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Posted: 13 years ago

part 6..
Prev- One year later-

pia is still not found..abhay has stopped talking to anyone .Panchi is married ...nani was kicked out that hazardous night!alina has understood the matter and is a good supporter of abhay. But still misha is guilty to keep a secret in her heart...

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Its another gloomy day..raichands r out of town for sum meeting. The Dobrial house is full of emptiness no one is talking ,gigling ,laughing like it was one year before.Panchi is now no more welcomed in Dobrial house.Here comes mish...she is back to India after a month and was out of country for some work.It was normal now she has opened a new business on her own and she spends more of her time in business tours nowadays...its her last year but still she isn't interested in pranks and fun anymore.(bacchi badi ho gayi😉)

madhu-misha...mish!!(hugs her and cries on her shoulder😭)mish beta tum apna phone kyun nahi utha ahi thi!!!u r alright na!

mish-ya mum!!y r u crying?

madhu-mish...tumhare papa!!!...😭

mish-papa!!!!!!!!!kya hua papa ko!!!(preggy hai!!!dumbo marne wala hai tabhi to ganga jamuna baha rahi hai 😆)

madhu-beta...he's in hospital unka accident ho gaya hai!!!he is breating his last mish!!!he is just waiting for his lovely daughters to free his soul!!!!

mish-no mumma plz...plz say ki aap mazak kar rahi ho!!!

madhu-chalo tum khud hi dekh lo!!!


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hospital-


arnab-mish(holding her hands)plz plz beta meri pia ko...pia ko dhoond do😭plz meri akhari wish puri kar do plz mish...

mish-papa plz aisa mat kaho plz...

arnab-mish(taking deep breaths)mai apni bacchi ko akhri baar dekh na chahta hun!(faints)

mish-papa papa!!!!

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After an hr arnab wakes up ... up-till now misha has decided to open her mouth...the secret is not more imp than her fathe.Nothing is important than her family be it her father or sis.

mish- papa!mujhe pata hai pia kahan hai...mai laungi usse

arnab-tum...how?

mish-pia humare paas nahi aana chahti!she has changed dad!!mere woh tours and trips ...i...i went to meet her ...she..she is in america

madhu what???????😲😡aur tum abhi tak chup thi!!!!(de thapak thappad)

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mish , madhu ...fly to america.

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America

(St.marks college)

girl-go...talk to her bro!!

boy-but...

girl -what but!?!u r trying to say this from so long go...(she pushes him towards 'her')

boy-(to 'her') hey...i ...i want to say smthng

'yes'said a stern voice

boy-i ...i love u pia!!!!(with this he gets a tight slap😆girl hides behind pillar)

pia-how dare u!!!!

boy-i...i...

pia-how long it has been since u kno me hun1!..what u know about me..

boy-that..that i luv u and u r most beautiful girl in the worls!(thaapak another slap)

pia-no...u left the most imp thing i.e. pia dobrial doesn't luv!(with this she leaves)


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Pia's home (@America)

A pale Pia was sitting in a dark room ...alone!!in the big royal house...which she bought on misha's insisting.but it feels like it is going to eat her when she hears a cry in pin drop silence.

'pia...my baby!'(and hugs her)

she turns to see a crying madhu with mish leaving her dumbfounded.

'pia...beta save ur father pia save him!!!!'

pia-'papa!!!!!'

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mish explains everything to her and she flies back with them to India.Where a miracle takes place arnab heals up fast after being with pia for a few days...when abhay meets pia-

abhay-pia(hugs her crying)kahan chali gayi thi tum hamari PYAAR KI KAHANI ko adhura chod kar!!!!!!!

but pia backs off-abhay!!!!!i no more luv u!!!!!!i don't luv any1 so better stay away!

abhay-piaaa...(tries to hold her but she runs away)

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Hospital

15 days has passed and pia has decided to leave silently...

mish-pia!!!

pia-mish plz don't stop me i don't have more time u know i have 2...(but before she can complete she faints)

mish-pia!!!!(patting her cheeks)pia!!!!!

madhu ,abhay, alina and everyone cums there...and pia is immediately admitted.

