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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
Abhay is so changed
I hope Abhiya meet soon
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear... i have finished reading ur OS just now... its totally amazing... is abhay and piya separated??? that's really sad... plx reunite them soon... i doubt that alina can make abhay fall in luv with her by all the means after all abhay luvs piya only and nobody else...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyan999

wow awesome update the way u describe abhay 's feeling it totally amazing looking forward next part



Thank you.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanipandit29

awesome you showed abhay's loniness, emptiness, pain really well. so piya left abhay. i hope abhiya meet soon. thanks for pm. and update soon.



Thanx Shivani Glad u liked it.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

beautiful update snigdha👏your depiction of abhay's anger,hatrd,pain ws so perfct tht i cud visualise the entire scene plus abhay's expressions. and its nt hard to guess tht loosing pia abhay has landed in dis terrible state of mind😭hope abhay will meet pia soon. and whts alina up to? will she turn evil to gain abhay's luv? update soon dear. tc😳



Thanx sweets. I am trying to give all the answers in the next update. may I know ur name?

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pratiksha2009

god abhay is changing so much yaar, i hope ki use pia miljaye tabhi wo normal ho sakta hai, aur alina ka to koi chance hi nahi, wo chahe kitni bhi koshish kar le abhay to pia ka hi rahega, but nice update, good one



Thanx Prati. Abhay is always Pia's

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi! Its very nice. Please continue soon. Can't wait to know the reason for Abhiya's separation. Your idea of Piya leaving everyone and staying far away is very good because her family/friends will only preach to be away from Abhay.
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Posted: 13 years ago

In the school park, London

School being over Ayush was sitting in a bench waiting to be picked up & enjoying all the attention, cheek pulling & kissing that he gets from the other parents who came to pick their children. Simply telling he is a star in his school.

His blue eyes lit up with excitement when he notices the black Mercedes coming. The door opened & a man of about thirty years with handsome features sandy blonde hair & hazel brown eyes came out of it. Before he could reach Ayush a woman walked upto him & started to get his attention but he politely dodged her to be surrounded by another couple or three women all vying for his attention.

"Same old, same old," muttered Ayush under his breath. Its routine now whenever Tristan comes to pick him up he gets surrounded by other ladies who seem to forget their children they are supposed to pick up. And Ayush knows that Tristan enjoys it as much as he does.

Finally breaking from his bevy of admirers Tristan nearly runs towards Ayush exclaiming in excitement,"Hey Champ I missed u so much."

He picked up Ayush in his arms & hugs him while kissing his cheeks.

Ayush- "Me too. I am ready defeat u in tonight's match."

Tristan- We will see about that.

Ayush smirking- Yup we will. At least one of us has been practicising & not wasting their times flashing smiles at random kids mother.

Tristan looked at him amused & asked- "When will you act your age? Just because you are more mature than your age mentally does not gives u permission to be sarcastic to your elders."

They were seated in the car. Ayush looked up to him in plain innocence & replied, "I was just saying the truth. Don't u always say we should be truthful?"

Tristan rolled his eyes, "Its really amazing how you forget this things while lying to your mom about little things like who stole the entire bar of chocolate from your refrigerator, about who put a dent in her car while trying Kung fu & not to mention who broke Stanley's nose last week, is in it?"

Ayush giggled hearing all this. Unique & unusual he might be but just like any other kid he is scared of his mom who severely punishes him for his misdeeds.

Last year the day before his 1st Birthday he insisted to have chilies to which he has never tasted before. After repeatedly saying no to him when he remained stubborn Pia handed him 1 big red chilli. Poor Ayush after the first bite his mouth on fire & he was dancing around the whole room howling for water his mother his refused him & in desperation he jumped in the swimming pool. On another occasion when he just for some fun smsed from Tristan's Blackberry inviting all his friends mom at his home for party she stopped talking to him for whole two days. Even his dimples had no effect on her. Finally he had to shed his tears which made her not only hug him tightly but also feed him an enormous bucket of his favorite ice cream.

Ayush- Where are we going? Movie? I wanna see the new transformers movie.

Triston- Nope that's not for kids. We are going to watch Toy Story 3.

Ayush- No I want to watch Transformers & that's it.

Triston- No.

Ayush- Yes.

Triston- No.

Ayush- Yes.

Triston- No & No.

Ayush mutinous – Fine be like that. I am gonna tell her you were whispering & winking to Tyler's mom. You know she hates her.

Triston- She won't believe you.

Though he is not sure as she knows how she hates her & her every move to get his attention.

Ayush- We shall see. Smirked Ayush as he already knows she will eat vegetables rather than not believe him.

They drove away to their destination looking forward for a great time & Ayush for some mischief.


India, Dehradoon, Raichand Office

Abhay Raichand is never in a good mood but today it seemed to be worse. He fired an employee without any prior notice because of his delay in completing his presentation, shouted at 10 different people for 10 silly mistakes then scared the living day lights out of an trainee for being clumsy & not being able to hold a file properly. Even Danish who is the only one who gets with Abhay without often tasting his moods whiplash didn't dared to say goodbye before leaving. All in all everyone had the heaved a sigh of relief when the office hours drew to a close.

Sitting in the big & comfortable black leathered executive chair, his black shirt unbuttoned in the top, hair tousled, cross legged and a permanent scowl on his brows he was looking at the file for the last half an hour without taking one word of it.

The dead silence of his surroundings does not bother him as inside him his self is always shouting at him hurling abuses & saying the words he does not want to hear.

Tonight the only things in his minds was the word spoken by his mother "Angel" A word which when uttered by those precious soft lips sounded true to him. He was her angel that's what she always believed. Believed in her love. Believed in him. Believed in the impossible that he has a pure soul.

Abhay moved his hands towards his drawers & withdrew a long colourful multi colored silky cloth which looks like a torn part of a beautiful dupatta. He touched that piece of clothes to his face tracing her smell which has long lost. He does not need that to remember her fragrance. He still remembers that honey & sunshine smell of her body that strawberry scent of her dark curly hair. He still remembers the luxuriant soft & silky feel of her skin on his rugged manly though inhuman hands. Tracing through her has skin had sent fire running all over his otherwise cold body that night.

And unbidden in his mind came as a tempest the memories of the most beautiful night in his entire 200+ years of existence.

Friends tomorrow I'll try to update the next chapter which is only half done. The next chappy will deal with some flashbacks which will be written in red. Do tell me how it was. TC. Goodnight. 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Sniggy..!!!!
Awsome..!!



will edit with smilies in a while ..!! DO NOT QUOTE wen i finish i will cooment saying comment updated
Edited by tiger_lily - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow I loved the update. 👏 Ayush is so naughty.

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