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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok before you guys throw ande and tamatar on me let me clear that no way I'm bashing Alina or calling her anything less than beautiful. She is a gorgeous lady and looked every inch of that. Frankenstein here i have used as when we do something with good intentions but turns out to be wrong. Just a thought after seeing Piya today. Yeah...thats about it. And yes ande, tamatar, dande sab do but do comment please! :P
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So this is how Mr. Victor must have felt at that time. Looking at your own beautiful creation gone all wrong! I thought as I gazed at Alina standing there looking beautiful in the red dress blushing over the compliments showered on her. My own Frankenstein.

I gritted my teeth as someone whispered about how perfect Abhay and Alina looked together.

Abhay and Alina? No! What have I done? I have given birth to my worst nightmare. All my life I had waited for you and now…now I can't let you just fly away.

The atmosphere grew hotter as Abhay and Alina walked to the dance floor. Her face flushed as Abhay placed a light hand on her waist.

I quickly walked out of the room as my ears grew pink and hot tears stung my eyes.

Why? Why did I ever give her that stupid makeover in the first place? Urgh! I wish I had never done that.

And Abhay? How could he do that? I thought he loved me.

Without warning a silent tear rolled down my cheek. Brushing it away I begin pacing back to the college. He loves me I know. And he better be prepared with an answer for all this.

Abhay Raichand, I'm not going to let you go that easily. If I can fight the test of times and memories to get to you, I will battle my destiny to be with you.

You have seen my love but that's just the beginning. You are mine Abhay. I thought defensively as Abhay swirled a petite Alina around.

The faith wavered there for a moment but I stayed put. Even as Abhay and Alina finished the dance and moved away from the awing and envying crowd.

As Abhay reached my side and in his eyes I saw the answer. His lips twitched at the corner as a smile played on mine.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it... this is wonderful..
happy to see Alina happy..hope Abhay Piya too find their happiness soon,ie with each other,and Alina stays good and sweet like she is.. :)))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome 👏👏👏👏
hope piya tells alina soon that abhay cannot be her's b/c he belongs someone else and that is none other then me piya jaiswal/dobrial.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it the way u have put the piya feeling 😳...so true she did to make over to alina to see with abhay...she helped alina & painful to see abhay with her ...Loved ur post 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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u really expresses pia feelling in right way... hope pia understands abhay eeverything goes f9... good post
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jz4amrit

loved it... this is wonderful..
happy to see Alina happy..hope Abhay Piya too find their happiness soon,ie with each other,and Alina stays good and sweet like she is.. :)))


Thank you sweets! 😳

I hope so too! Really keeping my fingers crossed for that.
Well lets see how Alina takes it. Thats something i fear.

Thanks again for commenting! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww! I was feeling sooo jealous of Alina aaj...Pia kam thi jo woh bhi aa gayi! But then...Pia ...felt bad for her for the first time. 😆 You've expressed her feelings so well Anu! <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: amail1601

Awww! I was feeling sooo jealous of Alina aaj...Pia kam thi jo woh bhi aa gayi! But then...Pia ...felt bad for her for the first time. 😆 You've expressed her feelings so well Anu! <3


Adi!!! 😃

I understand. Ek Pia nahi jaan chodti thi ke ab Alina bhi agai. humph.
But dont worry, Piya akeli kaafi hai us keliye. 😆😆😆

Yeah...i dont know. i didnt exactly felt bad for her. but the first thought that came to my mind was...Frankenstein! LOL! sachi. Piya ke expressions were like shit what have i done! :P

Thank you sooo much! Always feels good to your comments. 😳

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