhiya and their little world. i was really desperate to write a wedding scene and then a honeymoon scene but my other stories r no where near it so i made this os to quench my craving for a beautiful end to abhiya .i m glad u find it worth reading