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doc-(cuming out)looks like ki inhe bahut stress hai...aap log aisi halat mein inhe itna stress kaise de sakte hai she is more weak than ppl of thse stage r!

abhay-aisi halat ...what do mean by that?

mish-doc woh theek to hai?

madhu-mish tum janti ho?????

mish-mum woh...woh...(but doc cuts her)

doc-what aap logon ko nahi pata!!!!!PIA KO HEREDITARY CANCER HAI!!!pia 1 saal pehle mere paas ayi thi when she found out...it is from her maternal genes.now she is in LAST STAGE!!!and breathing her last.

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pia's room


abhay goes and hugs pia-pia!!!!!kyun...kyun tumne mujhe nahi bataya!!!!!sab akele sehti rahi!!kya mai iss kabil bhi nahi!?!

pia- nahi abhay uss raat jab tumne mujhe bataya ki tum mujhse kitna pyaar karte ho i was over the moon abhay but when i found out ...(sobbing)i ...i thought ki mere liya tadapne se behtar hai tum sab mujhse nafrat karo!!!!!

mish-aur pia ne hi mujhe ishara kiya tha to be against her with birdie!(meanwhile birdie arrives crying)

abhay-nahi pia!!meri powers superiors na kuch samay ke liye le li hai...but..but don't worry i'll save u...mai tumhare bina kuch nahi hun!!...(pia keeps a hand on his dry lips)

pia-no!!abhay maine tumhe maithili ke intzaar ki aag mein jalte hue dkha hai !ab mai phir se woh sab nahi chahti!wada karo!!promise me ki tum mere liye intzaar nahi karoge promise me!!

abhay-nahhi pia tumhe kuch nahi hoga!!mai tumhe har musibat se chura launga!

pia-abhay...i...i...luv...iluv...u!!!!!!!

with this she went numb no expression her face ... machines shows her heart beat has stopped , her pulse went at bottom.

doc-i am sorry she is no more!

abhay , mish,jeh-no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

abhay hugs her tightly -nahi pia!!mai sadiyon se tumhare liye iss dharti par bhatak raha tha...only to meet u...pia tum...tum mujhe aise nahi chod sakti!!!!!

docs starts to separate abhay from pia everyone is crying panchi too!!she has reailzed her mistake long back that it was all misunderstanding...nani in hell also would be sorry!!yes in hell bhagwan ne usse utha hi liya...pia ke jaane ke 2 months baad hi**phew**


arnab-PIA!!!!!!!!!!(SHAKING HER NUMB BODY)

abhay-pia ...plz plz wake up (snatches his hand from doc who was pulling him apart from his love and agn goes toward her )pia ...wake up!!wake up my love!!(and kisses her numb body passionately )


as abhay kissed her doc's eyes came out of sockets pia's heart started to beat again ...her pulse started rising.

pia-a-b-h-a-y-!!!!!

abhay-pia!!!pia!!!

mish-mama birdie papa ...see our pia is back pia our pia is back!!!!!

madhu-haan mish abhay ka pyaar humari piya ko le aya!!!!😳

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guys only one part left ...YES it is the most awaited one!!!the besharmi part!srry if isn't what u expected...i wanted to make it short!


Edited by ilove99 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

gr8 dr!! loved it!!!!

so pia america chale gaye the!!!! n usse cancer hai!!!! she wants every1 2 hate her!!!! but i think she should atleast tell abhay!!!!
i hope she gell well soon!!!!
n d movement she dies i felt really bad yr!! n den abhays love brought her back 2 her life!!!! dats cool!!!
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm!!!!
i loved it!!!
Edited by Akshi0019 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey.didnt expect dis.piya ko cancer.loved da update.
Edited by TISA07 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update meera!!!!!!

