A MYSTERIOUS LOVE STORY an abhiya ff note on pg64 - Page 16

Originally posted by: abhiora

brilliant writing nce more shivani..beautiful style..so is piya maithili?

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow dear awesome update I so loved it yaar.Oh Ametz scene were so romantic.I really feel bad 4 her.Pia is quite cold here.Lets c how 2 cold ppl blend together.Plzz continue😳

Originally posted by: prerna26

Awsome Update!👏 thanks for the encouragement

You have expressed Abhayendra's and Maithali's precious moments beautifully. How they used to meet secretly and were happy to be in each other's arms...for them it was their heaven. Loved the whole description (Flashback scene).😃 i m glad you liked it here i will show their love story also along with abhiya love story Continue soon. Take care!😊 i will sure try to continue soon

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

Fantastic Shivani. thanks for the appreciation a compliment from a gr8 write like you means a lot to me

Ametz scenes were so beautiful & yet so heart breaking. i have some more ametz scenes to be shown i hope they will also be intersting

Pia is no lamb here. Loving itpia is more mysterious than abhay here

Waiting for Abhiya first meet.😊 they will meet soon

Originally posted by: HAFRA

continue

Originally posted by: piyali.1228

wow...

what a lovely update

superb

awesum

amazing

luved it

do continue soon

n thanx 4r d pm

tc😊

Originally posted by: piyabhay4ever

will be waiting for the rest of the update. The first part is great.

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Hi Shivani!! Finally updated the FF.. 😊 Ya sorry for getting late

So how was your exams?? I know you would have done it perfect like ur ff.. no they were not that good 😭 Now you are ok?? Feeling better?🤗 yup much better especially after reading your comment

Back to Update.. It was so nice and perfect.. thanks for the appreciation dear Especially Abhay and Metz scenes.. Perfectly displayed..!!👏 i m glad u liked them there are some more scenes of them coming your way

Pia is a brave gal here?? Good to see her like that.. What did Jonathan do to her??😊 you will know in the next update

Thanks for the PM dear...!!😎 my pleasure

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

congo shivani for becoming goldie👏 the update was fab 👍🏼 thanks those moments were hot but it was a flash back 😔i wanted it in real hey first let abhiya meet then we can think about the romance but no probs i enjoyed it and abahy misses metz so sad😭 yes she is still alive in his dead heart loved it thanks for the pm my pleasure

Originally posted by: pkyekfanclub

very nice update keep it up 😊 waiting for second part