FF #Dont Separate us# Chapter 6. - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Awesome update! Alina is so evil 😔, she wants to break up Abhiya! I hope Abhiya's trust in one another never breaks and so Alina can't break their relationship up! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

Thank you! Lol I hope so too and will do soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
nice ff
loved it
continue soon and please PM me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta

nice ff
loved it
continue soon and please PM me

Thanks alot and will do!
Suree!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Fourth Chapter!
Jeh was recalling the whole scene. He was pushing his mind to remember each pole and person there. Suddenly his eyes opened in shock.
Jeh:OMG! Panchi? What will I do now? She is not going to forget it easily! I have to do something about it. Why did you I do this? i cant risk my identity for a silly girl. Damn! I have to kill her or else Im dead!
On the other Hand Alina was planning something evil.
She was thinking about how to make Pia jealous! She knew that until now that only thing that could break their relation was distrust!
The trust which Abhay did not have in Pia and what Pia did not have on Abhay and she was planning to play the same game again!
She decided that she would break Pia's trust over Abhay by proving that there is something between Abhay and Alina and she would break Abhay's trust over Pia by making him feel that she is trying to spill out his vampire secret. She laughed in a Kamolika way.
Abhay and Pia on the other hand decided to go on a long walk. They had promised eachother that they would not hide anything from eachother whatever may be the consequences.
There was a slight breeze and drizzle. Abhay wrapped his black coat around Pia.
Abhay:Pia, I sensed something evil in Alina today. Something was wrong. She is trying to bring problems between us.
Pia:But how are you so sure?
Abhay:I dont know how but there was something in her today. Something evil and weird!
Abhay's senses never went wrong. They were always right.
Abhay:We have to be careful Pia. Whatever may happen our trust over eachother should not go weak this time.
Pia:I promise Abhay. Whatever happens, we shall be together.
They both continue their walk.
At the Raichands mansion, Haseena and Chand were talking about their clan responsibilities.
Chand:Abhay has managed everything well Haseena. But his relation with a human being can cause major problems.
Haseena:I know Chand but Abhay and Pia are just too strong a relation to break. They are too true.
Chand:We dont have all these feeling in us Haseena. If it has to be broken it will.
Haseena:Haha! Thats impossible. We can never do that.
Chand:We shall see to it.
Abhay and Pia had reached the Dobriyal's house. It was time to say bye.
Pia:how many ever times we see, how many ever times we talk, each moment of farewell is so painful.
Abhay:i feel the same but we cant help it. When will it all get over? How I wish for a normal life where I could do everything possible for you.
Pia:You accepted me! What more could you do for me?
Misha who was standing in the balcony screamed out to them!
Misha:If you both are done then Pia can you please come up? I have fever and need somebody to do my assignments for me.
Pia:Aha! Dont lie! You are perfectly alright do it yourself!
Misha gives a sad expression.
Pia:Fine! Nautanki queen! I will do it for you!
Misha:Yaay! Im going to watch tv okay bye! And come up fast! Otherwise you both will become snowman! Bye kadoos!
Pia:Misha! Dont call Abhay kadoos!
Misha:He is my geegu! Dont interfere! Bye!
Abhay:Pia,I think you should go in now. I will pick you up tomorrow morning okay? Byeee!
Pia:Byee Abhay!
At the Khuranna's mansion, both the siblings were making their evil plans. Alina was thinking about breaking up Abhiya and Jeh was thinking about how to kill Panchi.
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Precap- Jeh is walking towards Panchi. Pacnhi could not see that somebody was coming to attack her as she was standing in the other direction.

What does fate hold for Abhiya and Panchi? Catch my next chapter to find out!

Please do Comment!
Thanks!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
awesome update..loved it..arre..yeh khuranas are so problematic...hell bent on doing anything...i hope panchi remains safe..and this alina..this time she wont be able to break abhiya..they will trust..misha scene was cute..update soon..thanks for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Sorry! I forgot about the pms!šŸ˜”
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: peehu24

awesome update..loved it..arre..yeh khuranas are so problematic...hell bent on doing anything...i hope panchi remains safe..and this alina..this time she wont be able to break abhiya..they will trust..misha scene was cute..update soon..thanks for pm...

Thanks alot Peehu! Lol Khuranna's! Thank you! =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
wow awesome part anchal abhiya trust for each other very poweful like fevicol . and alina dogi bad manners coming between too lovers and jey wants too kill panchi and misha and pia conversation was very good waiting for what happened next thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: abhiyan999

wow awesome part anchal abhiya trust for each other very poweful like fevicol . and alina dogi bad manners coming between too lovers and jey wants too kill panchi and misha and pia conversation was very good waiting for what happened next thnx 4 pm

Thanks you so much! LOL Alina! Thank you once again! Shall pm you once Im done!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
awesome update
I hope Abhiya's trust in each other is not shaken
continue soon
thanks for the PM

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