truly brilliant. yeha b arnab going to die .!!!!😉 woh boy kon tha yr jo pia ko lvu kah raha tha!!!😉 . pia gave him slap !!!😊. omg wat a twist yr pia ko cancer woh b last stage !!!😭. aww one kiss pia ki saas chalne lagi !!!😉. panchi ko akhal a hi gayi !!!😆 . nani died sabse amazing news thi 😛 mein to specialy is update ka wait karogi kyu kuch ahem ahem scence malenge!!!😉 . update soon ha jada late mat karna .😃
Edited by abhiyan_soni - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
haha..meera di u made it so filmy😆.😆...i luvd d part..awesome update.⭐️..
thapad n thapad...aaj tho thapad ki yeh ek kahani bangai😆😆...
all d mysteries r revealed...so piya had cancer.!!!.
.par no probs..since abhay's kiss is always there 2 bring her.😳😆...
finally bhagwan ney meri sunli.🥳...nani in hell🤣..
waiting 4 d romantic part☺️.
..continue soon n thnx 4 d pm..😊.
Edited by madhuri16 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey awesome update agent 1🤗, lekin bat to sahi hai boss sahi bat hai teri, bap prggy thodi na hoga marne ke stage par hai aur ye misha fir bhi puch rahi hai apni mom ko ki sach batao😉,apni mom pai bharosa nahi ahi😆, haila ab kya marne ke bad jayegi🤣, haila jor ka tappad aur jor se laga misha ko, bahot filmy thappad tha, bilkul black and white jamane ka, kya din the wo, chalo back to dreamland, dekha mera dimag kitna sahi chala, maine pehle hi kaha tha misha ne jabujkar us birdy ka sath diya, lekin yaar maine is filmy cancer ke planning ke bare mai nahi socha tha🤣, but anyways mast hai boss, udta huva panchi rote huve jameent par kuda not bad🤣, haila kya abhay ne style se uthaya, muje pata tha ladki kiss ke liye natak kar rahi hai, aur kuch bhi nahi use pata hai abhay use apni powers se bacha lega😉. wow kya dasu update tha, tera update to pura filmy tha boss, hey ghost rider doctor ko daraya na dekha tera naam maine sahi rakha hai 🤣

Edited by pratiksha2009 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: madhuri16

i really want 2 take nani jaan's jaan....she so gets on my nerve.😡..haha!!!!!!

misha giving her socks ROFLED me up.🤣🤣...thanks
but di wat u mean by panchi dancing.😲😆😆...poor dobriyal mansion😆😆...phew
u know my luv 4 panchi..d phantom😡...n 2day that baby elephant...really was sick 2 d core.😡...
so ur turning dis into a ss.!!!...yup jaldi khatam hoga
is this a plan of piya n misha!!!...so that piya didn't want 2 give trouble 2 that phantom.😕...
u packed a lot of things in one go!!!...u r taking one year leap...wish abhiya meet soon!!!!!!
continue soon n thnx 4 d pm😊...n m really sorry 4 keeping res 4 a long time!!...

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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for res pm 🤗kya yaar kitni filmi lines use kiye 😆kya natak chal raha tha madhu aur arnab ka 🤣btw arnab ko kyu nahi mara 😉aww pia ko cancer 😭isliye sab ko chod ke chali gayi abhiya kitna touching tha 😭and wow pia ko hosh me kya style se laya abhay ne 😉chal waiting for the last part 😉
Edited by strawberryrashu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome update dr!!!!

I gt shocked whn da dctr said pia is no more...😲

Bt as always abhay saved hr 😊

Evn panchi hs admitted hr mistake...😊

waiting for the next part😳

plz continue soon...

Edited by priya.1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

My heart stopped when I read the part where piya died. That moment between abhay and piya was so beautifully written..kudos for that! poor piya, she was all alone for a whole year so that her condition does not cause hurt to her loved ones, especially abhay. I was so happy when abhay was able to bring her back

I am eagerly waiting for the besharmi part s update soon!
Edited by piyabhay4ever - 13 years ago

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