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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 1

A beautiful garden full of sunshine nd grasses wid pretty flowers pia is enjoying the sun rays touching her soft skin. She is admiring the sunlight and the world full of light wen suddenly everything turns dark the sun she loved was gone the place has nw turned dark she was standing in a dense forest nothing could be seen her world which was full of light has nw suddenly turned dark wen she hears sum one coming towards her..

PIA: AHHH!!!!!

ARNAB: relax pia its me.. r u ok???

Pia: ya dad m f9.. good morning

Arnab: good morning pia.. seems u again had nightmare??

Pia: ya dad!!! The same dream is haunting me for past 10 yrs.

Arnab: dnt think much abt it get ready its ur 1st day in clg.

Pia: yaa !!! ill just come

( pia takes quick shower nd changes into black sleeve less top nd jeans applies her gloss nd kajal takes her car which was gifted to her by arnab nd leaves for clg.. as she was new to the place she did nt knew the route for mount clg so wid the help of the map she finally reached the clg as she ntered everyone was staring at her , her angelic beauty her perfect face.. boys were droolin over her)

Misha: hey hii!!!1 I have never seen u here ur new??

Pia: ya actually I have been studying in pune nd nw hav come back to stay wid my dad.

Misha: ur dad?? U mean ur dad stays here dats good so wats ur name??

Pia: m pia, pia dobrial.

Misha: omg ur arnab uncles daughter v r family frds . m misha jaiswal.

Pia: dats gr8 I think v gonna be good frds.

( kabir, tracker nd angad enters)

Kabir: hey mish!! Kya ho raha hai nd whose this beautiful girl??

Misha: hey line marna band kar ok she is arnab uncles daughter pia. Abhi abhi pune se aayi hai

Kabir: I never knew arnab uncle had such a beautiful daughter hi pia m kabir.

Pia: hi

Ruhi: hii pia m ruhi agar tumhe clg k kisi bhi ladke k bare mein jaana hona to tum muje bata dena ill giv u his full info.

Angad: stop it ya ruhi ladko k siwa tumhe koi dikhta nahi hai kya waise pia m angad.

Pia: nice meeting u all

( all of them leave for their class as they all enter everyone is shocked to see pia misha nd pia sit together. )

Misha(pointing towards the door): nd here comes the raichands.

(pia,ruhi,angad nd kabir turn around to watch dem)

Ruhi: I dnt get this raichands they r so weird, they always be together nd never interact with other students. Bt mish aaj koi to missing hai yaar ..

Misha: kaha koi missing hai sab to hai archa, alman, sasha and akash and and and???? Haan yaar koi to missing hai bt kaun ???

Angad: abhay missing hai guys.

Pia: whose abhay??

Ruhi: clg ka sabse dashing nd handsome guy or I should say handsome guy of the world ( saying this ruhi was all lost in abhays thought)

Misha: girls r mad behind him bt he never dates anyone .

Pia: o I c. bt aisa q?

Kabir: qk use lagta hai k koi bhi ladki usk layak nahi hai.. pata nahi kya sochta hai apne bare mein .

( raichands siting in the corner smiles as they can here their convo although they were speaking too softly.. and abhay enters the class pia and abhay see each other bt abhay avoids her contact nd joins his siblings. Pia is staring at his perfect look and abhay trying hard nt to meet her eyes bt ends up looking into her eyes her angelic face. ( abhiya bg starts) )

Archa: she smells good.

Akash( giving her confirmation look): she does.

Abhay (looking at dem wid angry look): stop it guys.

Archa: seems bro is interested in the new girl.

( hearing this abhay gets disturbed and thinks y is he standing for a human. Bt she had something in her which was driving him crazy. Whereas even pia never felt so deep for someone. She was lost in his hypnotic blue eyes. Whereas archa knew that they were meant to be together for ever.)

Abhay( hearing her thought nd givin her stern look): will u stop dat archa??

Archa : wat did I do?

Abhay: u kno it well sis.

Alman ( feeling the anxiousness of abhay) : bro archa is right.

Abhay: stop it!!!

( mam enters the class)

Mam: good morning students b4 we start wid the lecture( pointing towards pia) I want u to introduce urself to the class.

( somewhr in his death heart abhay wanted to kno abt the girl)

Pia: m pia dobrial I hav been studying in pune bt nw hav returned here to complete my studies. ( and the lecture continues. As the bell rings everyone moves out and pia along wid misha, ruhi, angad nd kabir moves towards cafeteria. While raichand r still sitting in the class)

Archa: bro think abt it!!!

Abhay: archa r u out of ur mind… I m nt attracted towards her ( in his mind he thinks may be he does nd 4 d 1st tym he lying to archa)

( abhay leaves frm the class)

Akash: let him take his own decision. But muje lagta hai he has started developing feeling for her. Nd dats fainally a good sign afterall he has found sum1 afte 300 yrs.

Sasha: will u shut up akash. I dnt understand wats wrng wid u all ?? she is a human it can prove dangerous for our survival!!!

Akash: c'mmon swtheart wat if she is human ??? temme one thing hav u ever seen abhay staring at a girl wid eyes full of feelings u can say emotional feeling.

Alman: akash is right sash and I hav felt love feeling in him.

Archa: I think v shuld discuss it later nw lets go. ( all of dem leave for parking lot)

Misha: pia apne bare mein kuch batao I mean arnab uncle to itne saalo se yahi rehte hai bt tumhe kabhi dehradun mein nahi dekha.

Pia: actually jab mein 1st mein thi tab dad ne apna business dehradun mein shuru kiya mein pune mein hi rehna chahti thi to I was staying in pune wid smita aunty she used to take care of me. Aur ab dad wanted me to come back nd stay wid him so mein wapas aa gayi.

Kabir: dats intresting. To tumhara koi bf hai??

Pia: yes!!!!

( abhay was standing at the corner nd hearing it all he was heartbroken hearing pia has a bf!!!)

CHAPTER 1 ENDS

PRECAP: RAICHAND FAMILY DISCUSSING ABT PIA.

THANKS TO ALL FOR THE LOVELY COMMENTS DAT ACCTUALLY MADE ME WRITE 1ST CHAPTER.. DO POINT OUT MY MISTAKES .

Love u all

shafaq

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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Nice update shafaq loved it thanx for pm
Edited by strawberryrashu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
hey..i loved it..what a fab update..but u knw while reading this..i was remembering twilight..dont mind ha...but yes...u wrote beautifully...plz update soon..thanks for pm...
Edited by peehu24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pm me too loved your chapter 1.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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S.U.P.E.R.B Start ,
loved it
awww. . Abhiya eyelocks ! Wow!
i always wanted to see abhiya in a lil twilight mode!
Really nice. .
Thanks for the pm & wonderful update,
continue soon
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
dat was a very nice update dear!!!
perfectly written!!!
reli loved d soft flow of d story!!!
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: peehu24

hey..i loved it..what a fab update..but u knw while reading this..i was remembering twilight..dont mind ha...but yes...u wrote beautifully...plz update soon..thanks for pm...

thanks dii ..m nt dat good in writing FF so hav to think alot... i will try to make it diff
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: sunflower52

pm me too loved your chapter 1.

thanks 😳 I will PM u 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shafaq_abhiya

thanks dii ..m nt dat good in writing FF so hav to think alot... i will try to make it diff


hey..u are good...and lil twilight was needed...continue writing as u do...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: I-love-Roses

Nice update! Continue soon.

thanks alot 😳

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